Cleaning Out My Closet flow (DSP Exclusive)

Discussion in 'Open Mic' started by dsp2k5, Aug 23, 2010.

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  1. dsp2k5

    dsp2k5 Dime Sack Pimp

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    OkDon't give a shit if you listen and "f" the recognition.
    Because, yes, I'm dissin after figuring out my sis wasn't kidding
    When she told me you was holding my son, skitsin
    For a fix flicking ya Bic at ya pipe tryin to hit it
    With him in ya arms, mom, how could you do that to us?
    After what we been through, don't you think we've had enough?
    Then had the nuts to report your son to child protective services
    Month later they busted you for makin meth to furnish
    Maybe I shoulda paid more attention, been more observant.
    But you was my mom, so ill cross that bridge, then burn it
    You earned it, you deserve it, so stop threatening me
    If you haven't figured it out, you are dead to me
    Thanks to u I see my kids on weekends then dread the rest the week
    And every breath in me seems to be slowly fading away
    And in your sick mind, its probably making ya day
    So day by day I'm cleaning this closet, draining da pain.



    Had this on my minde. A lot of drama goin on in my life. If u got kids, show em u love em every day. You never know when the closest people to you will turn on u and then u will be in the same boat as me and we will both be crying on that bitch lol
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  2. Lment

    Lment New Member

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    yea man deep stuff i touched this subject a bit on my new rhyme i know some people goin threw the same shit thats life tho bro its all gravy flow wise its ok i think the emotion kinda ran to deep on this one your structure was on point but felt a bit generic i feel what you gotta say tho


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    dsp2k5 Dime Sack Pimp

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    Thanks for.the feedback. Glad u liked it. I checked yours out too homie
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