"David" Sin O's new mixtape track, drop links!

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  1. psomonkey

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  2. Emation

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    ut oh the down and out beat, this instrumental is hot. This shit's real, flow and the delivery is really dope. The lyrics are deep and very personal I can tell. I'm feelin this, your from So-Cal too? That's dope brother, much respect and keep doing your thang. Maybe sometime we can hop on something together, stay up and keep elavatin.

    return the love fam: http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1095657
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  4. psomonkey

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    good beat choice... lyrics r on point... could've touched up the flow a bit n added some more adlibs or dubs to fill out the track, but other than that it was cool.. definitely feelin' it fam..

    return the luv when u get a chance..

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1095783
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    thanks yall, I hit'em
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    Throwed Azz Shyt Pimp....You wreck That Track....Real Talk....I liked the track and how you attack that motherfucker with you rapping style....You was all over that track.....Nice Though.....


    Check Out My Shyt.....Thanks....

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1095806
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    always loved this beat myself.......

    ya flow is sick son. your voice reminds me of the way people describe mine lol. lyricals r vicious. i dont say this often, but im thoroughly impressed. AND u in Southern Cali? shit get @ me pimp.....

    scream @ me:
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1096223
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  10. psomonkey

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    yeah I injured my nose from sniffin to much dope lol

    coo thanks for tha replies yall, Ima hit yah links
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    Vocals sound alright, could blend in with the beat better though.
    Delivery and mic presence is good. Flowing pretty nicely throughout the track.
    Had some good concepts and rhymes. Cool track overall.

    Hit me backkk
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1096843
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  13. psomonkey

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    fasho, I hit it, uppin this bitch
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  14. reazson

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    beats bangin, of course...

    feelin the raw emotion, voice is nice too but I feel like your puttin too much emphasis on some of your words, throws off the flow a lot...rhyme scheme is the strongest part, feelin all the multis you put into this..it really helps it...overall I couldn't see myself listening to this again, but then again I don't really feel mixtape tracks

    get at me
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1096807
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  15. Auditory

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    this sounds dope. Maybe i been playing gta 4 too much but i feel like i could hear this on the rap station on that game. straight spittin, no hook. i like shit like that. Though by about the half way point i did kind of start to lose interest in the song to be honest. Not sure how to fix that maybe a hook or bridge or something. or even switch up with the beat. keep grindin though homie
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  16. psomonkey

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    good looks brah, uppin
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    I do like this beat hmmmm flow is well on point, no complaints there

    lyrics are deep anti socialist with an open fist yeah like that line. delivery is on point, hot track overall buddy keep it up
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    thanks brah, uppin
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    i liked the track, good beat
    voice is kinda generic but lyrics and presence make up for it lots
    best part of the song is the presence
    reminds me of some rappers from halifax (im from canada) like spesh k or classified
    cool stufff, keep spittin
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    thanks brah
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