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  1. homicidal thoughts

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  3. Mr Similie

    Mr Similie aka C-LiTe

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    listening...hot intro....first cat had a good presence, i liked the drop in!....goes great with this beat...the beat is dope too man...simple, but hard hitting and melodic....the hook seems a little ammature, but you can get by with it....ive heard alot worse getting repeated by the masses...lol.....i liked your verse too man, but there was quite a similarity in vocal presence between you and the first MC...im just honestly telling you from a first time listeners ear...over-all it was a solid track....what did u record on though man?...just ondering cuzz it sounded a little muffled.....maybe its just the mp3 quality....hmm..hit me back man

    oh yeah i responded to the last message u left me on my link, go check that!
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  4. Erattic

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    listening...beat sounds pretty coo...grundgey..
    first cat sounds iight, slow flow, delivery is ok but presence needs a bit of work i think.
    hook, ionno, it doesnt sound like it was mixed right maybe, i liked it but the voice has to be tweaked a bit.
    2nd dude
    flow sounds pretty on point as well.
    delivery is coo,ur presence is a bit better. lyrics are there too.
    solid track guys
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  5. Yung Keyz -3rd-

    Yung Keyz -3rd- R3 General

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    Good look C-Lite.. this "Demon".. lol

    holla at me my dude...

    erratic.. good look on the feed
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  6. Konseetid

    Konseetid ask about me

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    first emcee.... like ya voice... delivery is coo... flow is ight... you pretty good actually... ya name sounds familiar and i rememba you bein sick... this was coo... just not what i rememba if you tha right person... but solid verse

    i like tha hook... always like cram singin on hooks..

    you... flow is nice... betta then first... delivery... like it..nice.. emotion and presence is ya strongest point to me... you do good wit everything else to but you mean every word you say and are very comfortable sayin what you say which is good... you do you thing.. good shyt

    peep mine if you get a chance

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1040647
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  7. Yung Keyz -3rd-

    Yung Keyz -3rd- R3 General

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    thank you.. appreciate it my dude...
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  8. Nikkles

    Nikkles Don't Fuck With Chuck

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    Beats hot I love shadowvilles new style, 1st guy.....flows nice on this fits the beat well voice reminds me of someone cant remember though overall decent verse, this hook is dope as hell Im loving it, 2nd guy.....a nicer verse I thought than the 1st guy, flow is a lil more switched up and not as slow, lyrically it was nice.

    This track was a good listen keep banging guys.


    Peace
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  9. IllLiterature

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    1st cat.. feeling this so far..you got a good style.. flows pretty good.. solid delivery.. this was a good verse man..

    hook- i dig the cats voice.. i dont so much dig the beginning of the hook lyric wise but the struggling bit at the end is dope

    2nd cat i really liked the switch right at the end of the verse off top.. now your flow is nice you got a good flow.. voice is nice.. delivery carries the feel well.. lyrics are nice.. good structure.. nice verse man

    nice track yall

    return the favor
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  10. LeKCheR

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    Beats not bad at all


    First was iight doesnt seem like he matured in his voice yet his flow wasnt bad at all he might end up being something some day.. Just keep at it bro!


    Hook.....Im an r&b singer myself so NO! Not diggin the voice.


    2nd dude...souding better then the first verse but flow is sill kinda choppy, you just need to keep at it and practice that delievery man But overall this wasnt a bad track at all yall keep it up man..



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  11. noneedz

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    First flow is pretty sick. Polished and solid.

    Feelin the singing...

    2nd dude has more energy, Feelin the lyrics on this dude more than the first...

    Still feelin the singing...

    Beat is pretty sick...

    The outro singing is really sick...

    Good quality...

    Tight track PZ
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  14. Infinite Skillz

    Infinite Skillz R.E.A.L. Emcee

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    Returning your feed.
    Love the beat. First emcee has good cadence. Might need to take a step back from the mic. Hook has a good emotive quality.

    2nd emcee is much better lyrically and matches the first as far as beat riding goes.
    I like this hook even more on the 2nd time through.

    Good drop but the first dude might want to maintain a greater distance from the mic. I don't think it was a reverb issue but I could be wrong.
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  15. ceson

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    peepin...first dude was pretty coo,sounds like jada alil bit. flow was the only thing that kinda botherd me.wasnt feelin it much..overall besides that it was a coo verse...voice n delivery was nice.2nd dude was coo..quality still sounds kinda funny...kinda muffled,but aside from that..this is coo...verse was ight lyrically,delivery was coo..kept me listenin...
    hook was ight,didnt draw me really but wasnt bad...

    overall..props to yall...a coo drop...
    return the feed..
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  16. homicidal thoughts

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    yeah.. finally someone noticed, we were having problems with the settings and i definetley hear it... good ears guys i respect that you are listening that alert..

    ceson ill hit that link after im done listening to nimmies interview
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  17. Yung Keyz -3rd-

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    yea .. we got the quality issues worked out... everything on point again...

    damn u the 200th person to say i sound like jada.. appreciate the thoro listen tho

    much luv

    Keyz
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  18. C-Money

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    dope shit homie


    The white jadakiss hahahahaha
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  19. smellycheeseguy

    smellycheeseguy Chedda Cheese

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    Beat is dope, real nice ambient sound to it.

    Keyz - Nice delivery and mic presence. Flow is cool, nice swagger.
    Lyrics are cool. Good concepts.

    Hook sounds nice, the guy has a good voice for it.

    Your verse - Cool lyrical content, nice ideas here too. Flow is on point. Mic presence is good as well.

    Everyone did their part very nicely. Dope track overall.
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