Chi Mil Ent - "Dead End Sketch" - W.A.S.T.E.L.A.N.D.S. - NEW Track PEEP!!!!

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  1. Taiyamo Denku

    Taiyamo Denku W.A.S.T.E.L.A.N.D.S.

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    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=174599&songID=3230411

    Lyrics By: W.A.S.T.E.L.A.N.D.S.
    verse order:
    1st Taiyamo Denku
    2nd Augury
    3rd Short Fuze

    Cuts By DJ SqrachMasda

    Produced by Dave Derrilykt
    Mixed and Recorded By : Taiyamo Denku At Denku's Garden Milwaukee, WI

    Subject matter: Pretty Much this song is about drawing out the end of your life, whether it be in graffiti form, pencil form, or any other utensil, pretty dope track

    ENJOY
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  2. Fernelity

    Fernelity Active Member

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    Denku's rips it, awkward hearing you go so fast.

    Second cats flow falls off in different places, sounds sorta rushed.

    Third cats flow was on point, had a smooth flow and all.


    Beats awkward, concept on the track was good. Second cat needs to take more time and vibe into a beat a little better, he rushed two or three bars.

    Good track though
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  3. Non$en$e

    Non$en$e The Truth

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    This was pretty good, I felt this... the beat was hot, the scratches made this even hotter, Denku you ripped it... but the second & third mc I didn't really feel too much, they need work ...the mix was good too...good shit though, it would of been better if the other two stepped they game up, but it was cool...

    check me out
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=952768
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  4. Huey Fig Newton

    Huey Fig Newton Rebel-He-Is

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    coo shit denk...this beat is dope honestly, reminds me of somethin the beasties would do.

    keep droppin
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  5. terminill

    terminill Flatline Productions

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    the beat is hot.
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  6. Taiyamo Denku

    Taiyamo Denku W.A.S.T.E.L.A.N.D.S.

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    elevate this ....
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  7. comPleXNY

    comPleXNY Illest Alive

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    fruck yea
    a new wastelands track!!! wooo0o0o beat is sickness denku u ripping this! i like it flow is on point..

    the scribbles and cuts is very dope

    augury word up! lol yea he rippin this too.. he more slow'd down.. shyt is sick though.. yall is gettin sicker and sicker all the time i here u


    augury- always feeling ya ish u got a dope voice.... nice flow... dope delivery..

    yo dope track yall nice ish..

    .99 cents for the single
    lol
    thats whats up

    peace yall
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  8. Cire

    Cire The Peoples Champion

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    Stick to repping milwaukee and dont ever even make a reference to chicago in your life.
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  9. DiSSaster

    DiSSaster Theorian Williams

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    LOL@Cire.. you're an asshole..lol

    You doing your thing Denku.. You can across this quite nice. I agree with everyone
    else tho, the second cat is off here and there.. where he just added to many words
    in certain parts of his verse and it didn't flow right..The third cat was aiit.. you really carried this track Denku and with a tight hook on here would have made this track a valued single in my opinion..

    Other than that, I like what I hear dawg.
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  10. Taiyamo Denku

    Taiyamo Denku W.A.S.T.E.L.A.N.D.S.

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    THANKS... and why not Cire I lived in Chicago for 8 years dickface.... So get off my nuts battle rapper.... Anyway thanks to those who peeped... appreciate the feedback.
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  11. Jaywalk

    Jaywalk Jungle Jack Records

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    Liked the chorus, shit sounded hot. Wasn't really feeling the beat on the verses or the verses. Not really my cup of tea, wasn't clean enough on both accounts (verses and beat), although it was original. Keep doing your thing.
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  12. Taiyamo Denku

    Taiyamo Denku W.A.S.T.E.L.A.N.D.S.

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    thanks for peeping
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  13. SacriFICE

    SacriFICE TRUspeak

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    Alright, sorry I didn't peep last night.

    Hmm, well... Denku rips this... the beat is kind of weird, it's dope in between verses.

    The second cat, man, I don't know.. not fluid enough for my liking, can't really get myself into his verse...

    Third emcee came better but once again, nothing is drawing me in...

    Denku shined on this... loved the scratches too...

    Peace.
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  14. Taiyamo Denku

    Taiyamo Denku W.A.S.T.E.L.A.N.D.S.

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    thanks for peeping
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  15. C-Money

    C-Money New Member

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    Pretty Cool Beat..Nice Concept

    First Guy Was Nice...Fastest Shit I've Seen You Do...And You Did It Well

    Second Guy Was OK too...I Caught The Flow Off Once....Other Then That Nice

    Third Guy Was My Favorite Due To His Voice And Delivery

    Overall: Polish Up Your Flows and Shit...Other Then That Nice Track
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  16. Taiyamo Denku

    Taiyamo Denku W.A.S.T.E.L.A.N.D.S.

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    thanks for peeping yo
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    Taiyamo Denku W.A.S.T.E.L.A.N.D.S.

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  18. SpoonFull

    SpoonFull Lovely

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    yeah man, your flow is on point. This is a dope beat. Dave is the man. Very b-boyish. el-p type ish. Anyways, you start this off mad proper. Sickness. the scratching is sick. 2nd cat I'm not feeling. Don't like his flow or empasis on his voice. Honestly, I don't like the 3rd verse much either. It's just kinda lacking elements. I felt your verse but thats about the extent of it which is odd because I usually feel like yall spit on tracks with equality as far as skills, but iunno. Not my favorate WASTELANDS joint.
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  19. nawshus

    nawshus STAMPEDE!

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    the production on this joint is mad jiggy crazy haha got that "bwachicabwawow" brick house effect, i'm loving hit... old school feel from all of yall as far as flow on this, kinda beasty boy-like without the screaming.. lyrics are decent, i'm going with spoon on this one and saying maybe the other two dudes can do a little something something to elevate.. tai came pretty correct with the flow more than the others and the delivery.. decent drop, man keep them coming..
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  20. Taiyamo Denku

    Taiyamo Denku W.A.S.T.E.L.A.N.D.S.

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    thanks for peeping
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