Contact Lens

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by MADDRAPPER, Jul 11, 2003.

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER I own you motherfuckers..

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    Contact Lens

    Even cats in black Benzes wear contact lenses, act of frenzies
    In some cases pay fantastic cash ther eighter plastic or glass
    Like elastic lasts with a stretch of power even a wretch in a shower
    Hate to take them off water dim the gloss keep thew wet for an hour
    As a Gemini exposed to a stimuli of events like acid fast
    To react in fact my lens focus on the hocus pocus around
    Town I’m the guy right down with eyesight I can see a locust frown
    Each view seem to teach you new images without blemishes
    They select and shape correct and educate my vision with perfect finishes
    Can’t explain why my brains try change the strange things I see
    And rearrange my sea of thought blind while my optic nerve swing free

    MADDRAPPER PEACE
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  2. *GeMiNeYeZ*

    *GeMiNeYeZ* ~§¤Sweet Shinobi¤§~

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    bump... bump bump it up! STOP SLEEPING!

    maddrapper i want to commend you. alot of times no one comes in here to reply to your stuff but you keep right on posting piece after piece everytime your other ones make it to the second page... and i commend you for that. your poems may be different than the others but thats only because you've flavored it with the culture this board is made for! and of course this was a nice piece... i cant understand why people are sleeping. keep bringin it my man!
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  3. *GeMiNeYeZ*

    *GeMiNeYeZ* ~§¤Sweet Shinobi¤§~

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    bumpin it up to the top again before i get off for a while.
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  4. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER I own you motherfuckers..

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    Gemineyes Thanks For The Props For Real Girl Must Keep Dropping This For Real
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  5. pr0liphix

    pr0liphix one n only

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    damnn homie lols ..smh.. what happened?!?! no offence yo but this was whack it made no sense

    forrealz Elevate homie, then maybe people round here will start showin you respect

    latez`
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  6. mocha_licious

    mocha_licious New Member

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    this was very original...nice...keep droppin..u got skills.....~one l ove
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  7. Kareem

    Kareem Still Ballin

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    lmmfao this verse was horrible
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  8. vinous

    vinous New Member

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    i liked this, like mocha sed, original, not too sure exactly what its about but it had a nice flow about it. pz.
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  9. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER I own you motherfuckers..

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    mocha_licious and vinous thanks for responding to this for real yall really appreciate it
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