Club Style Rap

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  1. ctkoth

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  2. Ace the Prophet

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    What up man? My first thought is that your delivery isn't completely believable on the hook. I don't feel like you sound completely natural. I think the vocals need to be a bit louder too. The beat's overtaking it. In the verse though I think your quick flow works much better with your delivery. The slower flow is where your delivery needs work IMO.

    Overall this ain't my kinda style but you still did good with it. Just work on that delivery and making it more natural. Keep it up man. 1
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  3. ctkoth

    ctkoth New Member

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    i agree with the hook; though I don't know what you mean by slow part (I don't recall any of it being slow)
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  4. Ace the Prophet

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    Just meant your slower flow compared to the quicker, double-time type flow. The faster flow works better IMO is what I was tryna get at ya!
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