Dear Real Man Maker

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by BLACKANGEL, Mar 17, 2009.

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  1. BLACKANGEL

    BLACKANGEL Angelic Professor

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    Dear Real Man Maker,

    Please tell me

    do they make them like him any more…

    A pinch of lust, a dash of Thug, and a whole lot of love…

    I want the model that comes with the timberland boots, with them pearly whites

    He doesn’t need a gold tooth….

    Can I get the one who doesn’t shutter when I talk about coping a pair of Gucci boots….

    You know the one that replies “Babe It ‘s cool get two”…

    Ooh Wee… The one that makes me sweat

    The one that takes me there… and then whispers I’m not finish yet…

    The one that walks out the door calmly when I begin to bitch and moan

    But returns before night fall and gives it to me all night long…

    you know how he starts kissing me gently on my lips then skips right on down to my honey color hips

    Then he uses those big, strong, beautiful, brown sugar color hands to spread open my thighs…

    Then he takes it nice and slow until I arrive

    And then I return the favor 10 times fold because he’s my King….

    I know

    too much information, but I just had to let you know

    So please tell me you still have that model

    I believe that model number is triple seven(777)-(dash)Diamond-(dash)Ring…

    “360 degrees in all that he do, you won’t be disappointed in this model because he’s “THE TRUTH””

    The truth he is and the truth he be… I never thought he would be taken from me…

    But I know he’s not the last with all that heart and soul…

    a spirit so bright it out shines the suns glow…

    with that stare from them old eyes showing me everything he knows

    I’ve been trying to replace him but he seems out of stock,

    I get more models that are broken than not

    You know the ones that live at home with mom, or ones that tell lies,

    ones that are cheap, the ones with no zeal for life,

    ones that are not too easy on the eyes,

    and dare I say the ones who are more women than I

    that bitch, moan, and cry…

    So Real Man Maker if you please can you restock that model

    because

    I’m in need of a

    Real Man


    A poem by Blackangel copyrighted March 16th, 2009
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  2. mr.rip

    mr.rip New Member

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    That was so deep B. A. Just click your heels 3 times and say there's no man like rip haha and I'll appear lol
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  3. Poetic Concept

    Poetic Concept New Member

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    Haha...this was smooth, I dig some women want everything...Good Luck
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  5. BLACKANGEL

    BLACKANGEL Angelic Professor

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    lol RIP you are crazy... thanks for the love... poetic concept and truffle thanks for reading my poem and thanks for the feed back
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  6. mr.rip

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    well you and me go back like Cadillac and hairlines use to love me some candy.
    you need to go holla at my trigger happy joint.
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  7. mr madness

    mr madness Silly Bitch Say Whaaaaaat

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    Pretty good

    I guess I gotta go home and check what model I am
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    mr madness.....LOL.....your sig is hilarious!

    P.A.T.R.I.O.Ts.......LOL
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  9. SIZZLA

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    damn girl... youve gotten better with time. i mean, you always on some love shit but this? this was just a well written good read... bless


    forgot you were from the bus! i have a son that lives in Reynalsburg! the mom works at tjmax... she finishing her degree down there... lol small world
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  10. AkiraTheLegend

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    well....this is the most thought out and well structured (flow-wise) piece I have read i awhile...usually I don't like reading pieces like this so I am not really going to critique.

    I will say that the imagery was great. When I can picture everything I am reading without having to try I know the writer has talent.

    great drop
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  11. BLACKANGEL

    BLACKANGEL Angelic Professor

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    Mr madness...lol... yeah you might want to check that out... we dont want no broke model.... Thanks for the love

    Sizzla- you know its always a blessing to have your praise on a piece... LOL u right I am always on that LOVE shit... but what is anything without LOVE... thanks for the reply....

    AkiraTheLegend- thank you...
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  12. Killa Kaspa

    Killa Kaspa Last Of a Dyin' Breed

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    This Was Incredibly Smooth...I Think I Remember You...I Use To Come On Here

    Dear Real Woman Maker...

