Contendership Match: 3. Oz The Legend 7-0 vs. 4. Serge dot T 3-0

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  1. Calibre

    Calibre Peoples Champ

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    vote - Oz

    wtf he raped serge.. I only saw like 2 good lines from serge.. the rest of his verse was
    either played or flipped horribly.. Oz came nice, like the taco bell line..

    Now im going to construe, a time line..>>
    RBLs doing well,with dope heads who's shit is felt >>>
    League hits rock bottom >> here comes Serge "TIME ta win the belt"

    and this one tooo.. bits were sketchy but you definetly got this... overall battle was ok..
    both keep doing ya things..
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  2. EYE-Z

    EYE-Z rote my vrse playing Bout

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    OZ

    Postin first cause I dont expect to beat this dude
    Play off verses ho, recycling & ghost writers...
    Fake personals & Ya aim for votes, I gotta beat these bitch moves

    Ya gotta explosive sex life even tho your toying with fags
    A flamer screaming "Fire in the hole" while fuckin ya boy in the ass
    I aint been run off sites, but fresh lines are a far cry for you
    Manipulated? nah, these just fake personals ya might try & use
    Now its time to lose & sign out, yep Im ejecting this herb
    You aint shit, nowadays newbies aint even respecting ya Serge

    was ya best, you had some played out lines, like the undercover shit, when you were personal you were best.



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    Speakin' of Resin....

    Serge dot T: Remember Oz???
    ResinMC: that loser still tryina to rap?


    NEWSFLASH: YOU'RE GARBAGE


    Ya lyrics suck...Explain where the props due...
    When the only place you have in the archives are fuckin' verses you lost to...!

    And look at ya damn quote, you're such a hypocrit fake, bitch
    You went into the archives while lookin' for shit to flip...so props on the rakes shit
    So stfu, I'M a legend, younger and done shit beyond belief
    You lost to Nasif......thats the punch nigga YOU FUCKIN LOST TO NASIF
    A year ago you loved the kid...
    I cut ya ass off and you know it's a tough fact
    But white men can't jump...so he's STILL on my nut sack..!
    Fat fuck, say it ain't so because we know you offended
    Imma read you like an open book, then rip out the apendix

    Look at ya damn verse, dissin' you ain't a tough angle
    Changin' his font so the lines don't stretch like his love handles....
    Look at ya fuckin' name...I'm sayin', this chubb's wild
    Oz the LEGEND...about Kong and the blondes love child
    roflz@ the kong and blonde love child

    Gay porn freak, you and ya dick live a set strife
    He rented 'Man on fire' thinkin' about a gay guys sex life

    Serge had a better flow, his verse is structured a whole lot better, read like it was a battle verse and not a just words struing together and seperated.

    Cool shit

    Vote- serge
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  3. King Dave

    King Dave New Member

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    lol at him really going around bitching .
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  4. Richard Corey

    Richard Corey battle like a savage

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    Oz:
    Claim to flip pounds? What a wretched thought
    When ya cant flip Resin without getting caught
    Ya aint gotta dwell on this battle, cuz ya doin not so well
    People going to Serge for a borderline bite, fuck a Taco Bell
    Recycle, flips & fake personals, your not a versatile emcee
    I Flipped ya borderline^ so u'll have an original personal on me


    Okay, at first I was going to say using a "borderline" line in a "You flip too much" verse wasn't a good idea. But then you followed it with the next 2 lines and it made sense. Unfortunately this negates any impact the "borderline" line could've had. Even though it wouldn't have had any impact anyway. The opener was cool though, and the last line was...cool.

    I'll kidnap ya girl & when I'm done chokin ya boo
    My knife'll slice her throat into two
    & If ya 'egg' me on, u'll be breathin out her felopian tube
    Now im going to construe, a time line..>>
    RBLs doing well,with dope heads who's shit is felt >>>
    League hits rock bottom >> here comes Serge "TIME ta win the belt"


    Okay, the fallopian tube line was blah. And the "timeline" punch...I mean, it's just ironic, cause this is the second time you've flipped a famous punch that someone else did. That's a Fracture concept. I mean, I dont' care enough to actually look for the punch, but it's just...really ironic. Nonetheless, the lines are really stretched, and it's a cool punch.

