Championship Match: 1. Sikabod Khrayne 6-1 vs. 2. Serge dot T 4-0

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  1. KempoMRK

    KempoMRK The Don Corleone

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    Heres the rundown, you get set for a rippin'
    I'm bout to take a #1 down' like pissin while im sittin'
    You're either fuckin' ya life up or you confused a trend...
    'Cause I thought Arab bitches covered their faces to other men
    I macked ya moms n sister too, used english n spanish
    Now i got 2 tongues under my belt that isnt my language
    You fuck a camel, theres no room for arguement
    ^..If that comments the last straw...ya girl will starve to death

    vs

    Comedy Central crook u know it, u bit in the worst way
    & if not...who watches Appollo...
    n starts thinkin bout black dicks in the first place?
    serge gay in every sense of the word this sensitive herb can't hope to touch me
    even his mad doggin lookin more like a hopeless puppy
    trust me, Serge ain't bitin no more he tired of that dismal road
    he ready to be cleansed...already rockin the baptismal robe
    I'll slit ya throat so get ghost ya better be duckin out
    or get put under more dirt than u got around ya fuckin mouth
    a strikin resemblence every verse, this bitten flow u sell us
    prove u milkin Beautiful Minds so much Russell Crowe is Jealous
    simpleton stay in a cespool it's kinda shockin when lookin
    shady to the bone...even his damn eye socket is crooked
    look at his eye brows colonial times coulda helped u to save face
    cuz them thick black lines u own bring in a fortune on slave trades

    Serge had quite a few oh shiiit punchlines but Sika was consistent as hell. He had lots of fresh bars and shit I ain't ever seen before, nice wording as well. Sika got this cos of consistency.

    v/ Sikabod Khrayne
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  2. EYE-Z

    EYE-Z rote my vrse playing Bout

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    sika said bitin n flippin followed by filler in every other line, not to mention played mexican lines that were counted with the green card line.

    yup pretty much


    I'll slit ya throat so get ghost ya better be duckin out
    or get put under more dirt than u got around ya fuckin mouth

    kid laced wit dirt & the growth in size imminent
    fuck a gang of ring worms his neck got it's own crime syndicate


    look at his eye brows colonial times coulda helped u to save face
    cuz them thick black lines u own bring in a fortune on slave trades

    were the shits i felt most...

    Serge

    Heres the rundown, you get set for a rippin'
    I'm bout to take a #1 down' like pissin while im sittin'

    You're either fuckin' ya life up or you confused a trend...
    'Cause I thought Arab bitches covered their faces to other men
    I macked ya moms n sister too, used english n spanish
    Now i got 2 tongues under my belt that isnt my language
    i like the concept, flow almost hit it, though dope idea

    You know you lost, so just get the peelin'
    'Cause you're drownin' in a see of doubt to compliment ya sinkin' feelin'

    Mouth's closed 'cause teeth crooked, sharp n' bad
    I slapped the back of his head n' circumsized his dad
    rofl

    A tempermental newbie, ya actions is the funniest
    'Cause only cool you been keepin is ''serge dot T'' on ya buddy list

    serge you had more quotables, flow was better, better structured verse.

    Cool battle

    Vote- Serge
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  3. Pharric

    Pharric The End...

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    Alright battle....both dropped pretty consistent verses. Both had few lines a thought were alright, and a few I thought were grabage. All in all though, I'm voting for Khrayne. He had the better verse IMO, and I felt his punches moreee......
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  4. Mic-illaH

    Mic-illaH aka paisano

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    i had to peep the champ match...so here it goes.....

