Dear Hip Hop....*New Joint* Jay Hu Productions

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    _RhYmEs_ Need Dope Beats??

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    Dont Rush Your Flow!!!

    Pretty decent drop from the lines i did understand. I think you need to slow that up...overall prodcutions sounds very nice. Dont force feed your bars slow it up and try and 50 cent it. LOL very nice drop will be looking for the slower post
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    eyything hot but its unclear up ya shit..
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    Listening...

    I love this beat..

    Feeling ya flow...real consistent....may be just a lil too fast for the beat...but its nice...You got some hot content...I could understand majority of it...a few lines were muffled a bit...yeah this is a fire track..all around..the only flaw is the quality, but other than that, very nice. Props...feeling the concept.

    If you got time, could you check this track out and let me know what you think
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=921729
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    ight, lets see....

    this flow isn't a bad look. i think your delivery holds it back a lil. you voice just sounds too monotinous. and it makes the flow sound robotic. str8 flowin the way you are gets a lil annoying, especially since there are no switch ups in either the monotany in your delivery, and the flow. when you stopped abrubtly, i thopught the song was over...then you started over again. that sound ackward. wow, this flow sounds sooo ackward over this beat. iono what to tell you man, this shit just felt....thrown together and sloppy. the quality wasn't bad, but the execuction on your verses was. next time, have a talk with the engineer of w/e studio your recording at (even if it's your boy's home studio) and get some input on your song before you have them record your vocals, seriously. if your gonna str8 spit, with no hook, have some variety in the flow, and vocal tone....keep at it tho fella


    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=922653

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    UMMMMMMMMM Iono What To Tell You Sonn, The Flow ?Is 100% On Point No Question. The "Abrupt" Stop Was Because I Said "All I Know Is Now That I Have Spent Some Time In This My Life's In It So...Here I go Again Whether I Win Or Lose I Will Never Stumble and Fall...." I Don't Know How That's "Abrupt" Or In Any Way Confusing but I Guess I See Where You Could Misunderstand Even Though It Was A 3 Second Gap I Really don't Know How You Coulda Thought The Song Was Completely OVER but Whatever. The Flow Was On Point Though So Iono, I think You Alone On that One. Oh Well, Thanks For The Feed I Guess.

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    track is aight ... i like the beat
    you need to put a little more emotion in your voice
    you lyrics are real and deep but you dont make me feel it
    but other than that its dope
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    werd,,,,Thanks For The Feed
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