    Girls excited to meet Serge! Yah, he must maintain some wealth?
    Nah, they'd rather lock emselfs up, he'll make any girl contain-er self
    You fag...
    Ya set buildings ablaze, & pussy? Ya desire-ta take it
    Too bad...
    Girls wont get undercovers if ya got the only fire blanket
    Postin first cause I dont expect to beat this dude
    Play off verses ho, recycling & ghost writers...
    Fake personals & Ya aim for votes, I gotta beat these bitch moves


    Damn, you're lines are stretched. How does this flow in y'alls heads without using multies? Whatever, the "contain-er self" line was meh, especially since you couldn't just said "contain her self" and it would've had the exact same meaning. The "fire blanket" and "bitch move" lines were just flat.

    & Ur a sp!ck too, good only for yard work, your hated
    Its why this Mexican rakes more than every casino in Vegas


    I hate racial slur based punches. blah

    Ya gotta explosive sex life even tho your toying with fags
    A flamer screaming "Fire in the hole" while fuckin ya boy in the ass


    lol. That's pretty good, simple, but good.

    I aint been run off sites, but fresh lines are a far cry for you
    Manipulated? nah, these just fake personals ya might try & use
    Now its time to lose & sign out, yep Im ejecting this herb
    You aint shit, nowadays newbies aint even respecting ya Serge


    last line was kinda mean. But that's about it. hrrmmmm...

    Serge:
    Ya lyrics suck...Explain where the props due...
    When the only place you have in the archives are fuckin' verses you lost to...!
    Punted off UPN for thinkin' that he's hot
    You're not even pussy....
    A 'bundle of nerves' like you is more like a g-spot....!
    And look at ya damn quote, you're such a hypocrit fake, bitch
    You went into the archives while lookin' for shit to flip...so props on the rakes shit


    damn, maybe it's just me with the "stretched" concept. But this first section was hot. The opener was clean and direct. The "bundle of nerves" line was hotter. And since it wasn't one of the concepts in question, illness. The "rakes shit" line I take is an inside punch, cause I don't get it.

    So stfu, I'M a legend, younger and done shit beyond belief
    You lost to Nasif......thats the punch nigga YOU FUCKIN LOST TO NASIF


    lmao!

    A year ago you loved the kid...
    I cut ya ass off and you know it's a tough fact
    But white men can't jump...so he's STILL on my nut sack..!
    Fat fuck, say it ain't so because we know you offended
    Imma read you like an open book, then rip out the apendix
    He could use some excersize, a jog kills a fat layer
    But you wouldn't see Oz runnin' if he was tryna be mayor...!


    everything in here is pretty mundane. In fact, it looks like it was written at a different time because the structure totally changed and the lines shortened. The "White Men Can't Jump" line was the best in this section.

    Look at ya damn verse, dissin' you ain't a tough angle
    Changin' his font so the lines don't stretch like his love handles....
    Look at ya fuckin' name...I'm sayin', this chubb's wild
    Oz the LEGEND...about Kong and the blondes love child


    meh. At least you shortened your lines for that "love handle" punch, otherwise it'd be really hypocritical. But these two punches were following in the vein of the last section, in that they were really simple.

    He likes dark, I'm not talkin' 'bout funerals
    I'm sayin'...
    He's had more black dick in him than The Apollo's urinals
    Gay porn freak, you and ya dick live a set strife
    He rented 'Man on fire' thinkin' about a gay guys sex life
    Ugly as a fuck, not even the date to ya prom, shit
    I wouldn't fuck Oz's pussy if I borrowed his moms dick


    "Man on Fire" line was cool. But the "Apollo's urinal" line was kinda weak anyway. It came out of nowhere, it wasn't set up right. And the closer was just mean: Okay, his mom has a dick. yeah...

