Color Blind (Spoken Word)

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by IAmDonoTg, Feb 6, 2013.

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  1. IAmDonoTg

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    Very well written, maintaining a rhyme scheme inside of telling a story is a very hard thing to do, I felt like you sort of stepped out of character with that one scheme that ended with "It will be so delicious" but outside of that scheme it flowed really well.
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