Crawling in garbage then drawing on the knowledge of HIP HOP

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  1. bagglad

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    Crawling in garbage then drawing on the knowledge of HIP HOP
    I put on some flip flops and said nothing, belong at the tiptop
    Lots of jazz I see but as for me except for a cake date every
    Now and then that I somehow win make me feel better very
    Fast, stand out in the dumb fog just to learn a lot from a dog
    Now I can run and bark have fun in the park, chew on bones
    Go to new zones just to piss on trees catch a scent I’m gone
    School with quotes words make fools of folk and when rules
    Are broke heads roll, got red scrolls with paragraphs and tools
    Some things don’t make sense so I’m prepared to take defense
    Junk e dense and over my head, a flunky never understand convinced
    You can’t make a monkey out a man ready to hop like a toad
    Need to go home so I proceed along a road with a strong load
    Of rejection, fear the wind this appear to begin in silent mode
    Capable of being changed I’m seeing strange things in my sleep
    Got a mad corrupt crew but they don’t add up to Scarface deep
    On a bizarre pace to crime nahamean? Look that car parked
    At a phat bar sitting on dubs and gitting to clubs after dark
    Deal with insanities in the field of humanities walk in feeble Manhattan
    Speaking medieval Latin swagger batting 1,000 wow nobody is patting
    Me on the back, wear a drastic dew rag got a plastic bag over my Cragar
    Mags and mud flaps listen to thug raps love leather chaps roll on major
    Tires and this behavior require zones while waiting at Firestone a lover
    Of rubber grips highway I stays up with the graphic traffic discover
    Speed kills, plus you must consider the bitter litter that exist may
    Contribute also, pride talk on sidewalks life been dark but today
    In the park the subject is lace in a public place not great
    But I need hot cake, maybe a phat cost but I’m at a loss break
    on a pace unknown my face not shown must win a race at home
    got a plain plan little like a grain of sand but I chase chrome
    yo in HIP HOP cats can become whack fast and feel like a jackass
    somehow a clown should bow down if you flow corrupt why show
    up? Some cats think it’s all about them be in charge of your behavior
    and don’t dodge your major responsibility being silly is not what the savior
    ordered believe in your soul that you can achieve this goal don’t be dumb
    learn and come to terms with reality, look I’m shook and ill took some
    pills somehow freaking and now sleeping hoping to wake up and take
    a cup of coffee when that happen then I’m rapping again amen great
    my emotions drift no doubt but if it turns out this is only a dream
    I’m gonna be pissed
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  2. MrFlux001

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    You're rapping about behaving like a dog. You're rapping about a cake date. You're rapping about "dumb fog". That is all.
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  3. Envy

    Envy Song Writer / Artist.

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    @bagglad , fuck the hater man - this was straight piff. I was sitting on the edge of my seat wanting more, you're like a chick flick - you always bring a tear to my eye at the end.

    I can't wait for the next post you do, like - seriously, if i found out where you lived, i'd abduct you and make you write constantly to your fingers were nubs on the end of your hand...

    We need to get you in the RSTL or RBL, ASAP.
    @L u c y , @Baronmynds @Shadow @MissAndrya @Tacky Jones @GaLaTeA

    Show some support!
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  4. MissAndrya

    MissAndrya Evolution is what is.

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  5. Envy

    Envy Song Writer / Artist.

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    See that @bagglad that's her panties coming off because she's so turned on by your talent, you're going to make it big.
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  6. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    I am in awe over rhyming 'may' with 'today'
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  7. L u c y

    L u c y (Administrator) SWERVE

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    Envy Song Writer / Artist.

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  9. Exxxxis

    Exxxxis .......................

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    I read the first 4 lines and lost interest...so props for not wastin' anymore of my time.
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  10. MrFlux001

    MrFlux001 Member

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    Haha.
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  11. bagglad

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    Exxxxis wow you got three post you can't even define the word garbage LOL wow go run home and take a piss before you wet on yourself LOL
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  12. Chase Murda

    Chase Murda hostile enviroment

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    ok bag i see your potential keep doin big things lil homie
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  13. Free Lynx

    Free Lynx ®m legend Peter Parker

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    my eyes exploded after reading that str8 crack!

    dope rhymes son can u teach me to type like that?
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  14. Exxxxis

    Exxxxis .......................

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    Bein' new to a forum doesn't always equate to a beginner with lyrics little man...I may have only a few posts on here, but you have over 600 and really should've elevated by now...since when has bein' the shit consisted of no talent?

    ...Maybe if you didn't drop so many pieces that amount to nothin' and gave us sumthin' as a one off, that was actually dope...we wouldn't be havin' this conversation, and possibly you'd have gotten yourself better feed dickhead.
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  15. bagglad

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    Exxxxis why use the word us when you the only dummy that can't comprehend LOL like

    THANKS TO ALL THAT ENJOYED REALLY APPRECIATED IT AND TO THOSE THAT DIDN'T I APOLIGIZE BUT LIFE GOES ON
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