Deep az a poem.

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  1. mr.redeyez

    mr.redeyez Member

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    I shed tear's when i reminisce
    on my childhood year's,when i was innocent
    now i'm guilty,my slate no longer clean
    it'z filthy, my fate is an eternal dream
    or should i say nightmare, do u feel me?
    They tryed to kill me, set me a blaze
    send me to eternal flame'z,i laugh when they pray
    i remember back in tha day'z,hood full of real niggahz
    now half of em fake,word'z of a real niggah
    kill or be killed niggah, wake'n bake
    start ya day wit yo head on straight
    or get ate like steak'n shake
    if u feel nobody love you,fukk em' they can hate
    becuz' talk is cheap,yo job stay silent make em' pay
    black glovez,black bootz,nobody knew ya, without a trace
    black suit, black dress,hallelujah, amazin grace
    shed a tear, for tha lost soul visit tha wake
    next,out of sight,out of mind make sure yo visual faint
    side effectz make cause mental an physical pain........

    Like dat niggah. Hahaha ducez datz game ma niggah be-ez.
    test
  2. dsp2k5

    dsp2k5 Dime Sack Pimp

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    This definitely had its moments, but I lile the last few bars or so the best homie. Nice flow, this was a nice read homie ... keep em comming ... pm me for a collab if u get time, we can put that fire on em.
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