Dear Hip Hop....*New Joint* Jay Hu Productions

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  1. Diztinkt

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  2. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    listenin ... beats aight not bad ...
    flow was on point ... but a lil unclear ...
    voice was aight I got used to it ... Nice shit actually ...
    you stay on point ... hook was pretty good ... the slip or stumble reminded me of Eminem though ....
    I like youre scheme in this Dope shit
    hit up mine

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    Diztinkt New Member

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    Thanks For The FEed, I'll Hit You Back ASAP
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    6th_plague More then meets the eye

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    Infinite Skillz R.E.A.L. Emcee

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    Ignoring your quality issues because you know what your situation is. Storytelling was cool. I'm always a fan of the real talk. Only criticism I could come up with is vocal variety. Your flow was pretty much the same throughout. You'll command more attention when you switch it up a bit whether it be your rhyme scheme or tone. Good drop though.

    Get at me.
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  6. Dice

    Dice Still One Of A Kind...

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    This is nice....

    You're voice and flow match real nice, you locked yourself on this beat and kept on it the whole way.

    I stand tall and run for the long haul...

    Keep that mentality homie, you're doing good things

    Return the listen

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=915997

    PEACE

    Dice One

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    Bump for Some More Replies Please,,,,All REsponses Have Been Returned So Just Drop Links
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    Jesus,,,,Shit Falls fAst On This Site BUMMMMP
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    ceson ....Ceson Wordz

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    ya flow is sick...delivery is pretty good..BUT a problem is ya vocals r low...its kinda hard to hear n understand u in this...if u turn those up this joint would b illness...quality is kinda bad at first but i got used to it n didnt mind it....props on this....nice joint

    returnt he feedback..peep my thread
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    Beat is I always liked this Mobb Deep beat but I never recorded shit to it

    Your flow is on point and it boosted your delivery
    Mic presence is nice too, lyrics are good I felt some of it
    I didn't feel some of it because I probably heard similar shit to it
    I personally think you had spit too fast because some of your words seemed mumbled
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    That's Cool Dawg, If You Listen Wit Headphones Or Somethin Maybe It'll Be Easier To Catch some Of The Words You Missed Cuz I Haven't Gotten Any Complaints About My Flow Bein Too Fast Before. Thanks For The Feed.
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    Sick-Sense the muthafin ruggratt!

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    This beat is hott, love this shtt. Good choice..

    Your flow is very on key, but it does seem kinda rush at some point. Maybe its your enounciation (s/p) that makes kinda hard to understand. Yeah, you really need to slow it down. How the fuck are you even spitting this? how many punch ins did you do? must have one hell of a breath ha. Anywais..Lyrics is very ill.. im really feeling the words man. Delivery is nice. Overall.. a very ill way to flip a dope concept. good shtt.

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    It Was Actually Only 1 Punch, The Beginning Was All One Take And Then Toward The End Where I Let The Vocals Drop And The "Whether I Win Or Lose, I Will Never Stumble..." That Was The Second Take. Thanks For The Love Money, Appreciated, I'll Hit You Back Now.
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