Contender Match 3. eggo vs 4. coil grimely

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  1. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    RULES & REGULATIONS

    DEADLINES

    [01] - The deadline for verses is Thursday @ 11:59pm EST.
    [02] - The deadline for extensions is 24 hours ONLY, making it Friday @ 11:59pm EST.
    [03] - The deadline for voting is Sunday @ 11:59am EST.​

    VOTING

    [04] - You must post at least 5 valid voting links within your match.
    [05] - Within those 5 links, you must be sure to vote on both the Championship and Contender matches.
    [06] - Votes must be at least 2 full lines of feedback per competitor followed by the competitor's name in which you choose to vote for.
    [07] - Voting a tie result is deemed a failure to vote.
    [08] - Voting links must be posted in your battle thread with the Champ and Contender matches labeled clearly.
    [09] - Votes changed after 1 hour of posting will be deemed a failure to vote.
    [10] - Voting is open to current participants, past champions, and active RBL moderators ONLY.​

    VERSES

    [11] - All verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 40 lines. Any breach of line limit must be agreed upon by both competitors prior to a verse being posted. Failure to comply will result in an automatic forfeit by all failing parties.
    [12] - An agreement of a line limit will serve as the maximum allowed; competitors are allowed to post under an agreed limit, but never over. An agreement is not required. Upon failure to agree to a line limit, the second competitor is thereby required to meet the limit set by the first competitor to post.
    [13] - You must not edit your verse once your opponent has posted, who in turn must not edit their verse after the first vote is cast.​
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  2. eggo

    eggo gg

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    goin 16.
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  3. coil grimely

    coil grimely Tears textcees to tidbits

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    Let's fucking do this
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  4. coil grimely

    coil grimely Tears textcees to tidbits

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  5. coil grimely

    coil grimely Tears textcees to tidbits

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    I'll see your 16 & raise you,

    like you're my teenage daughter and shit.

    :lux2:






    Aight, check...



    Meat cleavers impale - you sweet diva male, like A. Kutcher,
    'cos you thinking you going HAM & I imagine I'm the Butcher
    Like I'm tryin'a dig into ya guts with infinite cuts & precision,
    Ya body's a prison my shanks the inmate & I make my incision
    I rhyme tremendous. Your rap's are just horrendous & tragic,
    I'll feed 'em the magic; Rex Ryan's recipe to get ya ass kicked
    Always get bullied, punches got you seeing stars on the daily,
    Fists out this world feel like you hit by a comet named Haley's
    I'll rape ya slutty moms & break ya fucking jaw like it's my job,
    & I get employee of the year 'cos I'll never take any days off
    I'm the equivalent to a boss, nigha I'll give you employment,
    RBL business, & you're laughing stock here for our enjoyment
    I'm #1 contender bread to be a champ, you're backing down,
    Loafin', like Ortiz ya left open & I'm Mayweather not Pacquiao
    I'm prepared to operate this week, so you surviving is crazy,
    Punches, pummeled you placed in a hospital, hooked to EKGs
    I'm the technician, can't eliminate coil grimely; Matter of fact,
    eggo's verse would only drop a hit 'cos his punches are whack
    Only time EKG inside bitches, tracking baby's heart to listen,
    I'm dissing him 'cos I feel he should be here in YOUR position!
    Punches make 'em bleed like menstrual, continued discussion;
    Only time Eggs inside of a bitch is her ovaries for reproduction,
    Punches, with 4G connection & speed like verizon, smoothly
    School me fool please, 'cepts so old like ya style is on that 2g
    Your a meal made sure you die just & I'm out ya weight class,
    This is over easy, & your head'll crack, like an egg'll break fast
    He's such a drag. I'm a serial killer that never makes a mistake,
    Fucking fag! My opponents sweeter than a box of Gronk Flakes
    My punches are rich & high quality like the finest, purest silks,
    Ya mom's so poor she eats cereal w/ a fork to conserve her milk


    30. G'Luck.

    & I'm out...
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  6. eggo

    eggo gg

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    We agreed on 16 faggot.

    Thats novelty shit. All those lines man ya should honestly quit
    hate to break it to ya..quanity doesn't compensate for quality, bitch!
    I'll treat ya like a daughter n' bring heat like its a sonna
    escaped an encounter with Brown.. to get fuckin beat worse than Rihanna
    grime stays hopeful in the league like he'd champ if I was testin him
    every dog has its day.. n bitch I'll euthanize ya like the rest of em
    its certain ya braggin. you vs thorne? that was hurtin ya status
    TaC took a bullet for ya,.. n gave that ammo to me to murder ya faggot
    he won last week but I'm a giant, why don't this dude understand that
    ya went from bein a Victor to fuckin watching ME Cruz to a champ match
    I'm winning for fun, this faggot don't quit so ya kidding me son?
    you do have the heart of a lion... well, just a Penn State Nittany one
    Ya need help your garbage. its over n' I leave welts ya tarnished
    its ride or die. n my verse'll rip ya out of any seatbelt or harness
    the u.s. and the league are at new lows. rook just watch and see
    Coil's a contender?.. Q's situation is making Obama's look promising
    ya getting worse. nonsense speed up the process stop the pause son
    careers headed Downhill.. Im here to find a Cliff to drop it off of

