Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by Taiyamo Denku, Feb 5, 2006.
thanks for peeping peeps
not bad, alot better than your random metaphor type ish, good luck on the HHG contest
You annunciate/delivery is dope fam. Everything is accentuated and crisp..nice shit.
I'm feelin how your voice really stands out on this beat. This is very bumpable!
Solid work here. Total package.
tHANKS FOR PEEPING AND YA FEEDBACKL PEEPS... appreciated
yea agreed you sounded ill on this beat.
its like a perfect mix, raw and grimey + semicommercial beat = illy.
i think the chorus kinda brings it down tho.
i think you could've for surrre come up with somethin better imo.
but the verses are sick.
keep own it.
thanks for peeping
lyrically the song is great. I have no complaints really.the hooks nice,flow is on point.i'm not feeling the beat at all,but you did your thing to it.
damn this beat is hype as fuck, feelin the lyrics on this shit, nothing that's hard hitting but its more about the flow on this shit and braggin, flow is hard although i wish somethin you would've kept it movin instead of pausing, only a couple times tho....not really feelin the hook too much seems a tad bit off like the all over the map part seems like you hesitated a millisecond too late on that..but yeah str8 shit
thanks for peeping... elevate this
damn shit is dope man... nothing to critic... shits on point
nice joint dawg...
check it out yo: http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=962157
Beat is iight, not bad.. not really my typa shit though.
Delivery is nice, polished. Flow is pretty nice too. Lyrics are decent. Hook is coo.
Pretty good shit, you can definitly tell that you're polished, jus wasn't my steeze at all really. Definitly got skill though.
Get some time, check out my shit.
DAMN dude the crunk change is noiiicee you need to do more of these for real. this is a real banger. im downloading this shit.
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