    You ain't gangstah, not crip or piru
    And you ain't dope 'cause you suck at more shit than I do
    funny
    He only won last week...nah, I'm kiddin'
    Ya oponent really won, he just wasnt dick ridden
    ok
    Heres the rundown, you get set for a rippin'
    I'm bout to take a #1 down' like pissin while im sittin'
    haha nice
    Beaner this, lawnmower that...a fool with few hopes
    I got my green card, now you need to google new jokes
    nice
    You're either fuckin' ya life up or you confused a trend...
    'Cause I thought Arab bitches covered their faces to other men
    haha nice
    I macked ya moms n sister too, used english n spanish
    Now i got 2 tongues under my belt that isnt my language
    wow, nice.
    Plus i been rubbed ya mom, Sika knows thats its true
    That the last time we shook hands, he chilled by a falopian tube
    ok
    You know you lost, so just get the peelin'
    'Cause you're drownin' in a see of doubt to compliment ya sinkin' feelin'
    ehh ok
    Mouth's closed 'cause teeth crooked, sharp n' bad
    I slapped the back of his head n' circumsized his dad
    hahaha this had me laughin
    You suck, ya verses have bland features
    And your lyrics are about as in-depth as land creatures
    ok
    You barkin' up the wrong tree, a bum lookin' rover
    ya not witty...
    ...You drop outta the box like I just tipped ya house over
    ok
    You fuck a camel, theres no room for arguement
    ^..If that comments the last straw...ya girl will starve to death
    nice
    A tempermental newbie, ya actions is the funniest
    'Cause only cool you been keepin is ''serge dot T'' on ya buddy list
    nice



    yo, no one here really knows me so you'll learn this quick
    unlike u I never AIM'ed for respect I just earned it bitch
    filler
    Comedy Central crook u know it, u bit in the worst way
    & if not...who watches Appollo...
    n starts thinkin bout black dicks in the first place?
    funny
    serge gay in every sense of the word this sensitive herb can't hope to touch me
    even his mad doggin lookin more like a hopeless puppy
    ehhh stretched.
    trust me, Serge ain't bitin no more he tired of that dismal road
    he ready to be cleansed...already rockin the baptismal robe
    not feelin
    I'll slit ya throat so get ghost ya better be duckin out
    or get put under more dirt than u got around ya fuckin mouth
    ok
    empty room show why he shark every line he's turnin around
    Serge reachin new Lowe's so he can finally furnish his house
    hahaha nice
    murder this clown claimin he writin & gifted
    verses like a fat Wendy's cook...
    every punch-in nuttin but bitin & flippin
    no
    a strikin resemblence every verse, this bitten flow u sell us
    prove u milkin Beautiful Minds so much Russell Crowe is Jealous
    decent
    tell us them lines are yours, u lyin filthy faced bitch
    if you ever get a bar of ya own...use it to bathe with
    decent
    kid laced wit dirt & the growth in size imminent
    fuck a gang of ring worms his neck got it's own crime syndicate
    ok
    simpleton stay in a cespool it's kinda shockin when lookin
    shady to the bone...even his damn eye socket is crooked
    pretty funny
    look at his eye brows colonial times coulda helped u to save face
    cuz them thick black lines u own bring in a fortune on slave trades
    real nice
    2 huge lumps on ya forehead this niggas a dunce, why?
    brain warps his cranial walls n still can't form origional punchlines
    ehh not really


    Serge.T
    Sik had some lines in his verse that were just not hard hittin. Serge was a lot more consistent. Father circumcision line was nice. and 2 language line was nice. good battle.
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  5. Noobie Ned

    Noobie Ned i'm noo here

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    yo, no one here really knows me so you'll learn this quick
    unlike u I never AIM'ed for respect I just earned it bitch
    --------DECNT

    Comedy Central crook u know it, u bit in the worst way
    & if not...who watches Appollo...
    n starts thinkin bout black dicks in the first place?
    -----HAHAHAH ..PERSONAL AND HARD HITTING AS FUCK

    serge gay in every sense of the word this sensitive herb can't hope to touch me
    even his mad doggin lookin more like a hopeless puppy
    -----EH

    trust me, Serge ain't bitin no more he tired of that dismal road
    he ready to be cleansed...already rockin the baptismal robe
    ----------LOL..COUDA MADE THIS HIT HARDER THOUGH