    Overall:It was cool. I mean, it didn't necessarily deserve all the press it got, but it was cool. Oz flipped as many lines as Serge did, maybe even more. So that argument's out the door. Oz had some nice lines, the nicest being the "Fire in the hole" line...for the comedic image. Everything else (like his opener, the "original punch on me" soon after) was just cool. Serge's first section was fire. In my opinion anyway. And even though they had the same amount of nice lines, Serge gets this cause his lines were harder. so...

    vote:Serge
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  5. Georgia

    Georgia New Member

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    ^richard corey is trippin

    i didnt read ya whole vote but jus readin the borderline breakdown and you can tell you dont know whas goin on here so you shouldnt be votin

    but thas jus my 2 cents, i'll edit a vote here some time later when i have more time to break the two verses down
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  6. Mr. Chaves

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    this was a prety nice battle.

    oz, you had some lines that were flat out funny, although ya bar structure was a tad weird, which i thought, made the flow suffer a bit. i liked these lines..

    Ya aint gotta dwell on this battle, cuz ya doin not so well
    People going to Serge for a borderline bite, fuck a Taco Bell
    Recycle, flips & fake personals, your not a versatile emcee
    I Flipped ya borderline^ so u'll have an original personal on me

    that was dope, just so on-chalant, really effective

    Girls wont get undercovers if ya got the only fire blanket
    Postin first cause I dont expect to beat this dude
    Play off verses ho, recycling & ghost writers...
    Fake personals & Ya aim for votes, I gotta beat these bitch moves
    & Ur a sp!ck too, good only for yard work, your hated
    Its why this Mexican rakes more than every casino in Vegas
    Ya gotta explosive sex life even tho your toying with fags
    A flamer screaming "Fire in the hole" while fuckin ya boy in the ass

    that section was pretty good too

    consistant verse from you, nice.

    serge started out hot

    Ya lyrics suck...Explain where the props due...
    When the only place you have in the archives are fuckin' verses you lost to...!
    Punted off UPN for thinkin' that he's hot
    You're not even pussy....
    A 'bundle of nerves' like you is more like a g-spot....!
    And look at ya damn quote, you're such a hypocrit fake, bitch
    You went into the archives while lookin' for shit to flip...so props on the rakes shit
    So stfu, I'M a legend, younger and done shit beyond belief
    You lost to Nasif......thats the punch nigga YOU FUCKIN LOST TO NASIF

    all that was nice, although the rakes feed was, well feeding, it was still sorta effective

    after those lines, you pretty much fell off dude, didn't see anything really connecting, which made this vote a bit easier.

    vote-oz

    for consistency
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  7. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    serge, that opener is like the generic rap battle opener man, and you put a fuckin ! in there like it would help. I really dont get your style man, i mean, you get votes, and your a coo kid, but i dont get why you would use some of these lines....

    Ya lyrics suck...Explain where the props due...
    When the only place you have in the archives are fuckin' verses you lost to...!

    no, so played and its really not even a punch

    Punted off UPN for thinkin' that he's hot
    You're not even pussy....
    A 'bundle of nerves' like you is more like a g-spot....!

    seen it before, and you didnt flip it all that well....

    And look at ya damn quote, you're such a hypocrit fake, bitch
    You went into the archives while lookin' for shit to flip...so props on the rakes shit

    eh

    So stfu, I'M a legend, younger and done shit beyond belief
    You lost to Nasif......thats the punch nigga YOU FUCKIN LOST TO NASIF

    aight, wording helped this pull it off effectively, its coo

    A year ago you loved the kid...
    I cut ya ass off and you know it's a tough fact
    But white men can't jump...so he's STILL on my nut sack..!

    nah

    Fat fuck, say it ain't so because we know you offended
    Imma read you like an open book, then rip out the apendix

    actually liked this line, not the wording because it was a little rushed, but yea man dope punch

    He could use some excersize, a jog kills a fat layer
    But you wouldn't see Oz runnin' if he was tryna be mayor...!

    hell no. fucking self dojo toss your ass for this one.

