CONTENDERSHIP 3. Criteria 3-0 vs. 4. Richard Corey 3-0

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  1. Oneduh

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  2. Criteria

    Criteria Superman in this bitch!

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    In.

    Rich, how you wanna do this? reg, pics or what?
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  3. Richard Corey

    Richard Corey battle like a savage

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  4. Criteria

    Criteria Superman in this bitch!

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    alrighty, lets make it 18.. wanna post early?
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  5. Criteria

    Criteria Superman in this bitch!

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    vote links here:
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  6. Criteria

    Criteria Superman in this bitch!

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    20.

    Last week was embarrassing, you know what he meant duke.
    I.Deal signed in to face someone worthy.. & no showed against U.
    Rich gets turned on by faggots, see..he sticks dick to kids
    the U.S is a male dominated society...and women cant get rich big.
    Already know whos votin for you, ironic its practically covered.
    I mean, who gon' clean ya wounds?
    ... so there.. you'll get a fracture & butler.
    Aint got a Wotw. Cuz i'll be the champ & if ya got problems.
    you WILL be seeing one next week, when checkin ya loss column.
    Haha @ you PR heads in the RBL- ya'll scrypt dudes shitty.
    The only thing phat that ever went down on PR.. has been lewinsky.
    Im ending your 3-0 streak.. as you can plainly see
    So here.. take your string of losses, it goes nicely with ya anal beads.
    But every otha night corey is suckin cock.. get real now.
    rich doesnt have 1 night stands, more like 20 minute kneel-downs.
    Topical writing faggot. this aint RSTL, kid quit gloatin' shit.
    But you are good @ usin imagery, emotion, wit
    ...when bitchin about RM votin trends.
    & when ya punched down, i'll make the flow of ya blood stop.
    You wont have a pulse beating..
    .. even though thats what he gave you in mugshots. ;)
    I ended any chance you had to win, nig.. you caught the rapeage
    as for countin any pre-mature votes for u?..
    .. The panel already signed the adoption papers.
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  7. Richard Corey

    Richard Corey battle like a savage

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    Bitch went from 16, 18 to 20…dawg, I can’t call it
    is that the line limit…or your combined, growing RBL loss column
    I beat User, Resin and Butler, but the win wasn’t always clearly viewed
    I wonder what it means that the last kid I’ve swept in 2 years was you
    And have you shaved those eyebrows yet…last time I was stressin’
    His forehead was so fuzzy…
    I twisted the knife in his skull to help the reception
    f’real, this dude’s gangsta. I always catch him clownin’ on punks
    He can throw shade on a n!gga…just by raising an eyebrow in the sun
    Yeah, Criteria’s Asian, but the fag got his culture’s history wrong
    he lays down tracks…and AFTERWARDS I run a train on his broad
    Your bitch been around the block, we’ve all been in her crotch, man…
    So many notches in her belt you could tighten the shit into a watchband
    Cot Damn…ya punches fail when connecting a lot dawg
    Ya lines should switch wireless plans to avoid the dropped calls
    Cats say Cri’s nice and that his rhymes will knock down my door…
    I guess I’ll buy it…just so his folks’ll quit followin’ me around the store
    And we know this fag is gay…bitch grabs an ass and lubes it
    when I swept him the first time, he just smiled…and grabbed the broomstick
    Oneduh vs. You will never happen…so just face it man
    seeing a Champ/Cri would be too humiliating…just ask Lakers fans



    fuck it
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  8. R.A.M.

    R.A.M. New Member

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    richard corey won this cri didnt come with anything that stood out to me. how i seen it...

    corey didnt have much either he did have this over Cri tho...

    Cats say Cri’s nice and that his rhymes will knock down my door…
    I guess I’ll buy it…just so his folks’ll quit followin’ me around the store
    And we know this fag is gay…bitch grabs an ass and lubes it
    when I swept him the first time, he just smiled…and grabbed the broomstick
    Oneduh vs. You will never happen…so just face it man
    seeing a Champ/Cri would be too humiliating…just ask Lakers fans

    them last 6 was str8, good enuff to win...
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  9. A.P.O.S.

    A.P.O.S. New Member

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    aiight this is how I see it

    Criteria- That opener was nice and a good way to start.next 6 was bland to me, the personals were aiight but just not much of a follow up.Lewinksy line woulda been nice but he aint served in office in about 6 years man.Next line was nice.Kneel down line was sweet.Closer was decent. Overall a nice verse with some obvious holes.

    RC-First 6 was bland to me..the forehead line was good, and set you up to the rest.The track line made me laugh,watchband line was mediocre,dropped calls line was hitting but kinda bland..The next line was fucking nice and would be my nomination for one of the top10 lines of the week.actually made me laugh.That closer was creative and sealed it for me.

    vote=richard corey
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  10. KempoMRK