    I'll slit ya throat so get ghost ya better be duckin out
    or get put under more dirt than u got around ya fuckin mouth
    ----HAHA

    empty room show why he shark every line he's turnin around
    Serge reachin new Lowe's so he can finally furnish his house
    -------------------EH..NAW

    murder this clown claimin he writin & gifted
    verses like a fat Wendy's cook...
    every punch-in nuttin but bitin & flippin
    -------------------------COOL CONCEPT ..WORDING WAS POOR THOUGH AND IT DOESNT HIT HARD

    a strikin resemblence every verse, this bitten flow u sell us
    prove u milkin Beautiful Minds so much Russell Crowe is Jealous
    ----------------------EH

    tell us them lines are yours, u lyin filthy faced bitch
    if you ever get a bar of ya own...use it to bathe with
    -----------------COOL

    kid laced wit dirt & the growth in size imminent
    fuck a gang of ring worms his neck got it's own crime syndicate
    ---------------------------NAW

    simpleton stay in a cespool it's kinda shockin when lookin
    shady to the bone...even his damn eye socket is crooked
    ---------------------------EH..

    look at his eye brows colonial times coulda helped u to save face
    cuz them thick black lines u own bring in a fortune on slave trades
    ------------------------------DECENT

    2 huge lumps on ya forehead this niggas a dunce, why?
    brain warps his cranial walls n still can't form origional punchlines
    ----------------------------------EH..NOT REALLY HITTING

    YOU STARTED GOOD AND FINDA FELL OFF

    You die tonight, the fact is that you not rhymin' right
    I lowered the bar amount 'cause I didn't find enough lines to bite
    -----HEH..BUT NOT GUNNA GET WOU A WIN


    You ain't gangstah, not crip or piru
    And you ain't dope 'cause you suck at more shit than I do
    ------------NAW

    He only won last week...nah, I'm kiddin'
    Ya oponent really won, he just wasnt dick ridden
    ----------------PLAYED CONCEPT BUT NICELY WORDED TO HIT

    Heres the rundown, you get set for a rippin'
    I'm bout to take a #1 down' like pissin while im sittin'
    --------------LOLZ

    Beaner this, lawnmower that...a fool with few hopes
    I got my green card, now you need to google new jokes
    ------------------NICE

    You're either fuckin' ya life up or you confused a trend...
    'Cause I thought Arab bitches covered their faces to other men
    ------------------DECNT

    I macked ya moms n sister too, used english n spanish
    Now i got 2 tongues under my belt that isnt my language
    ------------------EH.. DECENT AGAIN

    Plus i been rubbed ya mom, Sika knows thats its true
    That the last time we shook hands, he chilled by a falopian tube
    -----------------NAW

    You know you lost, so just get the peelin'
    'Cause you're drownin' in a see of doubt to compliment ya sinkin' feelin'
    ---------------------EH.. NOT BAD BUT NOT HITTING HARD ENOUGH

    Mouth's closed 'cause teeth crooked, sharp n' bad
    I slapped the back of his head n' circumsized his dad
    ----------------------------HEH... OK I GUESS

    You suck, ya verses have bland features
    And your lyrics are about as in-depth as land creatures
    -------NICE... YA BEST LINE YET

    You barkin' up the wrong tree, a bum lookin' rover
    ya not witty...
    ...You drop outta the box like I just tipped ya house over
    -------------------EH..PRETTY PLAYED CONCEPT

    You fuck a camel, theres no room for arguement
    ^..If that comments the last straw...ya girl will starve to death
    -------------------------HUH? NAW

    A tempermental newbie, ya actions is the funniest
    'Cause only cool you been keepin is ''serge dot T'' on ya buddy list
    ---------------OK

    PRETTY CLOSE BUT I GOT SICKABOD TAKING THIS BY A LITTLE..
    HIS APOLLO LINE WAS A HAYMAKER!

