CONTENDERSHIP 3. macmilimeteryms 3-0 vs. 4. Butler 17-2

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  1. Oneduh

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  2. macmilimeterhyms

    macmilimeterhyms Product of the 80s

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    10 lines

    check back
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  3. Butler

    Butler New Member

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    watever.
    probly doin more than 10 lines if i post 1st
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  4. macmilimeterhyms

    macmilimeterhyms Product of the 80s

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    ok

    ya mother's a hooker, worthless to many
    I spent a whole roll of coins on that trick, and it was worth every penny
    gangsta living? naa dudes a herb, you wouldn't move a bird-
    until thanksgiving when the food is served
    I'm known for blazin', mackin' hoes amazing
    I'm a Butler's worst nightmare like a home invasion
    I aint impressed wit ya fam, ya less than a man
    I could probably palm ya whole chest in my hand
    lightweight u could get high off cigars
    you have a model verse, 'cuz any mod'll recognize your bars
    Ima chokelift this joke and not let him down
    this bitch dress drag heavier than a wedding gown
    this is no dream dope fiend fall back on the hits
    you're like a desperate handyman, always lookin for a fix

    what ya got?
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  5. macmilimeterhyms

    macmilimeterhyms Product of the 80s

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    i hope this dude got an extention...
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  6. macmilimeterhyms

    macmilimeterhyms Product of the 80s

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    feel free to critique my verse
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  7. Meta Syn

    Meta Syn New Member

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    I think when I sign out, ur gonna have a cool battle with Oneduh or whoever is in the champ match
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  8. Al Murder U

    Al Murder U Lyrically...

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    good verse, id say add/remove a few words from certain lines, it will compliment your flow. Also, a couple of rhymes were just rhymes, creative, yes....but not very hard hitting..(EX. Chest in my hand)


    yo, this dudes an herb...who wouldn't move a bird...
    ...until thanksgiving day...when the food is served


    thats how i woulda did it...\

    i understand why u put gangsta living in there, but, IMO, it is unnessicary. (SP?)

    if u do require an explanation, within the line, watch syllables...it messes up the flow...and makes ur verse look unattractive...


    Also, like the every penny line, in stead of .."and it was".., id simply say
    "...she was worth every penny..."

    Good verse, other wise, sorry Butler No Showed....Good luck with ur battle next week...


    Peace..
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  9. Butler

    Butler New Member

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    damn.. somethin serious came up,

    if nobody cares, i'll drop in 5 minutes.
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  10. Butler

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    macmilimeterhyms

    U cant say shit.. so execuses? ya can't pull it now,
    its monday.. I gav u 3 entire days to edit all that bullshit out
    who are you kiddin? homeboi u got NO cread.
    ngga, the mods r lettin me post an hour b4 Oneduhs gonna close threads
    but Mac luvs textin'.. always jottin down the hardest shit
    he's got a real will to write - cuz he only got about 8 bars to live
    Na, im playin.. ur elevatin'. Iv read ya stuff guy
    u remind me of how i word my punchlines.. minus the impact, wording an punchlines
    Expose ya corny bars. and ya gay tranny world bro..
    then discuss the irony of Mac finding an Apple in his girls throat
    fluffy kid. soft as hell. Macs a Fluffy bitch
    wen i calld U a down dude
    ...i meant like feathers in the comfortr ya moms n i cuddle with
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  11. SPuL

    SPuL SP

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    lightweight u could get high off cigars
    you have a model verse, 'cuz any mod'll recognize your bars

    v.s.

    U cant say shit.. so execuses? ya can't pull it now,
    its monday.. I gav u 3 entire days to edit all that bullshit out
    Na, im playin.. ur elevatin'. Iv read ya stuff guy
    u remind me of how i word my punchlines.. minus the impact, wording an punchlines
    Expose ya corny bars. and ya gay tranny world bro..
    then discuss the irony of Mac finding an Apple in his girls throat

    Overall, this was a pretty one-sided battle here. Mac came ehh... nothing really stood out too much man. Iunno if you tried fully or what. But your wording caused your impact to suffer. Rest of your shit was aiight though. Butler killed his verse pretty much. Every line was a pretty good hit. The opener was pretty dope. lol and the minus impact line. Good shit there. So I mean IMO Butler got this with ease. Nice effort Mac, but it just wasn't enough yo.
    v/Butler
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  12. Oneduh

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    Based on that .. Imma allow Butler's verse.

    I gotta agree with spul here.. Butler just outclassed dude. Mac I see alot of potential.. You got some great ideas you just need to adapt to the RBL style wording.. Good shit tho. Liked the Model line the best. Butler aint have nothin amazing.. Like I said.. Jus outcalssed dude.. I liked the will to write line tho.

    Vote- Butler

    Butler wins
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