crap that i wrote just now

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by iconoclast, Jun 9, 2003.

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  1. iconoclast

    iconoclast Guest

    I dont understand your ignorance as to why I tried to do what i did
    as far as you know im some dumb kid, aint that right bitch
    fuck your problems, im tired of dealin with you, puttin up a fake front to make you smile
    I need to get the fuck away from you for awhile

    Its like i go out of my way to say hi, and i get in your way
    i swear to god i dont even know what to say
    right now you have no idea how tired i am of your bullshit
    fuck it, im done with you bitch

    you arent even as worth it as i thought you were
    i wont forget all the nice comments that i graced you with girl
    not for one second did i ever feel it was reciprocated
    its good to finally see the inner you that i hated

    you dont even make me feel special anymore
    im just one of the rest of the guys, aint that right you whore
    what the fuck did i try in the first place for
    i cant even listen to you speak without being bored

    i dont give a fuck what you say in return
    you left me so mentally burned
    high maintanence aint something im relating to right now, thanks anyways
    ive been goin over this for days and days

    live free or die, and i hope you choose the latter
    i dont even care anymore, ive never been madder
    i just gotta block you out and go blind to your attempts
    because i know time will pass and i will feel no regrets

    thanks bitch, you pimped me, and everyone knows it.....
    i hope you had fun and i hope you got the ego boost you wanted
    i hope it was worth it, but your soul will be accosted
    i would say it would happen at the hands of mine, but i have since lost it

    BTW - this has nothing to do with anyone, just a subject i figured i would write about
    test
  2. TuNed RooT

    TuNed RooT Love is introduction ..

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    Damn, well what can I say, except did you get it out? I'm sure you did, plus the anger is still boiling up inside of you. This is truly a different work of Poetry in which is pure heart material. It came straight from the core of your heart, basically. I found this a hard piece to take in, while reading, but I did it. Raw drop, family. Stay up, no doubt. My blessings..
    test
  3. DJ ECLIPSE

    DJ ECLIPSE BALLSINYAMOUF

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    [readit] write that down and show it other people cuz thats bad-ass
    test
  4. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    why the hell dont you drop shit in her more often

    u fuckin dope

    LOVED THIS PIECE

    dunno what to even say...

    UP
    test
  5. Feme Sole

    Feme Sole Mrs. _Evil

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    man why you putting our business out like that?......;)

    anger....i like.....i write pieces like this a lot........we need to collab again
    test
  6. e'S

    e'S sdrowkcab mi kool

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    yeah just get it all out
    test
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