could use some critique... lets cypher

Discussion in 'Cypher' started by scroggins, Dec 4, 2013.

  1. scroggins

    scroggins Member

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    I wanna find some people to rhyme with... also help me out a little, give me pointers and that.
    I'll start us off

    Yeah I'm new to the website
    but I'm well aquainted with rap
    so Ill shutup and let my pen write
    I'd go back and fix that but you know I meant type

    I'm unlisted unheard of but gifted
    cant copy my flow's encrypted
    I eat pac and shit big
    started off great now im more like science fiction
    ahead of my time and out of this world
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  2. scroggins

    scroggins Member

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    sinner sippin a tin full of sinful pinnacle
    original triple syllable ridicule
    I'm unfuckwitable
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  3. Little Yeezus

    Little Yeezus Member

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    Maybe it's b/c you look like Eminem or b/c you a guy but you're talking a selfie but either way I don't like you.
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  4. DemiGod

    DemiGod Peef Rimgar

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    Ignore Yeezus....he's a boring troll.
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  5. Little Yeezus

    Little Yeezus Member

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    #lies. ^clearly an em fan, eeh
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  6. ... Is Life

    ... Is Life New Member

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    he said he wanted to cypher, well lets spark the lighters
    for the martyred living who fight for you with all nighters
    we could speak of the suns and of the planets revolving
    speak of the grains of earth for the kids without problems
    see i be no five percenter i'm three sixty
    standing for one's under Christ and we kill swiftly
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  7. scroggins

    scroggins Member

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    I cant get that deep
    I write clever shit
    the better cheddar getter I'm forever sick
    little yeezuz thinkin he's somethin but he was never shit
    on a beat I believe I'm the phenom
    addicted to my lyrics get ya fiend on
    all my real muthaphuckas stand up and yeezus seat it
    do like michael jackson and beat it
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  8. scroggins

    scroggins Member

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    im your typical cynical sinner sippin sinners pinnacle
    original triple syllable ridicule im unfuckwitable
    kids dont get respect on the net but I can take a beatin
    "I cant have good lyrics and good flow" well ima get my cake and eat it
    my old homie told me that
    notice I said old I cant let the suckas hold me back
    people hate because they know I'm hotter
    only reason my lyrics soggy cuz I flow like water
    to understand half this shit you might need a little context
    a lot of cats around me talk shit to me
    most of em aint shit to me
    all that shit out they mouth they need some listerene (did i spell that right lol...)
    ...is life I hear you
    we're lookin at these bustas in our rear view
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