chase murda presents...beast flow 1

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  1. Chase Murda

    Chase Murda hostile enviroment

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    mafia connects wit criminals wit bombs strapped,
    stay invisible to cops an try to avoid any contact,
    my rhymes send hits on niggaz wit murderous contracts,
    niggaz will getcha mom clapped jus to send a message dat da dons back,
    keep thinkin u flash gordan an ill air u out jus ask jordan,
    end up witcha ass cornored head split wit a trash bag on it,
    im like a hornet comin to sting ya eyes an nose,
    cuz all the lies u told will eventually turn tables an suprise u hoes,
    yeaaa i might talk about guns,drugs an violence,
    thats cuz i refuse to be a bum thats a fake thug in silence,
    thats one of the reasons this worlds fucked up cuz u scared to speak,
    an i got a huge list of u bastards so prepare for beef,
    ill let da machetti tear ya cheek so bad itll impair ya speech,
    fuck computer talk my niggaz will come directly to where u sleep,
    dare to compete beware da beast is near ya reach,
    dont care if u weak shouldve fellback now bare your grief,
    test
  2. Chase Murda

    Chase Murda hostile enviroment

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    yahoooooooooo hoooooo hahahahaha
    test
  3. Resilient.

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    I'll be honest, here. The flow is actually pretty good. Once I got passed the "ghetto" typing ("u" instead of "you," "jus" instead of "just," "da" instead of "the," etc.) it rolled off the tongue nicely. The last 2 lines were soooooooo forced, though. You tried too hard with some more multies on the pare for beef/pair ya speech multi. Lyrically this was terrible. Your vocabulary, or lack there of, didn't make for a lyrically good open mic. Like I said you have an understanding of flow - work on your content. Nigga this and Nigga that clapping niggas and spitting wigs - no.

    Not really a beast flow, but keep at it.
    test
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