    Secretarial Apparel,Stockings And Pumps/
    With Rainbow Lipstick Decor,When My Cock Gettin Sucked/
    Some Would Be Lockin' It Up,Knockin It Up...House-Wifey Type Stockin It Up/
    No Sir Not I,I Need The Proper Location For Her Woman-Authentication,
    Her Credentials On Intelligence And What She Really Lookin' For In Relations/
    Indeed The Fornication Gotta Be Toe-Curlin',When I Was Ho-Swirlin' I Had 'Em All On The Flo' Crawlin'/
    Wit' A Slow Yawnin' We Had Bottles Of MO Pourin'/
    But Now I Know Your In..Willy Wonka's Slut Factory/
    Wit Ya Big Butt After Me Like A Monster Truck Smashin Sheets/
    Now I'm Lookin' For A Woman With The Class To Teach/
    The Offspring,That If You Mack Or Cheat,You Get Lost In/
    Land Of Abortions,Women Who Coke-Snortin',Hoods Rat Who Are Broke Often/
    There Will Be No Foundation,You Will Have No Morals,No Support/
    With The Loneliness Of The Pillow,The Emptiness Of The Heart/
    The Ghost In The Room,The Deadliness Of The Art Already Hits You With Sparks/
    I'll Meddle Wit' You In The Dark And Wrestle Wit' Sharks,
    So Lets Take A Rest In The Park And Save Whats Left Of My Heart/



    I USE TO POST ON HERE WAAAAAY LONG,KILLA KASPA...BACK IN DA DAYS,7,8,9 YRS AGO...I ACTUALLY MISS THIS PLACE...IM WONDERING THOUGH WHY I CANT POST NEW THREADS...HIT IT UP
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  13. BLACKANGEL

    BLACKANGEL Angelic Professor

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    Ok i'm feeling the flow... very nice..
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  14. mr.rip

    mr.rip New Member

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    lol everybody spitting at you make me want to spit something haha.
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  15. BLACKANGEL

    BLACKANGEL Angelic Professor

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    ha ha... do what you do rip... go head and spit...
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  16. Dex Lewis

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    Figures.

    lol @ a 'dash of thug'.

    These are always the women with a string of shitty relationships that put the blame on men rather than looking themselves in the mirror and rethinking the piss poor qualities they look for in men.
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  17. Persephone

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    Maybe they've been abused for so long they don't know what a healthy relationship is. Don't be so quick to judge. Besides, all men want is sex anyway. If they're gettin' it all is ok, if they're not then the woman is a bitch. Chew on that. Oh but I'm sure you're the perfect man, aren't you?
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  18. BLACKANGEL

    BLACKANGEL Angelic Professor

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    Silly of me to think that the man I wrote this poem about would still be here... Believe me if he wasnt murder 3 years ago there wouldnt even be a need for such a poem... Yes he was a thug and he would always say "Thugs have feelings too...or Thugs need love too" and yes when I wanted those $750 christian dior biker boots.. He smiled and said "Yeah you can have them" ... I loved the way he played with my 3 boys as if they were his own... I loved when he gave me words of wisdom, and how he held my hand just to cross a parking lot, how he would call me in the middle of the day just to ask what i was doing... when he knew I was working...and how he would say "You think your dick is bigger than mines uh"...lol which i did... A single mom raising 3 blk men my dick is bigger than most men... 10 years I loved and trusted Tye and in a blink of an eye he's gone...So if any man was offened by my poem...Then good!!! Because Tye to me was divinty clothe in flesh... and that goes way beyond any material item that i could ever possess

    Persephone-u r right all most men want is sex... because they dont have nothing else to offer a woman... no good conversation, no quaility time, no nothing but what they can do for you in bed... they can keep that bs...
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  19. GLOVE

    GLOVE If da GLOVE fits spit wit

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    i could be ur man i love the movie love n basketball n i listen to zap and roger
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  20. absolute zero

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    your sig is too long.
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