CONTENDERSHIP!: 3. Scientz 11-3 Vs. 4. OneDuh 8-1

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  1. U S E R

    U S E R NON-DOHPE.squad

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  2. Scientz

    Scientz Im Good Writtens Bitch!

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    im here

    be prepared to go the near the max
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  3. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    I'm here. Maxin out
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  4. Scientz

    Scientz Im Good Writtens Bitch!

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    This niccuh loves my style...

    u were never ill...time to be exposed clown!!

    lets make final bids, im the one to take the title kids
    n i'll be damn if i go down to a buster, like tyson did
    the crowd'll never cheer for him, we dont need this guy
    so they wont give "one love", we'd rather say peace, or bye
    when ask'd who's losin, if u mention muah, ur mistaking
    they'll be quick to say "a duh", like blond conversations
    u made WonderFlow garbage, how'd i ride wit a joke??
    before i row in crews wit u, i'll go off the side of the boat
    after shots wreck dude, bring the doc's next to u
    but last time u thought u had a serge-in, he fuckin left ya crew
    ur the laugh of RM, in attempts to raise this cats fame
    he bettered his EGO, by creating an alias wit that name
    im just 'stating the obvious, cuz its a fact ya losin
    winning was ur maine goal,
    n u were lost somewhere in massachusetts
    givin ya ass a brusing, u'll be right on the ground
    lookin up n seeing stars,
    like a romantic night on the town
    how r u 2 in power rankings?, oneduh's a frail, bitch
    u need a few more mussels,
    n any other fucking shellfish
    its isn't much to see, u were advised not to fuck wit me
    now ur shyner's so bad,
    they released the rapper, n took ur eye into custody
    i keep track of shots, n i know this guy is shook
    im sending some atom,
    just to add another page to scientz books
    get bruisings n welts, wont have a chance to shoot for the belt
    cuz u cant make one's nice
    wit nelly and the lunatics help
    u got the looks of a gremlin, so ur supposed to die
    i'd let the gun wet cha, but u'd just fucking multiply
    transvestite, u got ya penis chopped for a hotter, look
    so we know oneduh, woman...in and outta the comic books
    when we fight, i bet u'll lose in an awful, manner
    i'll give u sidewalk slams, till all ya concrete thoughts r shattered

    will u create another alias after losing this match MR. EGO???

    stop pulling bitch moves n signing out ya names after defeat
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  5. -*Deranged Mind*-

    -*Deranged Mind*- got any cheese

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  6. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    I was never ill? damn, you're gettin bolder with those words
    I guess the swaying rules don't apply when you post it with your verse?
    Sci's obviously overrated, < that fact has been known
    You're named after a subject & STILL aint in a class of your own
    Just lookit ya sad scripts, I'm tired of you thinkin ya bad bitch
    You needa learn the drill...hammer, screwdriver, and everything else im beatin your ass with
    Cuz your content is garbage, one thing I certainly know
    Is that the only things you're decent at is wording & flow
    I'm hurtin you though, kid's just too lame to be the best
    Sc won't ever be #1, & this time they can't blame the BCS
    You dickrode Serge in your verse, don't say it's a mis-quote
    Besides, I'm sure he'll come return the favor in his vote
    He needs a fuckin saddle, the level I'm on is much higher...
    So I guess for you that makes this an uphill battle
    But I aint into suspense, this lesson is for ya
    When I have you on pins & needles it's a method of torture
    It's sur5ill of the fittest & there's no time for denial
    ^Don't think that means you gonna win just cuz you bitin his style
    Why you fakin the rawness? this country nig's aight,
    But I'm over-Raw.. like the fuckin shit that hangs in his closet
    That forced wordplay is getting old, ya style's not bomb Sci
    So your whole verse was played before it was used like Sadaam lines
    Don't pretend to be ballin, you're bankrupt so save it
    Nig got a new lease on life.. but can't afford the monthly payment
    If I bust the stainless, this fake'll get merked
    I'll have his blood rushin so much you think it's late for work
    Startin to hate this twirp, I'd like nothin more than to say this:
    Ya verse is nothin to write home about like boring vacations
    Star qualities? even with acting school you still might lack it
    Plus the only Scientz guy on tv is that Bill Nye faggot

    Yea, it's like that.
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  7. rhyme.

    rhyme. iwin

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    feeling this battle alot, sci was mad funny thrughout most, few real nice line's...... the shyner was dope.. the serge lines were coo... was feeling ya verse tho alot..... fell off maybe once or twice which isnt bad..... oneduh again dope verse..... sur5ill, over-raw and ur opener i was feeling alot... stayed consistant, matched sci in everyaspect flow was nice.... i jus re-read both cuz it's mad close.... and i can only see 1 couplet from oneduh i aint like and 1 from sci, but 1 was also below par from sci..... i guess imma have to edge oneduh here.....

    but mad props, feeling this battle alot.
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  8. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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    Wont have much about each bar cause its a long battle..each bar out of ten..most at end wins..i'll read carefully and vote impartially..