    Look at ya damn verse, dissin' you ain't a tough angle
    Changin' his font so the lines don't stretch like his love handles....

    no

    Look at ya fuckin' name...I'm sayin', this chubb's wild
    Oz the LEGEND...about Kong and the blondes love child

    haha, least this ish is funny man. nice

    He likes dark, I'm not talkin' 'bout funerals
    I'm sayin'...
    He's had more black dick in him than The Apollo's urinals

    yea, lisa lamp flip. its aight

    Gay porn freak, you and ya dick live a set strife
    He rented 'Man on fire' thinkin' about a gay guys sex life

    no

    Ugly as a fuck, not even the date to ya prom, shit
    I wouldn't fuck Oz's pussy if I borrowed his moms dick

    so over used





    2 lines were good. many lines were bad, and one or two deserve a dojo toss.

    Oz-

    Claim to flip pounds? What a wretched thought
    When ya cant flip Resin without getting caught

    he flips, its been known, and he recycles more then conservationists, but its ok

    Ya aint gotta dwell on this battle, cuz ya doin not so well
    People going to Serge for a borderline bite, fuck a Taco Bell

    DAMNNNNN, this line is much better, hahahaha........PP

    Recycle, flips & fake personals, your not a versatile emcee
    I Flipped ya borderline^ so u'll have an original personal on me

    lol, aight

    I'll kidnap ya girl & when I'm done chokin ya boo
    My knife'll slice her throat into two
    & If ya 'egg' me on, u'll be breathin out her felopian tube

    this isnt stretched, its a perfectly set up live battle type punch where you gotta work multi's in then deliver....it was just OK to me though

    Now im going to construe, a time line..>>
    RBLs doing well,with dope heads who's shit is felt >>>
    League hits rock bottom >> here comes Serge "TIME ta win the belt"

    good idea, bad execution

    Girls excited to meet Serge! Yah, he must maintain some wealth?
    Nah, they'd rather lock emselfs up, he'll make any girl contain-er self
    \no

    You fag...
    Ya set buildings ablaze, & pussy? Ya desire-ta take it
    Too bad...
    Girls wont get undercovers if ya got the only fire blanket

    haha

    Postin first cause I dont expect to beat this dude
    Play off verses ho, recycling & ghost writers...
    Fake personals & Ya aim for votes, I gotta beat these bitch moves

    no

    & Ur a sp!ck too, good only for yard work, your hated
    Its why this Mexican rakes more than every casino in Vegas

    lol

    Ya gotta explosive sex life even tho your toying with fags
    A flamer screaming "Fire in the hole" while fuckin ya boy in the ass

    no

    I aint been run off sites, but fresh lines are a far cry for you
    Manipulated? nah, these just fake personals ya might try & use
    Now its time to lose & sign out, yep Im ejecting this herb
    You aint shit, nowadays newbies aint even respecting ya Serge

    bleh




    clear cut winner is Oz. definitely had the better verse, line for line. less wack lines by far. and while serge had a funny line here and there, oz killed it.
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  8. Complete Chaos

    Complete Chaos I'm Drugs.

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    Cool battle, and I knew this would result in at least one hookups thread (which is good, rbl needs more beefs).

    Pretty decent verses from both, a lot of lines that I could've done without, but overall a good read. Taco Bell line and fire blanket lines were my favs from Oz. Serge's appendix line was my fav of the battle, but I didn't like much else from him. Not that there wasn't good stuff, i just think most were reworded old Serge lines. A lot of times I didn't like Oz's style and Serge's !s, but I'd say Oz had more consistency here.

    V - Oz
    *covers head*
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  9. Keynote

    Keynote aka Jux Czar

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    This is Jux in case some of you don't recognize the name. I forgot my pass for my other login so don't pay no mind to the post count. Just dropping a vote while browsing the site.

