Disintegrating Integrity...

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by Vember, Nov 2, 2003.

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  1. Vember

    Vember New Member

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    thanx, imma reply on some other poems and get aqqointed (however you spell it) with the people in this forum better, but thanx to all who gave feedback
    test
  2. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    Yo if you want to get better acquainted with the people you should check out the "poetique intercourse" forum, you can discuss shit and ask questions there, the poetry realm is for poems only....

    just to give ya a heads up

    much love

    peace
    test
  3. mavrik...

    mavrik... Lyrically Transparent ...

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    another keystyle type drop ...
    wordplay and flow was nice.
    fav. line was "the shadows are sippin up champagne" ..
    mental imagery eh.
    test
  4. Vember

    Vember New Member

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    no doubt, thanx fo the reply marvik, but wha you mean "keystyle type drop"?
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  5. Botox

    Botox 3rd Degree Burnz

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    Wasnt feelin this...
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  6. Spotted Owl

    Spotted Owl Soft n Furry

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    i thot this was ill, nice wording and it all, good emotion shown thru it wit deep meanings, really good

    holla
    test
  7. Vember

    Vember New Member

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