CONTENDERSHIP: 3. Inkwell Q 14-1 Vs 4. Charles 10-4

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  1. U S E R

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  2. eye of the tiger

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  3. Charles

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    ehh...i'd rather go 20..that cool?
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  5. Charles

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    knuckle up,cuz ya gotta fight to say im spittin worse
    memorise my lines,then i'll show u how hard i'll kick a verse
    ima be the last to spray,look at the votes past this day
    you'll be losin bad,boy...like when biggie smalls passed away
    you wont win again in the league,wont ever destroy men
    only close to the Victor,when ya snuggle wit ya boyfriend
    dont start with me,beat u untill your heart dont beat
    i'll empty a cartridge,then you'll see Ink start to leak
    get close to a dudes where i live,get wrecked n bruised
    prefer the male scent,like rappers when checks are due
    fuck you up in many ways,shouldnt be allowed to rhyme
    n if usin knifes is cold,i'll send shivers down ya spine
    thinkin ur a test is foolish,funny how dumb this fools is
    cuz ya aint pushin charlie,like those private school kids
    your a pussy man,i'll fill you wit shots till the blood spit
    i pack a string of bullets,n i'll put a knot in ya stomach
    fuck a homo,you take it too new hights with this sick shit
    i got the win in the bag,hy's got blusher,balm n lipstick
    use the ebonics of the street,in the flyest respects
    n it relates to this battle,cuz now Hy's gettin wrecked
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  6. eye of the tiger

    eye of the tiger New Member

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    Hey fagbot, nice bitch move by dropping 20 when I only had time for 14...

    You stay with that senseless shit, but you'll never catch Ink mumblin'
    Cause the only Charles to ever hold the crown, was durin the 1700's
    I'll best ya, I see ya try to change voters minds, I watch wit a shrug
    Ya last battle ya suade so much, I thought that it was a pair of Lugz
    Ya old and whack, n remember that Inkwell is a cornorery artist, fool
    When your fuckin hairline is re-seeding more than horrible farmers do
    Lines are alarmin you, look at ya corpse an see ya shirt blood stained
    Shitting on ya until Charlie Brown, like a member of the Peanuts Gang
    Ink spits flames, I'm a nightly fear, taking Charles down right this year
    My lines'll turn ya eyes inside out an use the tissue to wipe your tears
    Ink's nice with the blades, and Ink is known to drop foes when I'm on
    More ButterFlies in ya stomach then askin the popular girl to the prom
    Get outta here with that wack shit, n ya verses is what I'm speakin on
    I'm leavin a Charlie all over the ground... like the aftermath of Vietnam
    Speakin calm, wins are restin on vets, bullets are testinf Charles chest
    Ink's having your rep strewn out all over the net, like Resins concepts
    I'm bestin ya best, add to it, that Ink's ill and this fucking gay knows it
    Only alias to go 10-4 in the contendersip match, and still be unnoticed
    I flow kid, and if you catchin Inkwell, then this week, fool your luckless
    I had ya girls emotions runnin high, until I put them bitches in crutches

    Whatever .. 2x here I come ..
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  7. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    BbBbBb BREAKDOWN!!
    the point system :moon:


    iight, iight, ladies and gentlemen, THIS IS THE BREAKDOWN!!


    Charles:
    knuckle up,cuz ya gotta fight to say im spittin worse
    memorise my lines,then i'll show u how hard i'll kick a verse
    decent opener.. 2/5
    ima be the last to spray,look at the votes past this day
    you'll be losin bad,boy...like when biggie smalls passed away
    haha, pretty cool line.. 2.5/5
    you wont win again in the league,wont ever destroy men
    only close to the Victor,when ya snuggle wit ya boyfriend
    ehhh, decent.. 2/5
    dont start with me,beat u untill your heart dont beat
    i'll empty a cartridge,then you'll see Ink start to leak
    haha, good nameplay punch.. 3/5
    get close to a dudes where i live,get wrecked n bruised
    prefer the male scent,like rappers when checks are due
    nice, haha.. 3.5/5
    fuck you up in many ways,shouldnt be allowed to rhyme
    n if usin knifes is cold,i'll send shivers down ya spine
    hahaha, dope.. 4/5
    thinkin ur a test is foolish,funny how dumb this fools is
    cuz ya aint pushin charlie,like those private school kids
    ehhh, decent.. 2/5
    your a pussy man,i'll fill you wit shots till the blood spit
    i pack a string of bullets,n i'll put a knot in ya stomach
    its a gunline but nice flip, I liked the concept.. 3/5[/i]
    fuck a homo,you take it too new hights with this sick shit
    i got the win in the bag,hy's got blusher,balm n lipstick
    ehhhh.. 2/5
    use the ebonics of the street,in the flyest respects
    n it relates to this battle,cuz now Hy's gettin wrecked
    ok ending, nothing really special tho.. 2/5

    pretty decent verse
    I've seen better from u
    this seemed like it was kinda rushed maybe
    needed to put more thought into it
    it was cool tho
    ur overall score is... 26/50


