~CrYsTaL sHaDoW Vs Osphins

Discussion in 'Emcee Battle Area' started by CrYsTaL ShAdOw, Dec 25, 2003.

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  1. PrOFouL

    PrOFouL New Member

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    best lines:

    Shadow:“Wicked-Times” revolve in Coke Terms, yur got merked by Lines/

    the rest of it was played, flipped wrong,forced, fillers, and you fragmented the aspect, another words didn't put enough to make it ill.

    Opshins:Fuck, my punches hit u hard, got u layin in vomit
    U couldnt 'pose a threat' if u did a photo shoot wearin a shirt with saddam on it

    ^^^^first line was an attack, second was okay, but is enough to win.

    Damn, I see why much votes aren't coming in.

    Both were too simplistic, and compressed a poor verse. Shadow, give yourself time to think, you forced too much. Both need to be more creative and be more complexed.
    test
  2. zoloxian

    zoloxian I pimp you bitches

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    opshins gets the vote better punches other dude had a ok flow but to much writting that didnt mean shit in the first verse was annoying to read through
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  3. CocO

    CocO Y'all dont wanna

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    Crystal... My man.. dont go so crazy with ", and shit punctuation that isnt needed, It makes the verse look played and it makes it look like u spent 3 days on it... I got opshins taking this battle.. Had a couple of decent punches and crystal... Just rebound on your next battle.,.. Work on it my man...
    Return the favor...
    test
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