Conscious- The Rain freeverse & If Thoughts Could Kill

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  1. Bmore Conscious

    Bmore Conscious Hip Hop •••••••••••••

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    Check this out, I'm new to this site and I need some decent feedback. The Rain track is originally me and my manz True Story, but he needs to record his verse over, so I just posted the freeverse. If thoughts could kill, is an acapella I did...Check me out yall...drop links and I will RTF on the real. Its like the 4th and 5th song down. thanks

    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=372546
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  2. LeGaCy204

    LeGaCy204 ToO SiCk WiTTa MiC

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    aiight...

    The Rain Freeverse:

    Beat is maaad dope....loved it...quality was good....flow was nice,held it down throughout the track...nice use of vocab....all around a nice verse...you remind me of AZ...

    If Thoughts Could Kill:

    Damn...Quality is sick.....cant wait til u got a sick beat behind this...flow was real nice...liked the lyrics in this one more than the freeverse.....delivery came out real good...put some real emotion into this.....chorus was also hot too...some dopeness right here....keep it up...

    return favour:

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=966753

    stay up

    peaCE
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  3. Bmore Conscious

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    thanks man I appreciate it, I got u
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  4. LeKCheR

    LeKCheR Active Member

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    Hmm Hell of alot better then I expected to hear, first thing was pretty good, I loved your voice, Lyrics were pretty good, Actually liked this one alot your flow was pretty awesome.


    Now on to the next.


    Voice was good on this one, like the lyrics, cant really say shit about the flow but it sounded pretty good, keep up the work bro.

    Later
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  5. Bmore Conscious

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    thanks man........uppin this
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  6. Praverb

    Praverb I breathe hip hop...

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    The Rain Freestyle-

    ayo Conscious...this is a sick verse fam...you sound similar to AZ and Big L like a mix...lyrics are on some intellectual thugness wooooooo....

    "so I gotta stay bright and still fight for destiny"

    woooooooooooo...get at me fam
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  7. Bmore Conscious

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    no doubt I appreciate it
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  8. BilCosbynDZK

    BilCosbynDZK www.myspace.com/techomega

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    once again my mans is killing it as usual not to much to say you got alot of intensity when it comes to lyrics and the presence is sick as usual

    stay good fam keep reppin bmore to the fullest

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  9. Bmore Conscious

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    u kno whats up
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  10. Bmore Conscious

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    uppin this I will RTF
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  11. Bmore Conscious

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    comon yall...........
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  12. Bmore Conscious

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  13. [ Yung Truth ]

    [ Yung Truth ] fuck u, pay me

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    If Thoughts could kill :

    I like how you startin' it off...

    I like the idea of doin the accapella, nice idea...

    You got a nice lil' flow homie. I'ma peep something else and hear how u sound on beats haha

    Good shit homie

    peace
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  14. DMH.

    DMH. The G.O.D.

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    Returnin the favor...Listenin...the beat was tight. You got some nice emotion in your voice, delivery and flow was on point for the most part. Multies were pretty good, maybe either your voice is a little high or the beat seems a little too quiet..i'm not sure. It could just be my speakers..Overall about a 7.5/10, keep at it..peace.
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  15. nahledge

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    Returnin' The Favor yo, u got nice verses kid, likes the steez, beatz is tight werk on the real, yo flow nice meng, heard the rain traq n felt vox were to hot 4 the beat, it could be my speakers tho', nice shit...keep grindin'...B.E.Z.

    PEACE
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  16. Bmore Conscious

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    uppin some mo.............
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