Daydream

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  1. Ace the Prophet

    Ace the Prophet A Prophet to the Game

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    Haha...another track for my girl. To the I Don't Deserve You Instrumental by Lloyd Banks. You know what it is with me by now

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    [chorus]
    Now this is all I see when I open up my eyes
    The love I knew I’d find that could give me all the highs
    Just by lookin’ in her face, sayin’ Baby, you’re amazing
    I swear you’re like a daydream

    Cuz baby you’re perfect…
    I know that you’re worth it…
    You’re just my perfect
    Daydream!


    [Verse 1]
    I let my eyes close…just for a second
    Thought of a time when my life would be perfected
    The sun was bright enough to blind everything I saw
    ‘Cept the Goddess of my dreams walkin’ on without a flaw
    A bright white dress...petals on the floor
    A fresh bouquet of flowers, such I look I can adore
    A smile that had frozen everybody who had seen
    But her eyes say she’s mine, love I’m livin’ such a dream!
    Heh…and this is what she knows
    The one she’s always wanted is the one who’s standin’ close
    The one she’s walkin towards, the one she is assured
    Will keep on by her side through her life forever more
    And as she’s getting closer she knows it all is true
    When I give her all my love and I say “It’s all for you”
    And everything shines through my heart that’s in the ring
    Then I started wakin’ up and no part of it’s a dream

    [chorus]
    See this is all I see when I open up my eyes
    The love I knew I’d find that could give me all the highs
    Just by lookin’ in her face, sayin’ Baby, you’re amazing
    I swear you’re like a daydream

    Cuz baby you’re perfect…
    I know that you’re worth it…
    You’re just my perfect
    Daydream!


    [Verse 2]
    Let it be just for the moment, let it be just for the day
    Let run into the night, let it be when I awake
    Let it be what I believe, let it be what I can take
    When I lead you down the path where we can just runaway
    It can be all that we see, It can be all that we know
    We can do it real fast, or we can just take it slow
    Let’s just keep a tight grip, promise we won’t let it go
    We can keep it young forever and just never ever grow!
    Heh…Cuz I’m just too in love
    It’s anything you want, baby, I can’t do enough
    Just think of all the places and other destinations
    Where we’ll try to fly into without hesitation
    First class plane ticket, dinner reservations
    Moonlit beach house, endless relaxation
    Anything to show you that everything is great
    And you can have it all by the second you awake

    [chorus]
    Cuz this is all I see when I open up my eyes
    The love I knew I’d find that could give me all the highs
    Just by lookin’ in her face, sayin’ Baby, you’re amazing
    I swear you’re like a daydream

    Cuz baby you’re perfect…
    I know that you’re worth it…
    You’re just my perfect
    Daydream!


    [Verse 3]
    Let’s just keep our eyes closed, let it take us over
    Fill it with your perfume and all of its aromas
    Match it with the dress that you purchased just for Vegas
    Keep it comin’ with the laugh I swear is so contagious
    Switch it up to stunning wearin’ nothin’ but a jersey
    Killin’ with them looks, gotta tell ya to have mercy
    Put it all together and it’s nothin’ but amazing
    Like God I love ya baby, you’re just such a daydream​
    test
  2. IAmBenT

    IAmBenT Eat a dick, faggot

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    hey man fantaaaaaastic flow I realy like the idea of putting the instrumental cuz it helps me get where you could put emphasis and really give all the details. I like this right here, real smooth type loverboy shit. Damn i gotta learn how to write a hook like this!!! lol nice shit
    test
  3. the omega man

    the omega man so, it goes

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    yeah great flow. Lyric structure definitely shows skill. A bit basic in poetic appeal but definitely recites well as a good love track. Good job dude
    test
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