    Oz -

    Claim to flip pounds? What a wretched thought
    When ya cant flip Resin without getting caught
    Ya aint gotta dwell on this battle, cuz ya doin not so well
    People going to Serge for a borderline bite, fuck a Taco Bell
    You fag...
    Ya set buildings ablaze, & pussy? Ya desire-ta take it
    Too bad...
    Girls wont get undercovers if ya got the only fire blanket
    Ya gotta explosive sex life even tho your toying with fags
    A flamer screaming "Fire in the hole" while fuckin ya boy in the ass


    Serge -

    Ya lyrics suck...Explain where the props due...
    When the only place you have in the archives are fuckin' verses you lost to...!
    A year ago you loved the kid...
    I cut ya ass off and you know it's a tough fact
    But white men can't jump...so he's STILL on my nut sack..!
    Fat fuck, say it ain't so because we know you offended
    Imma read you like an open book, then rip out the apendix
    He could use some excersize, a jog kills a fat layer
    But you wouldn't see Oz runnin' if he was tryna be mayor...!
    He likes dark, I'm not talkin' 'bout funerals
    I'm sayin'...
    He's had more black dick in him than The Apollo's urinals
    Gay porn freak, you and ya dick live a set strife
    He rented 'Man on fire' thinkin' about a gay guys sex life


    This was a pretty nice battle. Oz had some good lines. The taco bell one was the best one in his verse. I just think Serge overpowered him with better personals. I don't know about whether the apollo line was flipped or whatever but that was still dope.

    My vote goes to Serge.

    w0n.
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  10. Young Philly

    Young Philly Broad Street Bully

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    Not a good battle.

    So stfu, I'M a legend, younger and done shit beyond belief
    You lost to Nasif......thats the punch nigga YOU FUCKIN LOST TO NASIF
    A year ago you loved the kid...
    I cut ya ass off and you know it's a tough fact
    But white men can't jump...so he's STILL on my nut sack..

    ^only four lines I liked of the battle.
    Serge.

    Oz came with some wack ass shit.
    Nothing in that whole long verse was above decent.
    Dissappointing shit.

    V/Serge
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  11. Georgia

    Georgia New Member

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    i really hate to say


    but oz CLEARLY won this

    and anyone else who voted otherwise was jus scared to say what they really thought, the dickriding in this league is becoming unbearable, serge doesnt like you jus because you voted for him, trust me




    ^that was serge's only strong points in my opinion, the bottom half of his verse (besides the urinal line) was wack, period, every idea was either played as fuck or should have never been played, and that love handles line was gay as fuck




    ^these the only strong points in oz' verse imo, some were better than others but these are basically the only lines i liked, the whole opener section was funny, the timeline shit was funny, and the vegas line was funny, the rest were generic punches but till decent i suppose


    either way, you still beat serge, verse was much more consistent with more good lines, flows were equal i guess cos nobody really flowed that much harder than the next nigga


    so vote, oz
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  12. UnbrokeN

    UnbrokeN Well-Known Member

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    serge got this



    You lost to Nasif......thats the punch nigga YOU FUCKIN LOST TO NASIF
    A year ago you loved the kid...
    I cut ya ass off and you know it's a tough fact
    But white men can't jump...so he's STILL on my nut sack..!
    Fat fuck, say it ain't so because we know you offended
    Imma read you like an open book, then rip out the apendix

    Was serges solid run which toook it for me in the end
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  13. Vandette

    Vandette New Member

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    Ya gotta explosive sex life even tho your toying with fags
    A flamer screaming "Fire in the hole" while fuckin ya boy in the ass
    I aint been run off sites, but fresh lines are a far cry for you
    Manipulated? nah, these just fake personals ya might try & use
    Now its time to lose & sign out, yep Im ejecting this herb
    You aint shit, nowadays newbies aint even respecting ya Serge


    daaaaamn mothafucka ended stronng and shit...shoulda started like this too

    Serge
    And look at ya damn quote, you're such a hypocrit fake, bitch
    You went into the archives while lookin' for shit to flip...so props on the rakes shit
    So stfu, I'M a legend, younger and done shit beyond belief
    You lost to Nasif......thats the punch nigga YOU FUCKIN LOST TO NASIF
    A year ago you loved the kid...
    I cut ya ass off and you know it's a tough fact
    But white men can't jump...so he's STILL on my nut sack..!
    Fat fuck, say it ain't so because we know you offended
    Imma read you like an open book, then rip out the apendix

