CONTENDERSHIP 3. Out Write 4-0 vs. 4. Phryme 15-2

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  1. Oneduh

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  2. Phryme

    Phryme lets get it.

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    i'm only going 16-18, drop early.
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  3. Out Write

    Out Write New Member

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    I will..
    and if i post first im doin 20ish since its contendership
    try to do over 20 if ya can.....
    g'luck
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  4. Out Write

    Out Write New Member

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    26.

    Ur soft as shit, dont bother trick, just call it quits
    cuz I get driven' in my prime.. sorta like ya fathers dick
    maul this whore, aint a battle at all no more, id call it war
    & i kno all ya friends would believe in u.. As soon as they saw a door
    Quit talkin or im poppin' more than guns at ya poor ride
    Might as well call me Thurs... I'll always come before Phry
    got money in piles, while this scum can't hold a bill
    so tha only way he gotta Rolex is if he had to smoke a pill
    known to kill, & It aint hard believin ur new
    When I had to go back thru tha pages just to see u improve
    If u peepin my crew, we underpaid but drop flames
    So if I see Phry get'an offer.... she was 12 and tha cops came
    Still u couldn't get a girl wet spendin' hours on tha phone
    Had to be in lockdown jus' so u could shower wit tha hoes
    Got power in my blows, When i spit ya clique felt me
    You aint made one single hit but I could still get u an L P
    How could u cross me, without chokin' man...
    When u couldn't even cross tha street without somebody there to hold ya hand
    I spit tha best,& nobody would kick it wit ya crew
    His life is drama.....& he loves makin her picture in tha nude
    Rippin' in this dude, theres no bashin' fists wit Out
    Been wonderin' if u just a plain male or G... while u have one at ya house
    Put a cap up in ya mouth,if ya boys be mistakin' me
    cuz they all kno this bitch Phry chicken like employees at KFC
    Face it G, i'll take tha win, this verse'll rate a 10
    & Everyone who predicted you is not gonna make tha same mistake again.
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  5. Phryme

    Phryme lets get it.

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    Out Write or Out Writechas?



    saying i liked ur verse last week means im lying quick geek
    i'll admit.. i only voted for ur name cause i didnt feel like trying this week.
    'n ur not really known so u being an alias aint conceeding
    cause usually an alias would be someone with hype 'n worth reading.
    the way u'll write ur verse is the same way disaster works
    so i'll ask u write it on a scroll now.. it'll save us time scrolling past the verse.
    this bitch blind with his fixed rhymes showing nothing but mixed signs
    why the FUCK would he drop 26 just to be consistent every sixth line?
    dude looked up my battle vs Calefaction with the eyes of an owl
    entered the thread with no skill 'n came out with that half-assed style of Cales.
    its hard to be original when ur last battle was an aged one
    so now ur stuck using wordplay from the same era that u came from.
    u'll get hurt 'n bruised b for battling my message of cruelty
    its only hard to handWrite a loss when its ur parents preparing ur personal eulogy.
    u dont play deadly, i know cause ur punches come delay ready
    so quit frontin' nigga; ur most credible win was against Slay-Eddie.
    i see ur chick every weekend 'n now its bout that time to call
    hell yeah the bitch is crazy.. my dicks bouncing all over her vagina walls.
    i hit it that one time homie 'n left it for u to hold on to
    bitch was gross; it must've taken 4 annuals for her to grow on u.
    pulling that female aint shit, im better with sound 'n decor
    so if u were feeling like a stud, its only right to put u down on the boards.
    drop garbage again and u'll mos def be in the sky next
    ur pool of blood will have enough plasma to watch u die in hi-def.
    u force ur concepts cause u cant think of none thats fresher
    or maybe its just ur way to make me feel like i'm posting under pressure?



    26 lines, pz.
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  6. The Royal Penis

    The Royal Penis God.

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  7. The Royal Penis

    The Royal Penis God.

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    umm a pretty good battle here, i liked both verses... but i honestly think phryme was way better...