    KempoMRK The Don Corleone

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    Last week was embarrassing, you know what he meant duke.
    I.Deal signed in to face someone worthy.. & no showed against U.
    Aint got a Wotw. Cuz i'll be the champ & if ya got problems.
    you WILL be seeing one next week, when checkin ya loss column.
    But every otha night corey is suckin cock.. get real now.
    rich doesnt have 1 night stands, more like 20 minute kneel-downs.
    & when ya punched down, i'll make the flow of ya blood stop.
    You wont have a pulse beating..
    .. even though thats what he gave you in mugshots. ;)

    vs

    And have you shaved those eyebrows yet…last time I was stressin’
    His forehead was so fuzzy…
    I twisted the knife in his skull to help the reception
    f’real, this dude’s gangsta. I always catch him clownin’ on punks
    He can throw shade on a n!gga…just by raising an eyebrow in the sun
    Cot Damn…ya punches fail when connecting a lot dawg
    Ya lines should switch wireless plans to avoid the dropped calls
    And we know this fag is gay…bitch grabs an ass and lubes it
    when I swept him the first time, he just smiled…and grabbed the broomstick

    Nice battle. Criteria came tight. No-showed was a cool bar, nice personal. Chip-loss column was tight. Kneel-down was fucking dope. And Pulse beating was cool. Good verse overall. Corey came tight as well. Reception was nice, raising an eyebrow was dope, wireless plans was cool and the broomstick line was fucking hilarious. This was even in quotables but I thought that the I.Deal line was just a quotable, so for that Corey gets it.

    v/ Richard Corey
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  11. The Royal Penis

    The Royal Penis God.

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    And have you shaved those eyebrows yet…last time I was stressin’
    His forehead was so fuzzy…
    I twisted the knife in his skull to help the reception
    f’real, this dude’s gangsta. I always catch him clownin’ on punks
    He can throw shade on a n!gga…just by raising an eyebrow in the sun
    Yeah, Criteria’s Asian, but the fag got his culture’s history wrong
    he lays down tracks…and AFTERWARDS I run a train on his broad
    Your bitch been around the block, we’ve all been in her crotch, man…
    So many notches in her belt you could tighten the shit into a watchband

    Cats say Cri’s nice and that his rhymes will knock down my door…
    I guess I’ll buy it…just so his folks’ll quit followin’ me around the store

    hah... that shit is killer.. love the folks line... always makes me laugh


    Haha @ you PR heads in the RBL- ya'll scrypt dudes shitty.
    The only thing phat that ever went down on PR.. has been lewinsky.
    Im ending your 3-0 streak.. as you can plainly see
    So here.. take your string of losses, it goes nicely with ya anal beads.
    But every otha night corey is suckin cock.. get real now.
    rich doesnt have 1 night stands, more like 20 minute kneel-downs.

    this was definitly the part i was feeling the most from cri...

    i liked the opening segment also... but when it came down to it... i liked richard's overall his flow was better also his lines just hit harder, had the laughing effect, twas a good match, anything more from Cri coulda swung in his favor.


    Vote-Corey
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  12. Criteria

    Criteria Superman in this bitch!

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    yall got me 'cri'in' right now :(


    As for corey, your hard to think of shit for
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  13. ski mask

    ski mask The Don

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    Criteria's best:

    Rich gets turned on by faggots, see..he sticks dick to kids
    the U.S is a male dominated society...and women cant get rich big.

    Im ending your 3-0 streak.. as you can plainly see
    So here.. take your string of losses, it goes nicely with ya anal beads.
    But every otha night corey is suckin cock.. get real now.
    rich doesnt have 1 night stands, more like 20 minute kneel-downs.

    & when ya punched down, i'll make the flow of ya blood stop.
    You wont have a pulse beating..
    .. even though thats what he gave you in mugshots.

    vs.

    Richard Corey's best:

    And have you shaved those eyebrows yet…last time I was stressin’
    His forehead was so fuzzy…
    I twisted the knife in his skull to help the reception
    f’real, this dude’s gangsta. I always catch him clownin’ on punks
    He can throw shade on a n!gga…just by raising an eyebrow in the sun
    Yeah, Criteria’s Asian, but the fag got his culture’s history wrong
    he lays down tracks…and AFTERWARDS I run a train on his broad

    Oneduh vs. You will never happen…so just face it man
    seeing a Champ/Cri would be too humiliating…just ask Lakers fans

    it was pretty much even with the quotes
    But I think Corey's punches were a little harder
    Cri had a cool verse thought, just wasn't enough


    v/ Richard Corey
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  14. Phryme

    Phryme lets get it.

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    Last week was embarrassing, you know what he meant duke.
    I.Deal signed in to face someone worthy.. & no showed against U.
    Topical writing faggot. this aint RSTL, kid quit gloatin' shit.
    But you are good @ usin imagery, emotion, wit
    ...when bitchin about RM votin trends.
    & when ya punched down, i'll make the flow of ya blood stop.
    You wont have a pulse beating..
    .. even though thats what he gave you in mugshots. ;)

    vs

    I beat User, Resin and Butler, but the win wasn’t always clearly viewed
    I wonder what it means that the last kid I’ve swept in 2 years was you
    And have you shaved those eyebrows yet…last time I was stressin’
    His forehead was so fuzzy…
    I twisted the knife in his skull to help the reception
    Cats say Cri’s nice and that his rhymes will knock down my door…
    I guess I’ll buy it…just so his folks’ll quit followin’ me around the store
    Oneduh vs. You will never happen…so just face it man
    seeing a Champ/Cri would be too humiliating…just ask Lakers fans

    v/corey. cri came alright but it felt rushed? what happened man? corey had the lines above. buy it/store and fuzzy/reception lines were dope.

    cool battle, pz.
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  15. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    6-0 Richard Corey wins 4-0
    Criteria loses 3-1
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