    Inkwell:
    You stay with that senseless shit, but you'll never catch Ink mumblin'
    Cause the only Charles to ever hold the crown, was durin the 1700's
    haha, nice opener.. 3.5/5
    I'll best ya, I see ya try to change voters minds, I watch wit a shrug
    Ya last battle ya suade so much, I thought that it was a pair of Lugz
    hahahaha, nice concept homie..3.5/5
    Ya old and whack, n remember that Inkwell is a cornorery artist, fool
    When your fuckin hairline is re-seeding more than horrible farmers do
    ehh, hairlines are played, decent tho.. 2/5[/i]
    Lines are alarmin you, look at ya corpse an see ya shirt blood stained
    Shitting on ya until Charlie Brown, like a member of the Peanuts Gang
    hahaha, another nice concept.. 4/5
    Ink spits flames, I'm a nightly fear, taking Charles down right this year
    My lines'll turn ya eyes inside out an use the tissue to wipe your tears
    ohhhh, i liked that, niceness.. 4.5/5
    Ink's nice with the blades, and Ink is known to drop foes when I'm on
    More ButterFlies in ya stomach then askin the popular girl to the prom
    ehh, decent, not really hittin hard.. 2/5
    Get outta here with that wack shit, n ya verse is what I'm speakin on
    I'm leavin a Charlie all over the ground... like the aftermath of Vietnam
    ahaha, nice concept, good nameplay.. 3.5/5
    Speakin calm, wins are restin on vets, bullets are testin Charles chest
    Ink's having your rep strewn out all over the net, like Resins concepts
    was str8.. 2.5
    I'm bestin ya best, add to it, that Ink's ill and this fucking gay knows it
    Only alias to go 10-4 in the contendersip match, and still be unnoticed
    haha, decent personal.. 3/5
    I flow kid, and if you catchin Inkwell, then this week, fool your luckless
    I had ya girls emotions runnin high, until I put them bitches in crutches
    nice concept there, good ending.. 3.5/5

    this was a pretty good verse
    I was feelin alot of the concepts
    very creative and had some nice wording
    ur overall score is... 31.5/50


    so both point system scores together are...

    Charles: 26/50
    Inkwell: 31.5/50


    vote=Inkwell

    he edged the battle out as u can see with the point system
    he seemed more consistent and thought out
    charles was good but just seemed like he rushed it
    some of his punches were lackin that special somethin

    but good battle here, was a good read.

    holler!!
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  8. Resen

    Resen Do i need a title?

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    charles

    knuckle up,cuz ya gotta fight to say im spittin worse
    memorise my lines,then i'll show u how hard i'll kick a verse
    nah, filler
    ima be the last to spray,look at the votes past this day
    you'll be losin bad,boy...like when biggie smalls passed away
    haha,nice
    you wont win again in the league,wont ever destroy men
    only close to the Victor,when ya snuggle wit ya boyfriend
    ha, cool
    dont start with me,beat u untill your heart dont beat
    i'll empty a cartridge,then you'll see Ink start to leak
    nice
    get close to a dudes where i live,get wrecked n bruised
    prefer the male scent,like rappers when checks are due
    nah not feelin this
    fuck you up in many ways,shouldnt be allowed to rhyme
    n if usin knifes is cold,i'll send shivers down ya spine
    played
    thinkin ur a test is foolish,funny how dumb this fools is
    cuz ya aint pushin charlie,like those private school kids
    nahh not feein this
    your a pussy man,i'll fill you wit shots till the blood spit
    i pack a string of bullets,n i'll put a knot in ya stomach
    nah man to much filer
    fuck a homo,you take it too new hights with this sick shit
    i got the win in the bag,hy's got blusher,balm n lipstick
    lol..
    use the ebonics of the street,in the flyest respects
    n it relates to this battle,cuz now Hy's gettin wrecked
    nah, filer

    inkwell
    You stay with that senseless shit, but you'll never catch Ink mumblin'
    Cause the only Charles to ever hold the crown, was durin the 1700's
    ha, cool
    I'll best ya, I see ya try to change voters minds, I watch wit a shrug
    Ya last battle ya suade so much, I thought that it was a pair of Lugz
    hahaha, nice
    Ya old and whack, n remember that Inkwell is a cornorery artist, fool
    When your fuckin hairline is re-seeding more than horrible farmers do
    haha, dope
    Lines are alarmin you, look at ya corpse an see ya shirt blood stained
    Shitting on ya until Charlie Brown, like a member of the Peanuts Gang
    lol..
    Ink spits flames, I'm a nightly fear, taking Charles down right this year
    My lines'll turn ya eyes inside out an use the tissue to wipe your tears
    nahh
    Ink's nice with the blades, and Ink is known to drop foes when I'm on
    More ButterFlies in ya stomach then askin the popular girl to the prom
    dope
    Get outta here with that wack shit, n ya verses is what I'm speakin on
    I'm leavin a Charlie all over the ground... like the aftermath of Vietnam
    aight aight
    Speakin calm, wins are restin on vets, bullets are testinf Charles chest
    Ink's having your rep strewn out all over the net, like Resins concepts
    ha, cool
    I'm bestin ya best, add to it, that Ink's ill and this fucking gay knows it
    Only alias to go 10-4 in the contendersip match, and still be unnoticed
    nice
    I flow kid, and if you catchin Inkwell, then this week, fool your luckless
    I had ya girls emotions runnin high, until I put them bitches in crutches
    haha, dope

