Cheemagun Vs. Retulen Reactus

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  1. -Oz-

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  2. cheemagun

    cheemagun THA RAWEST

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  3. Retulen Reactus

    Retulen Reactus Text Legend.

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    goodluck.

    Chee, beat me? Please, im destroying ya steez
    This battle's a breeze..
    Plus ya bitch known to "tour ret" like that yelling disease
    Ret's a proven winner, the pick of the litter
    I bet ya bitter
    but you dont belong in the north, like birds in the winter.
    your sexuality's striking man, your a homo it seems
    and not suprisingly..
    Im alway's finding Gun', down a faggots jeans
    quit with the gangsta act, we all know u soft
    maybe it's cause..
    The only colored bricks you've seen where in wizard of oz
    Kid, you've already lost, you'll be in a plummiting dive
    don't be suprised..
    when i put more "fucking clips" into then a sex addict's hardrive
    My lyric's divine while yours can't even keep the the times
    It's ovbious why..
    we can connect to ya emotional 'swings', more then ya punchlines
    Rip out ya spine..so if you step you'll get wrecked
    You've got nothin left
    No wonder you recycle twice as much as enviortmentalists
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  4. cheemagun

    cheemagun THA RAWEST

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    Wow.. Talk about plaaayed.

    ayO..
    you dropped quick, but quality’s what its about homie
    looks like you went thru writers block..
    then bought a fucking house on it
    your multis are forced, your concepts from years ago
    the Mag’s directed to Ret..
    when Def said North flips aint original
    I can drop generic, & still my raps are nicer
    I'll even put a hole in your shadow & turn your kneecaps to visors
    the RBL just started, but I have a lust for game
    you’re the 2nd pussy I ate already.. your girl was yesterday
    she said you were a Prince, and my dick was dope
    but what it feels like when the Doves cry?
    when you use your bitches soap
    fuck lightweights, & Re’s a 90 pound weakling
    he’ll become a serial killer..
    from the Wheaties this clowns needin
    so what if you been here longer, your weak kid I’m dumb nice
    & if your old school.. you’ll witness chee relive Columbine

    next..
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  5. Muffffy

    Muffffy Attack of the Muff

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    Chee, beat me? Please, im destroying ya steez
    This battle's a breeze..
    Plus ya bitch known to "tour ret" like that yelling disease
    (ehh ok)
    Ret's a proven winner, the pick of the litter
    I bet ya bitter
    but you dont belong in the north, like birds in the winter.
    (DAMN U I WAS GOING TO USE THIS..but differently/better flipped..it gets an ok)
    your sexuality's striking man, your a homo it seems
    and not suprisingly..
    Im alway's finding Gun', down a faggots jeans
    (eh)
    quit with the gangsta act, we all know u soft
    maybe it's cause..
    The only colored bricks you've seen where in wizard of oz
    (fuck no)
    Kid, you've already lost, you'll be in a plummiting dive
    don't be suprised..
    when i put more "fucking clips" into then a sex addict's hardrive
    (OH hell no..plAYYYYYED)
    My lyric's divine while yours can't even keep the the times
    It's ovbious why..
    we can connect to ya emotional 'swings', more then ya punchlines
    (eh)
    Rip out ya spine..so if you step you'll get wrecked
    You've got nothin left
    No wonder you recycle twice as much as enviortmentalists
    (eviromentalists/recycle lines are very played

    you dropped quick, but quality’s what its about homie
    looks like you went thru writers block..
    then bought a fucking house on it
    (cool)
    your multis are forced, your concepts from years ago
    the Mag’s directed to Ret..
    when Def said North flips aint original
    (HAHA)
    I can drop generic, & still my raps are nicer
    I'll even put a hole in your shadow & turn your kneecaps to visors
    (eh)
    the RBL just started, but I have a lust for game
    you’re the 2nd pussy I ate already.. your girl was yesterday
    (eh)
    she said you were a Prince, and my dick was dope
    but what it feels like when the Doves cry?
    when you use your bitches soap
    (rofl)
    fuck lightweights, & Re’s a 90 pound weakling
    he’ll become a serial killer..
    from the Wheaties this clowns needin
    (ok)
    so what if you been here longer, your weak kid I’m dumb nice
    & if your old school.. you’ll witness chee relive Columbine
    (heh)

    v/chee

    for obvious reasons.
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  6. I'm Deon

    I'm Deon the guy who fucked ur mom

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    opener vs opener

    rest of this battle was fucking garbage

    v-chee

    muff gave a lil too much credit here

    bland shit fellas....step it up.
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  7. Venamis

    Venamis Moderator

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    Dub R:

