daddy don't go

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  1. Hananward

    Hananward Hananthemakavelirevolutionary

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    Daddy don't go, mommies problems are gone
    And I know that you've been finding it hard,
    To work out
    Daddy don't go!
    Daddy you promised me please.

    Chourus

    All alone In a. Broken home mommies upset and her daddy's gone.
    What would you do?

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    Mommy won't talk there's tears in her eyes, it kills me inside to see how they fight.
    There's a knock on the door
    This is the end mom knows she can't do it no more
    That lady's here to take
    Me away. I scream "no"

    Mommy says "hush everything will be ok"

    I run to mommies arms and say I don't wanna go. She wipes my tears and says
    I tried its all I want you to know.

    Never got to see daddy again
    Moved on to a new life
    Barely. Remember him.
    But my mamas last words still stuck in my head
    "I tried real hard to keep you, you know I did.

    Chourus
    All alone In a broken home
    Mommies upset and her daddy's gone
    What would you do?
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  2. mr.redeyez

    mr.redeyez Member

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    I like it, I love real life rap good job ma
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  3. Hananward

    Hananward Hananthemakavelirevolutionary

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    Oh my god thank you!!!! <3
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  4. Chase Murda

    Chase Murda hostile enviroment

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    U got skill no doubt i think we should do a colab verse
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  5. Hananward

    Hananward Hananthemakavelirevolutionary

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    Oh my god dude that'd be awesome!!!
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