    preety nice battle, charles came preety nice some nice lines but alot of filler, inkwell came nice.. some good punches that lugz line was dope

    vote - inkwell he had the harder punches
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  9. UG MC

    UG MC Captain Zapp Brannagin

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    Charles had the Victor line, coo, cartiredge nice, male scent nice, shivers coo, knowt nice, pretty nioce verse...... Ink saude line nice, re- seeding coo, Cahrlie brown dope, charlie over ground coo, rsin line coo... Both had nice concepts but I thouhgt Ink had more consistent dope punches

    v- Inkwell
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  10. Dee-Zy

    Dee-Zy Free Willy!!!

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    this is the way I see it...

    I haven't battled text in a year or two so I might be thinking lines are dope when they are played...
    [dunno]



    only close to the Victor,when ya snuggle wit ya boyfriend
    nice.

    i'll empty a cartridge,then you'll see Ink start to leak
    nice

    prefer the male scent,like rappers when checks are due
    lol

    n if usin knifes is cold,i'll send shivers down ya spine
    nice

    i pack a string of bullets,n i'll put a knot in ya stomach
    niiice!

    ---

    Cause the only Charles to ever hold the crown, was durin the 1700's
    ouch!!!

    Ya last battle ya suade so much, I thought that it was a pair of Lugz
    niiiiice!!!

    Shitting on ya until Charlie Brown, like a member of the Peanuts Gang
    LOL

    Ink's nice with the blades, and Ink is known to drop foes when I'm on
    More ButterFlies in ya stomach then askin the popular girl to the prom
    nice, but coulda been worded better

    Only alias to go 10-4 in the contendersip match, and still be unnoticed
    ouch

    vote - ink

    although I thought ink's flow was horrible as fuck... Charles had nice lines I just think Ink was more personnal and his lines were funnier.
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  11. Tri Optix

    Tri Optix erator

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    Ive seen Charles come a lot better..his shit didnt really pick up until half-way..

    Ive also seen Ink come a lot better...he started off a bit stronger..

    Overall I got Ink taking this

    vote=Inkwell
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  12. Worst Enemy

    Worst Enemy ex-rbl champ, so?

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    Charles had alot of ink lines ive seen before, but he had a couple nice lines, but Ink just murked his name. Charlie on the ground line, Peanut gang, etc. Ink ran away with this one, but good try Charles.

    vote- Ink
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  13. U S E R

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    Up' Over No Shows
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  14. Sur*5*ILL

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    Punches: Inkwell, Easily
    Flow: Even
    Wordplay: Ink By a Bit
    Personals: Neither...Blah
    Appeal: Inkwell


    Vote - Inkwell Q Fairly Easily...Although I Was Sorely Disappointed
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  15. Charles

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    i had less time than i expected...whateva...nice verse..i dropped after a night out,just to explain why i came fuckin wack..but neverteless,nice verse ink..first two bars were fire..dont worry though..i'll be back..

    plus im not an alias..lol..
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  16. Imperial

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    Charles, i think ya bein a little hard on yaself. I was feelin both verses. Charles had a better flow. His wordplay was dope in a few lines. There were a couple played lines, but i liked the wit and overall style of the verse.

    Inkwell had more personals. They were all dope. I liked his wordplay too. Overall, i think he was a little more consistent than Charles.

    I think its closer than everyones sayin. This was a nice battle.

    Vote: Inkwell Q
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  17. Donis

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    ink took it. barely.


    charles had better flow (cuz ink had ZERO flow), but ink had a couple of punches that edged him ahead.


    v - Inkwell.
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  18. eye of the tiger

    eye of the tiger New Member

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    Yeah, I redid my verse and left the same multi's in there by accident, so my flow did suck bad.

    9-0 Anyway.
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  19. Craven Moorehead

    Craven Moorehead Big Sloppy

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    Ink got this barely - them lines be long as hell. Neither impressed me much - Charles had that 'leeking ink' line that was nice. Ink had a couple Charlie concepts that were dope - but other than that, same ol', same ol'.


    Vote: Inkwell Q
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  20. -Oz-

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    I actually thought charles won. oh well
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