    If u peepin my crew, we underpaid but drop flames
    So if I see Phry get'an offer.... she was 12 and tha cops came
    Still u couldn't get a girl wet spendin' hours on tha phone
    Had to be in lockdown jus' so u could shower wit tha hoes
    Got power in my blows, When i spit ya clique felt me
    You aint made one single hit but I could still get u an L P
    How could u cross me, without chokin' man...
    When u couldn't even cross tha street without somebody there to hold ya hand

    this was a pretty cool section... the lockdown was ehh though

    Put a cap up in ya mouth,if ya boys be mistakin' me
    cuz they all kno this bitch Phry chicken like employees at KFC
    Face it G, i'll take tha win, this verse'll rate a 10
    & Everyone who predicted you is not gonna make tha same mistake again.

    nice finish here... good overall verse some lines were stretched too long.. hurt the flow a bit


    saying i liked ur verse last week means im lying quick geek
    i'll admit.. i only voted for ur name cause i didnt feel like trying this week.
    'n ur not really known so u being an alias aint conceeding
    cause usually an alias would be someone with hype 'n worth reading.
    the way u'll write ur verse is the same way disaster works
    so i'll ask u write it on a scroll now.. it'll save us time scrolling past the verse.
    this bitch blind with his fixed rhymes showing nothing but mixed signs
    why the FUCK would he drop 26 just to be consistent every sixth line?

    nice way to start a verse...

    u'll get hurt 'n bruised b for battling my message of cruelty
    its only hard to handWrite a loss when its ur parents preparing ur personal eulogy.
    some nice nameplay, but little long

    u force ur concepts cause u cant think of none thats fresher
    or maybe its just ur way to make me feel like i'm posting under pressure?
    cool closer


    vote-Phryme
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  8. Georgia

    Georgia New Member

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    decent matchup, wack battle overall



    out write, tha only line i liked was the thurs/phry line, everything else was either played or jus wack, the setups for the most part were horrible and the words you used to make your set up rhyme wit ya punch was horrible

    phyrme was much better for the most part, but tha verse was still borderline decent, flow wise both of yall had tha same problem with tha horrible set ups and words to make the set up rhyme wit tha punch, like quick geek, tha set ups should be as synonomous and rhymingly possible, also his ideas for his punches were kinda lame, i liked the stud, hi-def, scroll and sixth line, but they all could have been flipped more effectively and aggressively


    nevertheless, phryme gets tha easy vote
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  9. Phryme

    Phryme lets get it.

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  10. ill nik-A

    ill nik-A Dirty Sanchez!!

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    Out...

    Out those Phry punches were baaaaad man, I dont know what happened here, last week u came nice but this week its a totally different u, I wasnt feeling much here, I guess the improvement line was ur best & that was kinda weak

    Phryme...

    this bitch blind with his fixed rhymes showing nothing but mixed signs
    why the FUCK would he drop 26 just to be consistent every sixth line?
    hahaha

    u force ur concepts cause u cant think of none thats fresher
    or maybe its just ur way to make me feel like i'm posting under pressure?



    these were enough to take it

    vote Phryme
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  11. Out Write

    Out Write New Member

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    Yah i wasnt feelin it this week..
    Im really pissed off at this text shit... Im a moody person and my skill all depends on my fucking mood.... Its always been like that... Ive had enough of it, If there is a God, he dosnt want me doin this text shit....

    Whenever i make it to champ/contendership I fuck it up

    Nice verse tho Phryme
    Im signin out for good neway...
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  12. Concise.

    Concise. New Member

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    decent battle..

    out write.. i didnt like phyr punches either.. your verse was average.. but i liked the L P line best in your verse..

    Phryme verse was good.. he was consistant and i thought hes concepts were better..

    v -phyrme
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  13. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    Shit was pretty close.

    Out had a really polished verse.. Alot of creativity along with good wording.. Phryme wasn't as polished but his lines hit harder.

    this bitch blind with his fixed rhymes showing nothing but mixed signs
    why the FUCK would he drop 26 just to be consistent every sixth line?

    Haha.. True story.

    Vote- Phryme
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  14. Egotistical.

    Egotistical. You have no Idea

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    Yeah I feel you a lil bit Out, consistency is the key tho.

    I was feelin the LP Line and couple other lines,
    other than that phryme go this one. I woulda like to see you keep battling.

    this bitch blind with his fixed rhymes showing nothing but mixed signs
    why the FUCK would he drop 26 just to be consistent every sixth line?

    funny shitt.. enough for the W

    v/ Phryme.
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  15. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    Phryme wins.
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