Check My New Beat - Out My Window

Discussion in 'Beats/Producers' started by BoeTheMessiah, Oct 16, 2004.

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  1. BoeTheMessiah

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  3. Kaybi

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    feelin the whole thing, but the logdrums put a hurt on the overall flow of the beat... strings are nice as hell.... drums are cool

    this needs bass and panned a little differently melody louder along with the drums... fuck around with the levels trust me.... really likin it.. more than anythin i peeped tonight.. this hot potential... add a crash or somethin in the beginning of the drums sequence.. i think it would do a lot for it. keep dropppin em

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    Thanks for the critiques. I see what you mean with the logdrums and the bass. I'll definitely work more on this beat.
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    Yeah Im gonna rework the beat so the logdrums are lower and are less frequent. Im also going to add more bass which will give it more BOOM.
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    bass is muddy as hell....i like the sample u used tho...sound like sumthin i would use...i woulda chopped this tho and made sumthin completly different if i was you.....snare is a lil weak for this.....maybe a different drum pattern would suit this also....just me nitpickin tho....this was a solid listen fam


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    Thanks for the critique. I turned down the bass a few noches so now the beat is alot clearer. I also turned up the snare to add some punch.
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