    Look at ya damn verse, dissin' you ain't a tough angle
    Changin' his font so the lines don't stretch like his love handles....And look at ya damn quote, you're such a hypocrit fake, bitch
    You went into the archives while lookin' for shit to flip...so props on the rakes shit
    So stfu, I'M a legend, younger and done shit beyond belief
    You lost to Nasif......thats the punch nigga YOU FUCKIN LOST TO NASIF
    A year ago you loved the kid...
    I cut ya ass off and you know it's a tough fact
    But white men can't jump...so he's STILL on my nut sack..!
    Fat fuck, say it ain't so because we know you offended
    Imma read you like an open book, then rip out the apendix
    damn solid section

    Look at ya damn verse, dissin' you ain't a tough angle
    Changin' his font so the lines don't stretch like his love handles....

    yea serge got this def...harder verse...just tha tad bit more man
    vote,serge


    ya'll better watch out when im come up though next week and shit
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  14. Wesley Snipes

    Wesley Snipes New Member

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    OZ:
    Ya aint gotta dwell on this battle, cuz ya doin not so well
    People going to Serge for a borderline bite, fuck a Taco Bell
    Ya set buildings ablaze, & pussy? Ya desire-ta take it
    Too bad...
    Girls wont get undercovers if ya got the only fire blanket

    serge:
    So stfu, I'M a legend, younger and done shit beyond belief
    You lost to Nasif......thats the punch nigga YOU FUCKIN LOST TO NASIF
    I cut ya ass off and you know it's a tough fact
    But white men can't jump...so he's STILL on my nut sack..!
    Fat fuck, say it ain't so because we know you offended
    Imma read you like an open book, then rip out the apendix
    He could use some excersize, a jog kills a fat layer
    But you wouldn't see Oz runnin' if he was tryna be mayor...!

    vote Serge had a couple more couplets that i liked.
    pizza.
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  15. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    I guess we're looking at 9-9 witholding only voters with only 2 hundred votes, & not blatant hate votes or anything else.

    Keep em coming, even though this is probably a record for most votes recieved in any battle in RBL in 2 years. lol
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  16. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    ^^nah...me vs blackdef wuz like 30-27...haha...
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  17. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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    Claim to flip pounds? What a wretched thought
    When ya cant flip Resin without getting caught

    aight, coulda used that quote better

    Ya aint gotta dwell on this battle, cuz ya doin not so well
    People going to Serge for a borderline bite, fuck a Taco Bell

    aight, cool

    Recycle, flips & fake personals, your not a versatile emcee
    I Flipped ya borderline^ so u'll have an original personal on me

    ok

    I'll kidnap ya girl & when I'm done chokin ya boo
    My knife'll slice her throat into two
    & If ya 'egg' me on, u'll be breathin out her felopian tube

    yeah, not feelin this

    Now im going to construe, a time line..>>
    RBLs doing well,with dope heads who's shit is felt >>>
    League hits rock bottom >> here comes Serge "TIME ta win the belt"

    lolol, set up was wordy as hell, but i laughed when the punch came around


    Girls excited to meet Serge! Yah, he must maintain some wealth?
    Nah, they'd rather lock emselfs up, he'll make any girl contain-er self
    ehhh, fresh but i didn't like the wordplay

    You fag...
    Ya set buildings ablaze, & pussy? Ya desire-ta take it
    Too bad...
    Girls wont get undercovers if ya got the only fire blanket
    k, solid follow up.


    Postin first cause I dont expect to beat this dude
    Play off verses ho, recycling & ghost writers...
    Fake personals & Ya aim for votes, I gotta beat these bitch moves
    the personal verses ho rhyme in the middle wasnt enough to make it not too wordy, i didn't feel this

    & Ur a sp!ck too, good only for yard work, your hated
    Its why this Mexican rakes more than every casino in Vegas
    aight, good flip

    Ya gotta explosive sex life even tho your toying with fags
    A flamer screaming "Fire in the hole" while fuckin ya boy in the ass
    ehh

    I aint been run off sites, but fresh lines are a far cry for you
    Manipulated? nah, these just fake personals ya might try & use
    ok, fresh

    Now its time to lose & sign out, yep Im ejecting this herb
    You aint shit, nowadays newbies aint even respecting ya Serge
    aight, solid hit.


