Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by psomonkey, May 4, 2008.
gimmi some replies and ill return the favor
ut oh the down and out beat, this instrumental is hot. This shit's real, flow and the delivery is really dope. The lyrics are deep and very personal I can tell. I'm feelin this, your from So-Cal too? That's dope brother, much respect and keep doing your thang. Maybe sometime we can hop on something together, stay up and keep elavatin.
return the love fam: http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1095657
Duuuude glad to see ya back around.
Dope like always man, delivery is as strong as it always is. Def get back with me man, aim or otherwise and hit up my track.
good beat choice... lyrics r on point... could've touched up the flow a bit n added some more adlibs or dubs to fill out the track, but other than that it was cool.. definitely feelin' it fam..
return the luv when u get a chance..
thanks yall, I hit'em
Throwed Azz Shyt Pimp....You wreck That Track....Real Talk....I liked the track and how you attack that motherfucker with you rapping style....You was all over that track.....Nice Though.....
Check Out My Shyt.....Thanks....
dope shit man
heres my link
i think you are a good rapper
sounds like you have injured your nose
but yeah thats the way she goes sometimes
welcome to my world pal
always loved this beat myself.......
ya flow is sick son. your voice reminds me of the way people describe mine lol. lyricals r vicious. i dont say this often, but im thoroughly impressed. AND u in Southern Cali? shit get @ me pimp.....
scream @ me:
yeah I injured my nose from sniffin to much dope lol
coo thanks for tha replies yall, Ima hit yah links
Vocals sound alright, could blend in with the beat better though.
Delivery and mic presence is good. Flowing pretty nicely throughout the track.
Had some good concepts and rhymes. Cool track overall.
Hit me backkk
fasho, I hit it, uppin this bitch
beats bangin, of course...
feelin the raw emotion, voice is nice too but I feel like your puttin too much emphasis on some of your words, throws off the flow a lot...rhyme scheme is the strongest part, feelin all the multis you put into this..it really helps it...overall I couldn't see myself listening to this again, but then again I don't really feel mixtape tracks
get at me
this sounds dope. Maybe i been playing gta 4 too much but i feel like i could hear this on the rap station on that game. straight spittin, no hook. i like shit like that. Though by about the half way point i did kind of start to lose interest in the song to be honest. Not sure how to fix that maybe a hook or bridge or something. or even switch up with the beat. keep grindin though homie
good looks brah, uppin
I do like this beat hmmmm flow is well on point, no complaints there
lyrics are deep anti socialist with an open fist yeah like that line. delivery is on point, hot track overall buddy keep it up
thanks brah, uppin
i liked the track, good beat
voice is kinda generic but lyrics and presence make up for it lots
best part of the song is the presence
reminds me of some rappers from halifax (im from canada) like spesh k or classified
cool stufff, keep spittin
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