chase murda presents... RM finest part 1

Discussion in 'Open Mic' started by Chase Murda, May 23, 2012.

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  1. Chase Murda

    Chase Murda hostile enviroment

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    my flows passion wit da most action in closed caption,
    ive wrote more post tracks since bo jackson was wearin old classics,
    no actin imma ghost trapped in a broken casket rope attached to it,
    soul rose an snapped it quick now out comes more drastic shit,
    but wait..i got more ass to kick real fast an swift blast a clip,
    smash ya chic,thrash her lips dam near makin her crash da whip,
    chase da black reaper that raps ether,
    we pack heaters while u jus started buyin gats last easter,
    i had to put on a couple pounds for big niggaz that wanna knuckle down,
    yeaaa nigga try to tussle now youll end up muscled to da ground,
    feel like ive lost my mind somewhere tossed thru time,
    an i jus brought 2 ninez they da real reason im da boss of crime,
    of course i grind dont believe me fine i cant force da blind,
    ill torch an scorch ya rhymes so bad nobody will support ya lines,
    chase wont be denied or pushed back,
    i got words thatll getcha head blazed like a fat ass kush sack,
    ya raps is garbage an even ya pics fuckin looks wack,
    u shook catz talk gangsta but never be around where da crooks at,
    test
  2. Chase Murda

    Chase Murda hostile enviroment

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    full sail university hahahaahahaaha
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  3. Resilient.

    Resilient. .. . ..

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    I won't lie, this is a better open mic then you have written recently. The multies at times are a little forced, so work on your content a bit. Flow was in and out, mostly in. I liked that "gats last easter" line. That had a cool feel to it.

    Suggestion.. Get off this "gangsta rap" shit for a minute, write something heartfelt. Up your game a little. This Hoe Running, Gat Blasting, Wig Splitting style you are stuck with will get you nowhere. Keep elevating.
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  4. Jai-Z

    Jai-Z Bangem, Jai

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    Good shit Chase! Keep that hunger bro.. ;)
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  5. Chase Murda

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    yea good lookin jai ya boy chase got this alllll day every day...stay up ma
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