~~Crazy about you~~

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  1. Tijana

    Tijana New Member

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    This is just a lil somethin somethin i been working on its about my man and when we was in this little situation and its just how i feel!!!!




    Im going insanve without you
    im losing my brains without you
    and i just cant help myself
    dont want nobody else
    im so crazy about you
    ill do anything to see you
    and i slay myself to feed you
    i just cant helpy myself dont want nobody else
    im so crazy about you

    Ill never forget the first day we talked, i was so crazy about you
    i called you all the days ,just to hear you say someday we would be together
    You know how to push me down and take it from me
    show me that real type of love

    These feelings i have for you its hard to explain to you
    I would do anything for you boy i would die for you
    I live my life for you so crazy about you
    just give me a chance and i promise never to lie to you
    and any wrong doings, i swear ill do the time for you
    i could feel your pain that's why its easy to cry for you
    so please never leave cause i cant breath without you

    Who took care of the situation when you got shot by then •••••s?
    and i was wating on your every phone call laying alone in my bed.
    The haters tell me your not worth it, but it is so hard to explain
    and just the thought of you on top
    makes my natures hot i want no other man

    Who kept everything fresh for you? the best for you?
    who counted all the money for you?continued to love you?
    Who ran away those bitches for you?
    It was me that stayed with you collected all the mail for you.
    Who do you trust with you life?Who cant wait to be your wife.
    This is I Tijana , the one you love at night
    Id be the first girl to fight about you so please never leave
    cause i cant breath with out you........

    This is something i wrote its more of a song its really lovely a nice sound might need to put it on audio and let yall peep it and get a better understanding on it!
    test
  2. Tijana

    Tijana New Member

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    Can i get some feedbacc tell me what yall think on this joint?
    test
  3. eatemup

    eatemup New Member

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    this is tight I liked this talkin about some real love nice drop
    test
  4. illpoetical

    illpoetical raising the bar everyday

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    this was ill i wrote a poem called i can't breathe without you so i feel what you are talking about

    1ne
    test
  5. Tijana

    Tijana New Member

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    thank yall i appriciate it i just be writing none sense and then it just comes hard im like whoa that sounds good lol so i guess something the best writing comes when you are not trying to be the best i feel you on that too But thank yall and i appriciate it and yall keep up the good work too yall got some nice drops........Spoken Reality.......
    test
  6. Stina Da Beanah

    Stina Da Beanah ~StinaZ~ BACK!!!

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    fuck that anyone ever hear Mercedes? She wrote that shit, not this chic. Fuckin Poser. that's already an actual song. master p produced her record so I don't see where this chic can come off saying she wrote it. I can't believe you would lie like that Tijana. Not a way to start off as a newcomer.

    ~Stina~
    test
  7. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    i hope this isnt true
    test
  8. blackmann

    blackmann New Member

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    I like, I like but don't fall to hard
    test
  9. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    Damn yo this is a song by mercedes and Master P,
    you switch a few words around and call it your own?
    How about I drop a piece thats titled "Shake ya Tail Feather"?
    and not give credit to Nelly, P. Diddy and Murphey Lee..


    http://www.lyricsdir.com/m/mercedes/crazy-bout-ya.php

    Anyway ayone who questions this can check it out for themselves..
    test
  10. Stina Da Beanah

    Stina Da Beanah ~StinaZ~ BACK!!!

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    ^^^THank you, at least someone else realizes that this chic is a fake. Try writing some of your own shit now chica. you might get my respect then.
    test
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