    SERGE

    Ya lyrics suck...Explain where the props due...
    When the only place you have in the archives are fuckin' verses you lost to...!
    alright, cool open

    Punted off UPN for thinkin' that he's hot
    You're not even pussy....
    A 'bundle of nerves' like you is more like a g-spot....!
    alright

    And look at ya damn quote, you're such a hypocrit fake, bitch
    You went into the archives while lookin' for shit to flip...so props on the rakes shit
    alright

    So stfu, I'M a legend, younger and done shit beyond belief
    You lost to Nasif......thats the punch nigga YOU FUCKIN LOST TO NASIF
    haha, we have a winner.

    A year ago you loved the kid...
    I cut ya ass off and you know it's a tough fact
    But white men can't jump...so he's STILL on my nut sack..!
    i've seen this already, probably from you. so yeah.

    Fat fuck, say it ain't so because we know you offended
    Imma read you like an open book, then rip out the apendix
    same as above

    He could use some excersize, a jog kills a fat layer
    But you wouldn't see Oz runnin' if he was tryna be mayor...!
    word, aight

    Look at ya damn verse, dissin' you ain't a tough angle
    Changin' his font so the lines don't stretch like his love handles....
    lolol, i dunno if oz is fat or what, but cool line

    Look at ya fuckin' name...I'm sayin', this chubb's wild
    Oz the LEGEND...about Kong and the blondes love child
    lol

    He likes dark, I'm not talkin' 'bout funerals
    I'm sayin'...
    He's had more black dick in him than The Apollo's urinals
    nah, beside the fact of it bein on that roast, it's not that tight lol

    Gay porn freak, you and ya dick live a set strife
    He rented 'Man on fire' thinkin' about a gay guys sex life
    played

    Ugly as a fuck, not even the date to ya prom, shit
    I wouldn't fuck Oz's pussy if I borrowed his moms dick
    haha, ok


    ok this battle was alright. alot of lines, not a whole lot of real good ones. Oz dropped pretty solid, hit and miss sometimes, fresh overall though. I liked his opener, even though he coulda done more with it, some of his lines were pretty wordy which made the punch kinda too dragged out. Serge was hit and miss for me too, i liked the nasif shit, the love handles line. But he had some shit i've seen, but like i said, probably recycled, but even if not, that just is an advantage for Oz with the freshness. Which is also the reason i got Oz winnin.

    vote- Oz.
    test
  18. Venamis

    Venamis Moderator

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    Oz:

    Claim to flip pounds? What a wretched thought
    When ya cant flip Resin without getting caught
    Nah..it's personal but lame.
    Ya aint gotta dwell on this battle, cuz ya doin not so well
    People going to Serge for a borderline bite, fuck a Taco Bell
    Aiight.
    Recycle, flips & fake personals, your not a versatile emcee
    I Flipped ya borderline^ so u'll have an original personal on me
    Aiight.
    I'll kidnap ya girl & when I'm done chokin ya boo
    My knife'll slice her throat into two
    & If ya 'egg' me on, u'll be breathin out her felopian tube
    A vagina flip..ehh
    Now im going to construe, a time line..>>
    RBLs doing well,with dope heads who's shit is felt >>>
    League hits rock bottom >> here comes Serge "TIME ta win the belt"
    Girls excited to meet Serge! Yah, he must maintain some wealth?
    Nah, they'd rather lock emselfs up, he'll make any girl contain-er self
    thumbs down.. I hated that
    You fag...
    Ya set buildings ablaze, & pussy? Ya desire-ta take it
    Too bad...
    Girls wont get undercovers if ya got the only fire blanket
    litterally that was a hot bar.ha..
    Postin first cause I dont expect to beat this dude
    Play off verses ho, recycling & ghost writers...
    Fake personals & Ya aim for votes, I gotta beat these bitch moves
    Nah.
    & Ur a sp!ck too, good only for yard work, your hated
    Its why this Mexican rakes more than every casino in Vegas
    I feel it
    Ya gotta explosive sex life even tho your toying with fags
    A flamer screaming "Fire in the hole" while fuckin ya boy in the ass
    I aint been run off sites, but fresh lines are a far cry for you
    Manipulated? nah, these just fake personals ya might try & use
    Now its time to lose & sign out, yep Im ejecting this herb
    You aint shit, nowadays newbies aint even respecting ya Serge
    wtf


