Chase murda presents....twenty rock diss.....ill expose u

yo 20,u must be on OL"E if u think u can control me,
im like shinobi mixed wit obi kenobi crossin u like kobe,
nigga,u sweet like sobe,
da type of pussy that sits on da commode to pee,
ya mind is all gone cuz u spit da wrong songs,
on da streets u tuff,but at night u putcha thongs on,
a year ago i told u to kill yaself,thats really hood,
so im goin back to that date,an tell u,u really should,
look at dat clown yall,he settin his self up for a down fall,
ill go to town hall find his motha an make her suck my brown balls,
fuck her so hard she"ll dip in a hole like a ground hog,
an when i put it in her ass she howled like a hound dog

dam homey,its been a long time since u post a diss,
u must jus got out da hospital from da last time i broke ya shit,
an i heard u put a mixtape out an it floped,
shit,my open mic materials better then whatcha albums got,
an thats sayin alot,especially what a name like 20 rock,
so da tracks should be crack,i dont mean da real 20 roc,
u dont have no money,so u cant afford kush,
u so fuckin stupid u still think da president is george bush,
like dave chapelle show when he was black sayin fuck ******s,
ill destroy u lil nut twistin butt kissers,
an your boy told me u dont have da rent money,
an he asked if he could borrow da kids tent from me,

Warning shot

Man your first 3 bars are nice and overall imho you defeated 20 rock,but your subsequent material is weaker than your first 3 bars...stay focused my brutha and MAINTAIN AND ELEVATE your power in your verse as the verse continues,never slack off.The way I suggest you do this is: think of a topic and about how many bars you want to write,then write down the hardest punchlines you can think of.Write those down.Then rhyme those punchlines.So if you want to write 16 bars? Think of 16 of the hardest punchlines that you can...doesn't matter if they rhyme or not.Then take each punchline one at a time and think of a PUNCHLINE THAT RHYMES WITH IT.That way you have punchline after punchline,instead of a set up bar and THEN a punchline.Good luck.

peep---- http://board.rapmusic.com/open-mic/1260194-demon-chase-2-a.html

this was nice like he said them first three bars was off the hook and i also like this wow nice rhyming and thinking on this one 20 rock will have a tough time defeating this one

so da tracks should be crack,i dont mean da real 20 roc,
u dont have no money,so u cant afford kush,
u so fuckin stupid u still think da president is george bush,

Fuck ah warning shot...smile from ya neck bitch!!! CHASE MURDA DISS

You talking all hard like you bossin on the corna'
While im servingg head shots like your ass from arizona
I got people that aint ever even heard ah you
you one pussy and my people down ta murda crews!!!
BX reppa but i keep techs wetta....
give heat checks so keep sweatas or ill leave heads weatha'd
in need of ah lip tether...cuz time is chedda
N you waste mine so flat line...ima stay go getta...
get lost in your metropalitan, you just petro swallowin
he gassed up wallowing, till them hollow tips swallow him
you could loose your virginity if you just fuck off...
or the 44 buck shot saw'd off leave ya raw..
clean between ya jaws....
ligiments and fragments fallow...
n now you like fuck rappin " how the hell im gonna swallow?!?"
i leave fitted hats click clacked n twist backs like kit-kats...
so get back or get clapped , now get down or lay flat!!!!!

20 rock came bck on you,Chase.His verse click-clacked on yours man.Fire backGood drop,20 rock

u a bum...u an dethstryque r the same person u joined in july 08 and deth joined october 08.****us deth responded with periods in it jus like in your verses...next time dont make it so fuckin obvious..cuz if people really thought your rhymes tighter then mine they wouldve responded to that piece of shit diss u posted a few days ago..i can still see a big goose egg on your response list...hahhaha..clown jokes on u

you dumb as fuck man....i dont have any other accounts...you starting to sound like sqaw....this bitch always thought he was beast, but whenever someone said anything good about the other person he was always quick to say "ALIAS ALIAS ALIAS"!!!!!!! STFU and just run with the blows.... i RAN YOUR DROP WITH THIS VS. HOMIE!!!!!!! yeah and my one drop was weak ill admit but if you look and EVERY SINGLE THING YOU DROP...its always got half of the lines about some whack ass far out shit, just because every half sentence the word rhymes doesnt mean its dope....

I highly doubt Deth and Twenty are the same ppl.
Where as Bagglad and that "13 year old white kid" who hasn't posted since are the same ppl. LOL

all i gotta say is look at your post nobody replys to your verses...point blank..so that alone tells u that im nicer then u...thats why u posted your verse in my verse post cuz thats the only way your shit will get any attention...u cant fool me son..go kill yaself itll make this world 1 percent better...u must didnt hear obama..we need change hahahahahahah

get real son....daddys gonna let you in on a secret....ive only posted 183 times 99 percent of them are from 3 years ago son!!!!!! in the last couple years i have written or worked on writing ZERO times....if i posted even half the amount of stuff you did id be on some notorious shit compared to what you drop....think about it son daddys gonna take a break from the website, if i wanna keep making drops ill put it on a real beat and go to my boys studio....your hard like titties dog...

nigga u garbage...your takin a break from this website only cuz i said so..an on da real u can talk tuff all u want but trust me i know ya location i can have niggaz in your own hood to come hit u up,u a small fry compared to me..an u dont make music cuz nobody ever heard of ya an if u did put shit out your cd would used to break weed on...u really think u got what it takes to beat me u must be out of ya mind homey..listen chill da fuck out before somethin bad happens to ya an this aint a threat its a promise so u can copy this thread an gie it to the cops if u want too i dont give a fuck cuz i eat bitch niggaz like u for lunch...i hate fake ass niggaz like u..u all should be beheaded an corpse buried beneath pig shit...fuck wit me an see what happens..bum ass nigga