Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by Red304, Apr 15, 2006.
thx man dunno y peeps sleepin
1 more time bump
listening..the beat is WOW bananassss lol
i like how mellow it dropped..
chorus ...goes along with the sample real..promises you make but it wouldnt last..ha thats some real talk i really feel that..
ya verses was really good..you really spitting..lyrics was good ..ya flow was flawless ..im really digging this joint...this is very hot..
i gotta give this an 8/10
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forgot the link
good lookin cuzzin
dacypha is always cookin up some good shit... -puts headphones on-
solid sample.... beats comin in....
nice, never heard you before. you sound really familiar though. sounds like you definately have a found style... no hook? unless im retarded. nice lyrics though. women are bitches. very solid shit... i'mma have to peep more stuff off your soundclick.
good lookin verbz na theres a hook homie juss gotta listen its right at the goodbye sample i left ya feed homie and thx 4 the love holla back
Hey lemme break this down..
beat is tite, imma use it later on, i had song planned, nice choice.. like the sample
quality could be better, but its str8
flow is pretty good, fell off a few times but alright
voice is interesting.. never heard nobody like this before
..got a nice presence, kept the energy constant
too many overdubs though...
very good track keep it up holla at mine
good lookin left u feed thx 4 ya 2 cents homie
ne more or is it dead??
my bad for takin such a long time to reply back...
beat's dope, im liking it alot.
voice's unqiue as fuck which's a good thing, flow's on point, emotions there..but it seems your breathe control is a bit iffy... i noticed you ran outta breathe towards the end of alotta your lines. nothing you cant fix though.
Hook's pretty good, nothin too spectacular. I would've added an effect, or dubbed it more, to make it stand out or whatever.
Verse 2's nice, your lyrics are probly your strong point in my opinion. rhyme scheme's pretty good.
Verse 3's good, which's a good thing cuz some emcees tend to fall off topic towards the end of their songs, etc...
All in all I thought it was'a good track, nothin mind blowin or anything. As I said before you gotta REAL unique voice, as well as style... good stuff.
good lookin man appreciate the feed yeah im tryin 2 make my own sound dont wanna sound like some 1 else thx 4 feed
bumpit ity bump
i knew it would b this beat.,...lol
vocals wass ight...sumthin is odd about em but ya voice was good.I was surprised u made this into a love typa song...i guess it makes sence but a diff route that i woulda went. flow is on point for the most part. the hook was good,used the sample of course.got alil morbid the 3rd verse..i was feelin it. overall this was a nice drop..just up the quality alil bit and u'll b good..props tho...`1
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good lookin homie appreciate the feed yeah it was kinda a track updatin the old classic pain 1 i did damn i love me some da cypha beats :0 bout 2 merk another 1 ina few days CHEA
I like the beat...Da Cypha is a monsta anywho
this could be mixed better...
flow is pretty cool...I like the passion you spit with Red...lyrics are on that typical I hate skeezers tip haha...3rd verse was on some I kill you stuff...haha anyway I enjoyed this fam...keep doing you bro
return the love and check the tracks if you can,
this beat is killing it man...im feeling the fuck out of this beat....damn....
anyway...to your lyrics...
first verse--your voice is alright man...im feeling ya lyrics and shit...rhyme scheme is decent...kind of simple in places but you had some ••••••••••....this track is decent...so far....
second verse--same thing as i said for the first verse....
your production seems decent to me...maybe cuz im not good at it either lol....but return the favor on my link....
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thx 4 the feed i peepd both of yalls shit thx upppin 4 feedback
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