Dilz - Underground Universe contest entry

Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by FxTDiilz, Aug 10, 2013.

  1. FxTDiilz

    FxTDiilz Member

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    Have a listen, lyrics are in songs description. Winner of contest gets a collab with Street Light.

    test
  2. NTfrody

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    Your presence and delivery conflicts with the track in my opinion. It's hard for me to appreciate the overall song but I think you have some cadence issues at some points because it seems you're waiting for the track to catch up with you. I think you'd sound better on some old school tracks, this one was too mainstream for you.
    test
  3. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    NTFrody is on point wit his reply , I agree
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  4. FxTDiilz

    FxTDiilz Member

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    Yea bro I don't usually fuck with a beat like this really but it was the best one there was for the contest entry lol, had to ride with their beats so yea, was cool trying something different though. thanks for the feed bro I appreciate it
    test

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