    VOTE = SICKABOD
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  6. Serge dot T

    Serge dot T Guest

    Those last 2 votes, mine and his, were post 8pm.

    I'm the champion....I'd like to dedicate this win to penicilin and the word ''discombobulate''.

    Good battle Sika, hit me on aim some time for real, we should battle again.

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  7. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    overall
    pretty close...sik coulda won it if he didn't have tha dirt (mexican) punches...they've been done numerous times...I really liked tha arab bitches line from serge...


    vote=serge
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  8. blaquest

    blaquest Yodel At Me

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    You ain't gangstah, not crip or piru
    And you ain't dope 'cause you suck at more shit than I do
    Ha
    He only won last week...nah, I'm kiddin'
    Ya oponent really won, he just wasnt dick ridden
    Comedy
    Heres the rundown, you get set for a rippin'
    I'm bout to take a #1 down' like pissin while im sittin'
    Ight
    Beaner this, lawnmower that...a fool with few hopes
    I got my green card, now you need to google new jokes
    LMAO
    You're either fuckin' ya life up or you confused a trend...
    'Cause I thought Arab bitches covered their faces to other men
    LMAO Get um
    I macked ya moms n sister too, used english n spanish
    Now i got 2 tongues under my belt that isnt my language
    Funny Shit
    Plus i been rubbed ya mom, Sika knows thats its true
    That the last time we shook hands, he chilled by a falopian tube
    ok
    You know you lost, so just get the peelin'
    'Cause you're drownin' in a see of doubt to compliment ya sinkin' feelin'
    worded right
    Mouth's closed 'cause teeth crooked, sharp n' bad
    I slapped the back of his head n' circumsized his dad
    This is redneck comedy
    You suck, ya verses have bland features
    And your lyrics are about as in-depth as land creatures
    ok
    You barkin' up the wrong tree, a bum lookin' rover
    ya not witty...
    ...You drop outta the box like I just tipped ya house over
    You fuck a camel, theres no room for arguement
    ^..If that comments the last straw...ya girl will starve to death
    A tempermental newbie, ya actions is the funniest
    'Cause only cool you been keepin is ''serge dot T'' on ya buddy list
    Ending was ight

    vs.

    yo, no one here really knows me so you'll learn this quick
    unlike u I never AIM'ed for respect I just earned it bitch
    Truth
    Comedy Central crook u know it, u bit in the worst way
    & if not...who watches Appollo...
    n starts thinkin bout black dicks in the first place?
    Flipped it
    serge gay in every sense of the word this sensitive herb can't hope to touch me
    even his mad doggin lookin more like a hopeless puppy
    LMAOline is neat
    trust me, Serge ain't bitin no more he tired of that dismal road
    he ready to be cleansed...already rockin the baptismal robe
    ok
    I'll slit ya throat so get ghost ya better be duckin out
    or get put under more dirt than u got around ya fuckin mouth
    hahahhaha
    empty room show why he shark every line he's turnin around
    Serge reachin new Lowe's so he can finally furnish his house
    Damn
    murder this clown claimin he writin & gifted
    verses like a fat Wendy's cook...
    every punch-in nuttin but bitin & flippin
    ok
    a strikin resemblence every verse, this bitten flow u sell us
    prove u milkin Beautiful Minds so much Russell Crowe is Jealous
    ok
    tell us them lines are yours, u lyin filthy faced bitch
    if you ever get a bar of ya own...use it to bathe with
    damn
    kid laced wit dirt & the growth in size imminent
    fuck a gang of ring worms his neck got it's own crime syndicate
    Sick lmao
    simpleton stay in a cespool it's kinda shockin when lookin
    shady to the bone...even his damn eye socket is crooked
    ok
    look at his eye brows colonial times coulda helped u to save face
    cuz them thick black lines u own bring in a fortune on slave trades
    ehhhh
    2 huge lumps on ya forehead this niggas a dunce, why?
    brain warps his cranial walls n still can't form origional punchlines
    ughhh

    Breakdown:

    Damn this was a hell of a battle. Chapionship match like it should be doown the middle. Both of yall had sick flow, sceme was on point, and punches where straigh to the head. Ima have to give the edge to serge. His punches was just felt a little more and sika kinda fell off at the end sick ass battle tho good shit both of yall

    Vote serge
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  9. Georgia

    Georgia New Member

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    sikabod won easily,


    yall are really trippin, the whole first half of serge's verse was blah, jus played flips and shit, sikabod killed this nigga in every aspect from what i read



    vote - sik
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  10. Sikabod Khrayne

    Sikabod Khrayne Please Kill Me...

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    I have no idea what the count is, but Serge can take it cuz I don't feel like gettin votin links. Nice battle though.
    & all the dirty comments I made were based on the fact that it looks like he has a dark ring around his mouth & on his neck in that pic....nothin to do with race. 1
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  11. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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    You ain't gangstah, not crip or piru
    And you ain't dope 'cause you suck at more shit than I do
    lol
    He only won last week...nah, I'm kiddin'
    Ya oponent really won, he just wasnt dick ridden
    aight
    Heres the rundown, you get set for a rippin'
    I'm bout to take a #1 down' like pissin while im sittin'
    ehh
    Beaner this, lawnmower that...a fool with few hopes
    I got my green card, now you need to google new jokes
    lol
    You're either fuckin' ya life up or you confused a trend...
    'Cause I thought Arab bitches covered their faces to other men
    haha
    I macked ya moms n sister too, used english n spanish
    Now i got 2 tongues under my belt that isnt my language
    i think u recycled, i don't care or anything, but i've seen this before so it's not quite as ill
    Plus i been rubbed ya mom, Sika knows thats its true
    That the last time we shook hands, he chilled by a falopian tube
    coo
    You know you lost, so just get the peelin'
    'Cause you're drownin' in a see of doubt to compliment ya sinkin' feelin'
    k
    Mouth's closed 'cause teeth crooked, sharp n' bad
    I slapped the back of his head n' circumsized his dad
    lol
    You suck, ya verses have bland features
    And your lyrics are about as in-depth as land creatures
    eh
    You barkin' up the wrong tree, a bum lookin' rover
    ya not witty...
    ...You drop outta the box like I just tipped ya house over
    kinda played
    You fuck a camel, theres no room for arguement
    ^..If that comments the last straw...ya girl will starve to death
    lol hahaha
    A tempermental newbie, ya actions is the funniest
    'Cause only cool you been keepin is ''serge dot T'' on ya buddy list
    eh

    vs.

    yo, no one here really knows me so you'll learn this quick
    unlike u I never AIM'ed for respect I just earned it bitch
    k
    Comedy Central crook u know it, u bit in the worst way
    & if not...who watches Appollo...
    n starts thinkin bout black dicks in the first place?
    hahahah
    serge gay in every sense of the word this sensitive herb can't hope to touch me
    even his mad doggin lookin more like a hopeless puppy
    lol
    trust me, Serge ain't bitin no more he tired of that dismal road
    he ready to be cleansed...already rockin the baptismal robe
    nah
    I'll slit ya throat so get ghost ya better be duckin out
    or get put under more dirt than u got around ya fuckin mouth
    nah
    empty room show why he shark every line he's turnin around
    Serge reachin new Lowe's so he can finally furnish his house
    seen this
    murder this clown claimin he writin & gifted
    verses like a fat Wendy's cook...
    every punch-in nuttin but bitin & flippin
    ok
    a strikin resemblence every verse, this bitten flow u sell us
    prove u milkin Beautiful Minds so much Russell Crowe is Jealous
    nah
    tell us them lines are yours, u lyin filthy faced bitch
    if you ever get a bar of ya own...use it to bathe with
    pretty good
    kid laced wit dirt & the growth in size imminent
    fuck a gang of ring worms his neck got it's own crime syndicate
    k
    simpleton stay in a cespool it's kinda shockin when lookin
    shady to the bone...even his damn eye socket is crooked
    eh
    look at his eye brows colonial times coulda helped u to save face
    cuz them thick black lines u own bring in a fortune on slave trades
    ok
    2 huge lumps on ya forehead this niggas a dunce, why?
    brain warps his cranial walls n still can't form origional punchlines
    ehh


    i vote Serge, his shit was interesting throughout. Sik's whole verse was about his face basically, which was kind of old and repetitive, he started off really dope though. But Serge basically was more interesting to me, too many lines to continuously diss a pic.

