Discussion in 'Emcee Battle Area' started by 0Mek, Jun 3, 2003.
7:21 PM 6/3/2003
call me a gangsta...
its not wha i am...
its wha i do...
yo yo yo...
is more like a monopoly and
Some bishes don't even rate to talk
claiming gangsta's on RM
but skate while we boardwalk//
hate... but this fate...
was your own fault//
like dirt on my clothes you
you shoulda stayed outta my threads//
cutting loose from your salary
watch as i'm DE-CAPitating HEADS//
and your ID's a rock//
gay porn you saw "interest" in Microsoft
and you clicked the "X" box//
more to be pleased
stretched 3 inches beyond 360 degrees//
it must bepainful to join your sore-ority//
you bore me
you just played the nothing in my neverending story
even if i let you vote
that would only be 1
7:46 PM 6/3/2003
this motha fucka thinks he's special so lets give him a reward. his dreams have come true, he's maid it up on tha board. he thinks he's "old school" yea i've met him before. he's tha type that talk big and then run like a bitch. why don't u come to tha sticks? are u black? ull get hung cuz of it. no offense, its not me thats racest, its yer own kind that don't like those wanksta cases. i toke weed an dust all day wit many diffrent races. no cops around here only open quiet spaces. if there is beef, no1 ta stop it so embrase it. face it, yer fake ull never get famous. ever been in jail? i bet u took it up tha anus, cuz thats wut u do. i don't understand ur math i dropped out of school. oh so i bore u? u don't know me fool. i will destroy u, ur nothin just another never has an won't be. yer shit belongs in tha past, tha future is me.
i stole yer dinner.......
it was nasty too
uppin for votes
im high as fuck... oh yea good battle cival
his shit was good and he had good rhymes and is had a nice flow
next voters break it down please
hmm.. i'm sorry but i wasnt feelin this battle what so ever..
cival - the boldening words has GOT TO GO.. the changing font has GOT TO GO.. thats too newbie.. the style i'm not really feelin.. its definately original, but sometimes i just cant catch on to the way you want us to flow it.. it would probably sound good in audio though - dunno though.. also some of ur punchlines are alright ideas, but some are just plain CORNY.. sore-ority? nahh.. the ending was good.. de-capitatin heads was very lame, lol.. stay outta my threads isnt bad but its played as hell.. boardwalk line was iight.. overall a bit below average verse, but u got potential so just keep polishin ya skills..
omek - well first off u cant just continue to write like that, becuz its pure SHIT like that.. theres no flow at all, u need to seperate ur bars, becuz that jumbled pile looks horrible.. i dont wanna read something if its straight goin on like that.. second, this verse had no punch to it and that racist line was SO STUPID i couldnt even believe you would write something so bad.. i'm white too, so dont say somethin like "oh well ur black thats why u hated it".. nah.. i hated it cuz it blew ass.. like the rest of ur verse.. it wasnt a battle verse, it was about u taklin about how u think ur a big gangsta.. the whole verse was pathetically horrible.. u talked about smokin with all races, then u talk about hangin blacks, then u talk about cops and no quiet spaces, and then math?? how the fuck is that supposed to hurt him?? u had a line in there sayin "oh so i bore u" - and i think that was ur best line becuz thats exactly what u did to me with this garbage..
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