As far as the video. It lost my attention pretty quick. I would have found atleast three seperate locations that fit the theme of the song to help keep people interested and stimulated. People have a very short attentionspan once it seems like theres nothing new to see they loose interest fast. Going along with that train of thought, I wouldve cut shots alot quicker. I cut every half second to a second on 90-95% of my shots this also helps to keep peoples attention. As far as the production on the song. The mix is ok with the exception of the essing. Those high frequency esses are the thing that bothers me most in mixes. Try using a DeEsser to keep them to a minimum. Also the track is not mastered. Your hitting about 50% of the room you before clipping. When mastered to a -1dcb output veiling your hitting about 98%.