Dilz feat. Eedee - When Clouds Gather

Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by FxTDiilz, May 1, 2013.

  1. FxTDiilz

    FxTDiilz Member

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  2. Mr.Crimson

    Mr.Crimson New Member

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    Man you gotta ride the shyt outta the beat...You tryna be lyrical but ya cadences aren't matching up with the beat at times...
    Work on that and watch ya shyt flourish real talk...cuz you got the multis going so timing is key....embrace the beat don't race the beat lol
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  3. FxTDiilz

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    Yea bro, I know lol. I only started rapping at the start of the year and this was once of my first songs along with the other one you commented on, I was still learning how to ride the beat and shit.. People would tell me "Your off beat" and shit and I was like not even lol. But I realise I was, so I took some time out from recording and shit and I've just been perfecting my craft and I feel I've gotten 100x better.. So I hit up Fv's swizZz for a collab and that'll be out soon
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  4. NTfrody

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    You should avoid using words with more than 2 syllables until you've mastered your breath control and cadence.
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  5. d0mniscient

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    there you go again hahaha, get to work bruh, you post something.
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  6. NTfrody

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    You're a sad troll. You don't even have the decency to post feedback when you're trolling in someone else's thread...
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  7. d0mniscient

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    you don't even have the decency to post your shitty raps, rofl
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  8. NTfrody

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    My name is easy enough to google.
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