**CIPHER BATTLE CHAMP***ROUND 1 - The Grimace vs SpeedyCalhoun

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  1. Sir Bustalot

    Sir Bustalot I am Jesus

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    10-16 lines

    first to five votes wins

    only explained votes will count
    if youre not sure on what to look for in a good battle consider these points:
    1. over-all aesthetics (eg. flow, rhyme scheme, sentence structure etc etc)
    2. how personal is the diss? is it generic(could be directed at anyone) or is it very personal?( eg. viscious attack on his opponents character profile or RM history etc etc)
    3. are the punches hardcore? or are they kinda tame and make you think the dude slangin em is a pussy?

    etc etc.....you know the deal

    Capiche? Capiche!

    im not saying you cant do it at all...but dont clog threads up with extreme amounts of chit chat and shit talk

    Deadline for your verses is midnight thursday....if youre worried about time zone differences and all that bullshit dont wait till last minute to post and you wont have to worry about it.....
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  2. The Grimace

    The Grimace Jeff Goldblum

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    Checkin' in

    ..was wonderin when we'd battle

    i might not make the deadlinee thoughh

    Goodluck
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  3. SpeedyCalhoun

    SpeedyCalhoun Obviously...

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    I got Grimace first round??? Lmao. Aight, checkin' in. Good Luck nig.
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  4. SpeedyCalhoun

    SpeedyCalhoun Obviously...

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    Who droppin first?
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  5. SpeedyCalhoun

    SpeedyCalhoun Obviously...

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    I guess I'm up then...
    Now I really ain’t have no dirt on you, and/or no beef with you, so this is what I came up wit....

    Grimace (n.) – a sharp contortion of the face; expressive of pain, contempt, or disgust.
    The Grimace – Easy Win

    Death’s a bitch, and I guess you resorting to marry her/ Don’t sleep…
    She’ll be the first thing you see on the screen, like Good Morning America/
    Don’t go extorting your barriers, I retort with forks on the regular/
    Grimace, you know the deal. I’m the reason those contortions are flaring up/
    Yo peeps can see it on your face, you just need to get a taste/
    To prove your too feeble for my pace/
    So what’s the chances of you beating Speedy in a race?/
    We were tired of Emcee Squared, so he got easily replaced/ Or so we thought…
    Garbage is garbage no matter what, but you want to mess with the facts/
    Changing your name, but how effective was that? What’s next for this cat?/
    From an emcee, to an expression. From a square, to a pain/
    Not much progress, you seem to be impaired from the change/
    You hoped for rags to riches, all I see is fags to bitches/
    Which means you winning this battle is just way past your limits/
    Your ass is finished. Busta, give me a hot one/
    I killed this nigga quicker than Dick Cheney with a shotgun/
    One…
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  6. The Grimace

    The Grimace Jeff Goldblum

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    here we goo

    not much emcee's on here, this prick mainly is not one
    i spit insanely, you aint dick cheney with a shot gun
    your the other political figure that got hung
    i ripp carboard, sorry for wreckin ya house
    ya careers goin no where, im selectin ya route
    feel ashamed i was jus sexin ya spouse
    cuz im the only cat to fuck with a generic mexican mouse
    dont mix booze in beef unless you wanna lose your teeth
    so speedy watch out for the crews you meet unless your fond of your losin streak
    i sound out spit as i clown mouths sick/ ill take out this proud mouse quick
    hit him with a round house kick,
    cuz what i spat is hype if you think your wack your right
    cuz the difference between our talent is like your sweater n you
    black n white
    i spit juice, ill give you your booze worth feel bad i put your mom through birth
    take this honest rapper back to new earth n make the **Truth** hurt



    almost didnt make it

    nice verse speedy
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  7. Brains

    Brains The Phantom

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    Dang, it wasn't even that good of a line. Style biting is frowned upon, but this was offset but Grimaces feed of your Dick Cheney line (which didn't make sense by the way because he didn't actually kill anybody).


    I'm gonna go with Teenie Speedie on this one because he attempted better punches. He didn't actually land better punches, but he attempted them. Grimace concentrated a bit too much on flow in my opinion.

    vote- Speedy Calhoun
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  8. Saga Genesis

    Saga Genesis New Member

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    SC: Okay verse. Nothing too strong punch-wise. Liked the concept of the nameplay. Though, I think it could've been worded better, the concept was straight. Everything else was okay. And as Brains said, Dick Cheney didn't kill anyone.

    Grim: Okay verse here, too. Nothing too strong punch-wise here either. Wasn't feeling the play off his name w/ Speedy Gonzales. Perhaps if worded better, it would've been nice.

    Vote: Speedy. Close battle, but Speedy slightly edged it out.
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  9. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    OH man this one was close...

    Grim- Got this one by a hair b/c Speedy did the damn thing but some of his flow was just for the ear...A couple of lines didn't make since as others stated. Over all grim battle verse brought out the mistakes in Speedys piece....

    Grim=win

    Speedy- your flow was a tight read nice word play and good punch lines
    I like the flow but by a hair you didn't get this one...
    But I would like to see another by you and Grimm...
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  10. CaTchW0n

    CaTchW0n New Member

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    speedy gonzalez:Garbage is garbage no matter what, but you want to mess with the facts/
    Changing your name, but how effective was that? What’s next for this cat?/
    From an emcee, to an expression. From a square, to a pain/
    Not much progress, you seem to be impaired from the change

    I thought that was his best diss, if you what of gave us more of that scheme it wouldnt been close

    mcsquared:not much emcee's on here, this prick mainly is not one
    i spit insanely, you aint dick cheney with a shot gun
    your the other political figure that got hung

    Thought that this was a ill opening and rebuttle, and the multis and puches were consistent enough to carry him through the verse

    decision: with the win...IM going with grimace, just thought he brought more cinematics to the battle..good battle from both all around
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  11. R3DRUM

    R3DRUM Bloody Mary Jane

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    brains i think ur just a little conceited... he used "from" a couple times thats not style biting.. iMO..anyways i liked speedy's flow and multis better...grimace came with heat too though...like the roundhouse kick rhymes...tha lines were phat but .sound out spit and clowns mouth sick werent too gooda rhymes...calhoun brought some better competition to the table so my vote is------speedy
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  12. Brains

    Brains The Phantom

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    lol, teenie speedie is young and impressionable, he's subconciously emulating me. Plus I like to mess with the kid.
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  13. SpeedyCalhoun

    SpeedyCalhoun Obviously...

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    O really? Well you really messin wit yoself riding your own dick like that. Especially if you think I studied your verse enough to copy it. I haven't changed my flow since before I heard of you. Look it up, you seem to be good at that...
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  14. SpeedyCalhoun

    SpeedyCalhoun Obviously...

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    What's that 3-2 me? Eh, same to you Grim
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  15. Brains

    Brains The Phantom

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    lol, I said subconciously. I guess you'll learn what it means in 11th grade.
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  16. Sir Bustalot

    Sir Bustalot I am Jesus

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    nice battle verses boys.....

    ill call it soon if no more votes come in....

    3-2 for speedy.
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