    Rofl you shred em n left nothing good in em. Ill smash your surface
    bold claim but ATLEAST ya practiced on yaself your last two verses
    your girls quick to call out a slut. but nothing she'd admit son
    its a pot callin a kettle black..we just Teabag her like she is one
    I gotta try to squash your shit. I'm just lying I'd conqueor it
    voters slept on him so long mattress companies dying to sponsoer em
    30 lines of boredom. but homie I ain't mean to rush ya truely
    verse isn't worth readin.. likea book after ya seen the fuckin movie
    dropped 30 to act like ya had a shot. I don't stress this mans trash
    I did worry. like "damn thats just less concepts for the champ match"
    you a contender? man noone predicted..or guessed it you queer
    even make a wish foundation couldn't of pulled strings to get you here..
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  7. ski mask

    ski mask The Don

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    I'm the equivalent to a boss, nigha I'll give you employment,
    RBL business, & you're laughing stock here for our enjoyment
    I'm #1 contender bread to be a champ, you're backing down,
    Loafin', like Ortiz ya left open & I'm Mayweather not Pacquiao

    Only time EKG inside bitches, tracking baby's heart to listen,
    I'm dissing him 'cos I feel he should be here in YOUR position!
    Punches make 'em bleed like menstrual, continued discussion;
    Only time Eggs inside of a bitch is her ovaries for reproduction,

    vs.

    Thats novelty shit. All those lines man ya should honestly quit
    hate to break it to ya..quanity doesn't compensate for quality, bitch!
    I'll treat ya like a daughter n' bring heat like its a sonna
    escaped an encounter with Brown.. to get fuckin beat worse than Rihanna

    Rofl you shred em n left nothing good in em. Ill smash your surface
    bold claim but ATLEAST ya practiced on yaself your last two verses
    your girls quick to call out a slut. but nothing she'd admit son
    its a pot callin a kettle black..we just Teabag her like she is one

    dropped 30 to act like ya had a shot. I don't stress this mans trash
    I did worry. like "damn thats just less concepts for the champ match"

    This was a close match, I liked both verses. I think eggo's was a little more solid. Coil had a real nice flow, and eggo's flow was cool too. It's a hard one to call, but I feel eggo gets it by a hair.

    Vote: eggo

    could go either way, nice battle fellas
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  8. EKGenius

    EKGenius New Member

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    Coil Grimely:
    line and Pacquiao line were fresh concepts.. serial/cerial, laughing stock, and out of this world line was played, but laughing stock line worked for me.. the other two not too much.. egg line was predictable but cool flip.. whack line and rex ryan line needs a little bit more to it to be effective.. incision line was filler to me.. not feeling your yo mama joke and 2g line.. Overall the verse had a nice flow to it.. definitely a solid drop.

    Best Bars:
    Only time EKG inside bitches, tracking baby's heart to listen,
    I'm dissing him 'cos I feel he should be here in YOUR position!
    Punches make 'em bleed like menstrual, continued discussion;
    Only time Eggs inside of a bitch is her ovaries for reproduction,
    ..I like these two bars the best – nice flip.. second bar was nicer than the first bar.. cool concept on my name tho

    Eggo:
    First bar definitely had a nice flow – decent personal..champ match line, make a wish line, teabag line, victor cruz line was all ok.. mattress line and cliff line was a little played – the mattress line tho is better of the two.. obama and movie line could’ve hit harder.. not feeling – dog line, ride or die line and TAC line. This verse had also a nice flow to it. I definitely like the personal attacks as well. Solid.

    Best Bars:
    I'll treat ya like a daughter n' bring heat like its a sonna
    escaped an encounter with Brown.. to get fuckin beat worse than Rihanna
    Rofl you shred em n left nothing good in em. Ill smash your surface
    bold claim but ATLEAST ya practiced on yaself your last two verses
    ..LOTB i believe is the Brown line - it was as nice as coil's best bar, but more points for the more direct personal.. i also like the next personal bar as well.

    Close battle. Good verses from both, but when I was reading each again I felt like Eggo had a more consistent verse. The drop in attack is less noticeable in Eggo’s verse than Coil’s.

    v/Eggo
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  9. coil grimely

    coil grimely Tears textcees to tidbits

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    Upping.

    Good drop from the opponent.

    Appreciative of the critiques thus far.

    Additional feedback should only be necessary.
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  10. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    eggo wins and advances to the Champ Match.
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