chase murda scroll files.....u wish i was

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  1. Chase Murda

    Chase Murda hostile enviroment

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    my minds genius combined wit my rhyme thesis,
    will define a crime prefix to have u dyin to read this,
    eat this,lyrical food that im servin u,
    i can go from wearin a turban too, a crazy persian dude,
    ill come thru drinkin burban FOOL swervin thru an burst a few,
    lil nigga log off ya computer this adult time an ya curfews do,
    straight up elliminate anybody who wanna imitate or intimidate,
    discriminate ill bend up straight waivea finger an say snatch ya dinner plate,
    my wise enterprise is at a all time member rise,
    got a bunch of ninja spys drifftin like da wind in the sky,
    sit back watch da tension fly,
    front on me tho an end up in the crimson tide an this is why,
    my lyrics will leave ya vison fried split an sick inside,
    run quick an hide this is genocide a real man dont bitch an cry,
    snitch or switch up sides niggas quick to pick up brides,
    jus to clip they time they shouldve thought about it when they did da crime,
    once a tuff guy but get caught them lips is flyin,
    i mean mouth piece gonna faster then gun clips be firin,,
    test
  2. Chase Murda

    Chase Murda hostile enviroment

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    watch out im comin.....
    test
  3. Bloody Red

    Bloody Red New Member

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    OK .... Chase Murda , how do you go from this to the stuff I read ealier , this has content and rhyme scheme ,
    its creative and as a reader i want to continue ,
    you should ONLY drop this type of open mic , not the same subject all the time ,
    just the same creativity and energy .. great battle type open mic





    front on me tho an end up in the crimson tide an this is why,
    my lyrics will leave ya vison fried split an sick inside,
    run quick an hide this is genocide a real man dont bitch an cry,
    snitch or switch up sides niggas quick to pick up brides,
    jus to clip they time they shouldve thought about it when they did da crime,
    test
  4. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    nice Chase Murdock. You come out with confidence and this reads like a decree of authority. Good job on control and manipulation of the rhyme scheme. Top notch for what this written set out to do, imo establishes a hard foundation, genius in control of rhyme thesis. I see what you did here. A true lyricist.

    I'd love to see you render a more personal piece that reflects your thoughts on life, struggle or any other topic outside your normal repertoire of glitz and glam punch lines. That would be a welcomed evolution in the "chase murder presents" series...
    test
  5. TheVisionary

    TheVisionary New Member

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    This is very strong with the rhyme schemes, at some points the flow is on but some points the flow could be tightened up, mainly just this one part:

    straight up elliminate anybody who wanna imitate or intimidate,
    discriminate ill bend up straight waivea finger an say snatch ya dinner plate,

    is too many syllables. The swagger on this is visible though, this piece went hard.
    test
  6. NatiStrong513

    NatiStrong513 New Member

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    what up? where the real mc's at?
    test
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