    I was never ill? damn, you're gettin bolder with those words
    I guess the swaying rules don't apply when you post it with your verse?
    ok..5
    Sci's obviously overrated, < that fact has been known
    You're named after a subject & STILL aint in a class of your own
    Ok flip,scientz n school bit played out..5
    Just lookit ya sad scripts, I'm tired of you thinkin ya bad bitch
    You needa learn the drill...hammer, screwdriver, and everything else im beatin your ass with
    generic rm punch..feelin a bit,but too generic n common type of punch..5
    Cuz your content is garbage, one thing I certainly know
    Is that the only things you're decent at is wording & flow
    nice,flowed nicely...6
    I'm hurtin you though, kid's just too lame to be the best
    Sc won't ever be #1, & this time they can't blame the BCS
    no-one calls him sc..so ehh..3
    You dickrode Serge in your verse, don't say it's a mis-quote
    Besides, I'm sure he'll come return the favor in his vote
    basic..4
    He needs a fuckin saddle, the level I'm on is much higher...
    So I guess for you that makes this an uphill battle
    didnt rhyme..2
    But I aint into suspense, this lesson is for ya
    When I have you on pins & needles it's a method of torture
    ok..5
    It's sur5ill of the fittest & there's no time for denial
    ^Don't think that means you gonna win just cuz you bitin his style
    niiiice...8
    Why you fakin the rawness? this country nig's aight,
    But I'm over-Raw.. like the fuckin shit that hangs in his closet
    wordplay came a bit stretched..and didnt rhyme,again..3
    That forced wordplay is getting old, ya style's not bomb Sci
    So your whole verse was played before it was used like Sadaam lines
    nice concept..5
    Don't pretend to be ballin, you're bankrupt so save it
    Nig got a new lease on life.. but can't afford the monthly payment
    ok..5
    If I bust the stainless, this fake'll get merked
    I'll have his blood rushin so much you think it's late for work
    ok...4
    Startin to hate this twirp, I'd like nothin more than to say this:
    Ya verse is nothin to write home about like boring vacations
    ok similie,but punch is ehh...4
    Star qualities? even with acting school you still might lack it
    Plus the only Scientz guy on tv is that Bill Nye faggot
    ehh..4

    68/150

    verse was nice..these breakdowns arnt holding back,cause ur both ill..so no favors..but in perspective..verse was average..

    lets make final bids, im the one to take the title kids
    n i'll be damn if i go down to a buster, like tyson did
    Nice open..6
    the crowd'll never cheer for him, we dont need this guy
    so they wont give "one love", we'd rather say peace, or bye
    not feelin much,but ok..4
    when ask'd who's losin, if u mention muah, ur mistaking
    they'll be quick to say "a duh", like blond conversations
    Nice bar as a whole..concept kinda stretched..6
    u made WonderFlow garbage, how'd i ride wit a joke??
    before i row in crews wit u, i'll go off the side of the boat
    Nice simple wordplay flipped nicely..7
    after shots wreck dude, bring the doc's next to u
    but last time u thought u had a serge-in, he fuckin left ya crew
    sweet personal..8
    ur the laugh of RM, in attempts to raise this cats fame
    he bettered his EGO, by creating an alias wit that name
    simple,but hits..6
    im just 'stating the obvious, cuz its a fact ya losin
    winning was ur maine goal,
    n u were lost somewhere in massachusetts
    Fuckin ill...9.5
    givin ya ass a brusing, u'll be right on the ground
    lookin up n seeing stars,
    like a romantic night on the town
    Niiice...feelin alot..9
    how r u 2 in power rankings?, oneduh's a frail, bitch
    u need a few more mussels,
    n any other fucking shellfish
    ok..coulda been flipped better..5
    its isn't much to see, u were advised not to fuck wit me
    now ur shyner's so bad,
    they released the rapper, n took ur eye into custody
    Lol....funny and hit..7
    i keep track of shots, n i know this guy is shook
    im sending some atom,
    just to add another page to scientz books
    Ok..6
    get bruisings n welts, wont have a chance to shoot for the belt
    cuz u cant make one's nice
    wit nelly and the lunatics help
    Not feelin...but ok..5
    u got the looks of a gremlin, so ur supposed to die
    i'd let the gun wet cha, but u'd just fucking multiply
    nice,6
    transvestite, u got ya penis chopped for a hotter, look
    so we know oneduh, woman...in and outta the comic books
    Niiiiiice.......flipped very well....sick...9
    when we fight, i bet u'll lose in an awful, manner
    i'll give u sidewalk slams, till all ya concrete thoughts r shattered
    nice finish..7


    100.5/150

    Scientz got this easy...oneduh only had one or two killer punches,but scientz had like 7..and scientz got the consistancy tip as well...great battle guys..

