Deep Pocketz vs. Alt-Mode

Discussion in 'Emcee Battle Area' started by Deep Pocketz, May 14, 2009.

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  1. Deep Pocketz

    Deep Pocketz Writer of Sorts

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    10 lines
    due today
    first to 5
    3-0 = ko
    No feeding off verses...Gl
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  2. alt-mode

    alt-mode E4

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    Check, check.
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  3. Deep Pocketz

    Deep Pocketz Writer of Sorts

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    Listen dude
    you might be a marine but your surely not invincible
    cuz from this view..
    your sentences get boos while I get more aahs than dentists do
    This kids a fool, stupid tool, i bruise with views I harvest within
    What's the ultimate oxy moron? Handing a jarhead a pen
    pardon my french bitch, but you fuckers are known to be dumb
    you attempting to be clever...
    is as effective as tryin' to kill your enemy by throwin' your gun
    you already know that I won, but i'll humor you before I take the win
    the way my punches are drillin' you it's like boot camp all over again
    only this time, your chances of survival idol that of a goose egg
    especially when your body touches roots like havin a bad toothache
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  4. Halloween Jack

    Halloween Jack Heavens Demon

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    look
    you're a broke faggot. this herb knows he don't get cream
    "check, check" wasn't my sign-in.. it's what you're expecting every 1st and 15th
    your girl is dying for attention f'real
    cuz DP can't satisfy..
    ..so ^ that's what she recieves to pay the rent and the bills
    this wench is ill.. lettin' hard cacks slide in his lips
    so ya avy's not the first time you've had large sacks gripped tight in ya fists
    this guy ain't rich, he scrounges garbage for food, man
    so of course you've got deep pocketz..
    you can only carry so many bottles with two hands
    i'm rude, fam. you should've left me alone, b
    now they tryna ID a corpse with deep pocketz of flesh carved outta its dome piece.
    howl at me...
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  5. Ja¢k £an†e®n

    Ja¢k £an†e®n Spirit of Vengeance

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    damn.. i kinda thought this was a vote worthy battle.
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  6. Deep Pocketz

    Deep Pocketz Writer of Sorts

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  7. Tradish

    Tradish illest alive

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    vote-deep pockets

    he has better concepts imo.
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  8. Deep Pocketz

    Deep Pocketz Writer of Sorts

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    Nice Breakdown.
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  9. Chase Murda

    Chase Murda hostile enviroment

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    deep pocketz u a fag yo
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  10. -Fac3-

    -Fac3- Will punch the shit out u

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    ^^People who suck at writing in all aspects..

    Shut the fuck up...

    Clown...
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  11. Chase Murda

    Chase Murda hostile enviroment

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    bitch,,u dont want no problems calm down before u get humiliated on this battle forums..cock sucka
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  12. -Fac3-

    -Fac3- Will punch the shit out u

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    lmao, have you had a rbl match where the opponent showed and you DIDN'T get ko'ed????? I didn't think so.
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  13. Ja¢k £an†e®n

    Ja¢k £an†e®n Spirit of Vengeance

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    let's take this elsewhere fella's...
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  14. leprien27

    leprien27 X'ist in Circum_Reference

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    vote = holloween jack
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  15. excedrin

    excedrin THE 8-BIT APE

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    Vote = deep pockets

    Loved the dentist line duke
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  16. Militant420

    Militant420 Original MIC Immortal

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    Deep Pockets - Held more consistent form
    Better punches
    just over all a better verse
    Vote = Deep Pockets
    Still

    Semper Fi Marine.
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  17. J. Hyphy

    J. Hyphy New Member

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    Weak Drop Really.Bad Disses And Weak Punches.Opener Was Kinda Funny Jus Weak.Prolly Could Have Been Better If Alot Of His Lines Were Worded Different.The Last Bar Especially Cause It Seemed A Little Forced..

    Ok Drop.Opening Few bars Were Comical Especially The First.Nice Disses Until Around The Last 2 Bars.Sorta Fell Off From That Point On.That Last Bar Was A Little Stretched And Kinda Weak.

    One-Sided Battle Tho Not By A Whole Lot.The First Emcee Dropped Far Too Weak To Really Do Anything.DP Didnt Throw Anything Really Impressive Or Worth Noting But A Lot Of It Had To Do With Wording.A Few Bars Could Have Been Much Better If He'd Re-Worded & Maybe Delivered Them Differently...Jack Came With Some Niice Disses.Def Had Me Laughin With The Opening Bar.Was Some Funny Shit.He Kinda Fell Off Towards The End But He Was Consistent.Jus Wasnt Very Strong Wit It In The End.He Took This One Tho.


    v/ Jack
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  18. Nebz

    Nebz R.I.P. Point Game

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    VOTE=NONE OF YOU


    [look]

    *Exits thread Left
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  19. x-code rabannie

    x-code rabannie New Member

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    ok i co-sign.they should rather be on their grind,its not hopeless.one day when the good die young they can be stars @ 90.
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  20. Poetic Concept

    Poetic Concept New Member

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    Jack/v

    Best Lines )(only decent line) (still stretched n forced)

    "you might be a marine but your surely not invincible
    cuz from this view..
    your sentences get boos while I get more aahs than dentists do

    Best Line (starter line really forced to add emphasis on punch...spend a little more time on your set up line...ur punch hit but the set-up was really forced)

    "I'm rude, fam. you should've left me alone, b
    now they tryna ID a corpse with deep pocketz of flesh carved outta its dome piece."
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