    Chee, beat me? Please, im destroying ya steez
    This battle's a breeze..
    Plus ya bitch known to "tour ret" like that yelling disease
    Whack, come on.
    Ret's a proven winner, the pick of the litter
    I bet ya bitter
    but you dont belong in the north, like birds in the winter.
    Played and this flow is getting repetitive and annoying.
    your sexuality's striking man, your a homo it seems
    and not suprisingly..
    Im alway's finding Gun', down a faggots jeans
    So according to you, faggots are the only ones who carry guns.
    quit with the gangsta act, we all know u soft
    maybe it's cause..
    The only colored bricks you've seen where in wizard of oz
    WTF?
    Kid, you've already lost, you'll be in a plummiting dive
    don't be suprised..
    when i put more "fucking clips" into then a sex addict's hardrive
    Decent.
    My lyric's divine while yours can't even keep the the times
    It's ovbious why..
    we can connect to ya emotional 'swings', more then ya punchlines
    Cool
    Rip out ya spine..so if you step you'll get wrecked
    You've got nothin left
    No wonder you recycle twice as much as enviortmentalists
    Can you prove he recycles?

    CM:

    you dropped quick, but quality’s what its about homie
    looks like you went thru writers block..
    then bought a fucking house on it
    This is cool
    your multis are forced, your concepts from years ago
    the Mag’s directed to Ret..
    when Def said North flips aint original
    Nah not feeling it.
    I can drop generic, & still my raps are nicer
    I'll even put a hole in your shadow & turn your kneecaps to visors
    No.
    the RBL just started, but I have a lust for game
    you’re the 2nd pussy I ate already.. your girl was yesterday
    Weak.
    she said you were a Prince, and my dick was dope
    but what it feels like when the Doves cry?
    when you use your bitches soap
    Cool I guess.
    fuck lightweights, & Re’s a 90 pound weakling
    he’ll become a serial killer..
    from the Wheaties this clowns needin
    Not feeling.
    so what if you been here longer, your weak kid I’m dumb nice
    & if your old school.. you’ll witness chee relive Columbine
    Alright kind of feeling this.

    Obviously this was very one sided, Cheemagun came so much harder then RR did with his punches and the way his verse was structured. Chee came with wittier shit that I was feeling and half his shit wasn't as played as bad as Retulen Reactus.

    Vote - Cheemagun
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  8. J o o k

    J o o k Guest

    This battle was one sided clearly.

    Retulen just lacked creativity in his verse.

    Chee wasn't amazing, but he had it more consistancy.

    v/ Chee
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  9. ~!! Outcome !!~

    ~!! Outcome !!~ ~ WHAT WILL IT BE ~

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    hmm...this battle wasnt that great...there were some played concepts in retulens verse but flipped nicely in my eyes. i think ret just came harder wit the couple punches that he threw...chee, verse was aight man..couple nice lines like your opener was tight...but i think ret took this...

    vote=ret
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  10. Retulen Reactus

    Retulen Reactus Text Legend.

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    uh.. ya

    4-1.

    and lmao @ my opening being sorry

    Tour Ret.. tourrets..

    Kid, you've already lost, you'll be in a plummiting dive
    don't be suprised..
    when i put more "fucking clips" into then a sex addict's hardrive

    how the fuck is that played, ive been here 4 years and never seen it..

    lets get some real votes, and good verse Chee.
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  11. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    overall
    ret came played...opener had potential but setup sucked...and I had a mood swings line about 3 yrs ago "I'll stand back and see wut this fool brings/How did all those punches miss when even ur mood swings?//...anyways everything wuz rather played...chee had sum coo lines...tha pussy line wuz simple but raw...


    vote=chee

    1Ne
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  12. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    KAH-lum bine


    not

    KaLUHM- bine



    lmfao
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  13. cheemagun

    cheemagun THA RAWEST

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    ^ yea lool.. but those are the words that can go both ways. like houston houseton.
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  14. Dukane

    Dukane The God

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    This battle was straight

    Chee - you had some nice punches, so were good other were below decent
    Retulen - Some punches were ok but I seen some played punches which lost this for you

    Vote = Cheemagun
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  15. How did all those punches miss when even ur mood swings?//

    thats an Adelphi line, word for word.
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  16. Retulen Reactus

    Retulen Reactus Text Legend.

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    My lyric's divine while yours can't even keep the the times
    It's ovbious why..
    we can connect to ya emotional 'swings', more then ya punchlines

    and mine..was nothing alike... vadik
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  17. i was talking to jay cee.
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  18. cheemagun

    cheemagun THA RAWEST

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  19. Aces Full

    Aces Full I'm Sick...

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    k well, this wasnt even close in my opinion. not the best ive ever seen chee come, but it didnt matter. rets style just wasnt workin for him, rhymes were basic and punches fell short. nice concepts chee.

    v/ chee
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  20. Retulen Reactus

    Retulen Reactus Text Legend.

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    I apologize for the quick drop this week. Had alot of stuff to do.

    Damn tho, i wanted to start of good and go 9-0 again :(

    i just realized how played some of my lines were.
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