    vs


    Ya lyrics suck...Explain where the props due...
    When the only place you have in the archives are fuckin' verses you lost to...!
    nice personal
    Punted off UPN for thinkin' that he's hot
    You're not even pussy....
    A 'bundle of nerves' like you is more like a g-spot....!
    ehh
    And look at ya damn quote, you're such a hypocrit fake, bitch
    You went into the archives while lookin' for shit to flip...so props on the rakes shit
    ha
    So stfu, I'M a legend, younger and done shit beyond belief
    You lost to Nasif......thats the punch nigga YOU FUCKIN LOST TO NASIF
    nah
    A year ago you loved the kid...
    I cut ya ass off and you know it's a tough fact
    But white men can't jump...so he's STILL on my nut sack..!
    aiight.
    Fat fuck, say it ain't so because we know you offended
    Imma read you like an open book, then rip out the apendix
    tight
    He could use some excersize, a jog kills a fat layer
    But you wouldn't see Oz runnin' if he was tryna be mayor...!
    nice..
    Look at ya damn verse, dissin' you ain't a tough angle
    Changin' his font so the lines don't stretch like his love handles....
    ehh
    Look at ya fuckin' name...I'm sayin', this chubb's wild
    Oz the LEGEND...about Kong and the blondes love child
    nah
    He likes dark, I'm not talkin' 'bout funerals
    I'm sayin'...
    He's had more black dick in him than The Apollo's urinals
    not sure
    Gay porn freak, you and ya dick live a set strife
    He rented 'Man on fire' thinkin' about a gay guys sex life
    no
    Ugly as a fuck, not even the date to ya prom, shit
    I wouldn't fuck Oz's pussy if I borrowed his moms dick
    nah.



    Vote - Manic D


    It's simple, he weighted Oz.
    test
  19. Bud Weiser

    Bud Weiser New Member

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    ye i thought oz got him.
    test
  20. blaquest

    blaquest Yodel At Me

    Joined:
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    Messages:
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    People going to Serge for a borderline bite, fuck a Taco Bell
    Recycle, flips & fake personals, your not a versatile emcee
    I Flipped ya borderline^ so u'll have an original personal on me
    I'll kidnap ya girl & when I'm done chokin ya boo
    My knife'll slice her throat into two
    & If ya 'egg' me on, u'll be breathin out her felopian tube
    Now im going to construe, a time line..>>
    RBLs doing well,with dope heads who's shit is felt >>>
    League hits rock bottom >> here comes Serge "TIME ta win the belt"
    Damn that was sick good as concept asnd everything
    And look at ya damn quote, you're such a hypocrit fake, bitch
    You went into the archives while lookin' for shit to flip...so props on the rakes shit
    So stfu, I'M a legend, younger and done shit beyond belief
    You lost to Nasif......thats the punch nigga YOU FUCKIN LOST TO NASIF
    A year ago you loved the kid...
    I cut ya ass off and you know it's a tough fact
    But white men can't jump...so he's STILL on my nut sack..!
    Fat fuck, say it ain't so because we know you offended
    Imma read you like an open book, then rip out the apendix
    He could use some excersize, a jog kills a fat layer
    But you wouldn't see Oz runnin' if he was tryna be mayor...!
    Look at ya damn verse, dissin' you ain't a tough angle
    Changin' his font so the lines don't stretch like his love handles
    That shit was plain and simply sick damndandnand
    Serge closer was also some funny shit

    In a sqeauk out damn vote serge

    Sick fuckn battle
    test
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