    Vote - Scientz
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  9. Oneduh

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  10. Vember

    Vember New Member

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    after shots wreck dude, bring the doc's next to u
    but last time u thought u had a serge-in, he fuckin left ya crew

    I was feelin that from Scientz alot, but lemme start wit Oneduh

    Just lookit ya sad scripts, I'm tired of you thinkin ya bad bitch
    You needa learn the drill...hammer, screwdriver, and everything else im beatin your ass with

    I mean, cmon, this is just gay as fuck, im sick of you given sets of faggots doin these types of punches, its an old style, just bury it already, meaning the style where you just name a bunch of things in common and shit like that
    "I wont just beef wit you...I'll pork chop, steak, and cattle too", dont know how to explain but i think you get me
    Sur5ill shit,lol, wasnt ill since i already thot of it about a month ago, i was gonna use it in my verse if i ever faced him, jus saw his name and immediately came up with it, so u dont get any credit from me with that........seems like you just focused alot of your lines on mediocre concepts/fillers and flow.....then some tho, you didnt even rhyme, idk, wasnt really feelin ya verse

    Scientz had a much higher degree of punches

    how r u 2 in power rankings?, oneduh's a frail, bitch
    u need a few more mussels,
    n any other fucking shellfish

    That was ok, Scientz just had more punches that stood out, and more consistency.

    V/scientz, oneduh's was jus kinda boring really to me
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  11. Break it

    Break it TEXTACY

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    i'ma go wit one on this his punches just conected more to me scientz couldn't keep me interested though he had a few personals in there it wasn't enough to take oneduh on this one

    vote-oneduh
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  12. Dust-1

    Dust-1 seeeleyetee

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    ^^charles u idiot, just because shit dont rhyme at the end of the bar dont mean it dosen't rhyme at all

    wow. dope battle

    One

    It's sur5ill of the fittest & there's no time for denial
    ^Don't think that means you gonna win just cuz you bitin his style

    nice


    That forced wordplay is getting old, ya style's not bomb Sci
    So your whole verse was played before it was used like Sadaam lines

    haha

    Sci

    after shots wreck dude, bring the doc's next to u
    but last time u thought u had a serge-in, he fuckin left ya crew

    wordemus


    transvestite, u got ya penis chopped for a hotter, look
    so we know oneduh, woman...in and outta the comic books

    haha yup

    nice battle

    it was close boys

    v/Sci

    return the favor
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=683897

    pce.
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  13. lil hot sauce

    lil hot sauce Dallas Mavericks

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    dope battle

    One came straight...some good linese here and there, pretty good flow, all around good verse & sci, once again.....WOW.....very dope verse, flow was on point, dope punches, u were consistant, wording was good, just and overall dope verse, so......

    vote-sci

    sorry one
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  14. Calefaction

    Calefaction The Lone Wolf

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    I'm not as geekin over the shyner line cuz we all know that the rappers name is shyne, not shyner

    with that said

    vote = Oneduh

    more consistancy, scientz you dropped some hotness and your verses have been great the last few weeks, but the wordplay shit will get you, some shit was just a lil too forced for my liking and oneduh came with one of the doper verses I've ever peeped from him
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  15. Scales

    Scales I hold weight here

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    vote-Scientz

    ....... because he didnt use the "you know the drill,....hammer and screwdriver line"
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  16. Musaeus 617BC

    Musaeus 617BC Writer of Oracles

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    v - Oneduh

    More consistent overall.

    Scientz had the Maine line, which was pretty good, but not much more standout type shit.

    "That forced wordplay is getting old, ya style's not bomb Sci
    So your whole verse was played before it was used like Sadaam lines"

    That line was good, nice flip on a predictible punchline week.

    Cool nameplays by both, but both could've been wittier & worded better.

    Pretty cool for a #1 Contendership.
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  17. Oneduh

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    Anthraxspits [7:07 PM]: a 1 line vote.. discredited my whole verse because of 1 line.. & didn't even mention my opponent
    Joseph Q Castro [7:09 PM]: yeah that dont count

    That makes it even at fours.
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  18. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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    Scales Vote Does Not Count - Due to lack of explanation, I mean he didn't even comment on both competitors.
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  19. U S E R

    U S E R NON-DOHPE.squad

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    Tie... both move on to face calefaction
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