    vote- serge
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  12. ReX™

    ReX™ dyno mite!

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    vote - serge...

    Shit was mad close regardless of who you go for... sik had some witty/personal shit while serge kinda had da same... but i just felt a couple more lines from serge dats all.. but hot shit no doubt... sik's dope for real.. you'll be back wit a title shot in no time...
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  13. Calibre

    Calibre Peoples Champ

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    vote - serge

    Because I wanna take that belt away from you.........when i come back
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  14. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    aiight then

    yo, no one here really knows me so you'll learn this quick
    unlike u I never AIM'ed for respect I just earned it bitch

    no

    Comedy Central crook u know it, u bit in the worst way
    & if not...who watches Appollo...
    n starts thinkin bout black dicks in the first place?

    hahahahaha, nice

    serge gay in every sense of the word this sensitive herb can't hope to touch me
    even his mad doggin lookin more like a hopeless puppy

    nice

    trust me, Serge ain't bitin no more he tired of that dismal road
    he ready to be cleansed...already rockin the baptismal robe

    nice

    I'll slit ya throat so get ghost ya better be duckin out
    or get put under more dirt than u got around ya fuckin mouth

    no

    empty room show why he shark every line he's turnin around
    Serge reachin new Lowe's so he can finally furnish his house

    no

    murder this clown claimin he writin & gifted
    verses like a fat Wendy's cook...
    every punch-in nuttin but bitin & flippin
    no

    a strikin resemblence every verse, this bitten flow u sell us
    prove u milkin Beautiful Minds so much Russell Crowe is Jealous

    DAMN

    tell us them lines are yours, u lyin filthy faced bitch
    if you ever get a bar of ya own...use it to bathe with
    no
    kid laced wit dirt & the growth in size imminent
    fuck a gang of ring worms his neck got it's own crime syndicate

    hah

    simpleton stay in a cespool it's kinda shockin when lookin
    shady to the bone...even his damn eye socket is crooked
    no
    look at his eye brows colonial times coulda helped u to save face
    cuz them thick black lines u own bring in a fortune on slave trades

    nice





    i thought sikabod merked this shit.....serges verse was pretty cool, but sik had like 5 or 6 quotes that were nice.


    vote Bod
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  15. TyrantTMABM

    TyrantTMABM registered to shit on u

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    v/Serge for havin better punches and flow. i liked a few of Sikabod's lines but Serge's whole verse was good.
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  16. dizthachozen1

    dizthachozen1 ...free your mind...

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    for this being the championship, it wasn't any where near as good as i thought it would be. i figured there'd be crazy wordplay, funny ass punches and some fire ass flow...but nothing really jumped off the screen at me yelling, "these are the best the RBL has to offer". so, i guess i'll just break this down line-by-line.

    You ain't gangstah, not crip or piru
    And you ain't dope 'cause you suck at more shit than I do
    --wtf? why would you open with a line about you sucking? granted you said he sux more, but you prolly coulda opened with a line about his pic that woulda been better.
    He only won last week...nah, I'm kiddin'
    Ya oponent really won, he just wasnt dick ridden
    --shit, you coulda opened with this. actually you should have
    Heres the rundown, you get set for a rippin'
    I'm bout to take a #1 down' like pissin while im sittin'
    --this was okay. but not as hard hitting as you may think. maybe because of the wording
    Beaner this, lawnmower that...a fool with few hopes
    I got my green card, now you need to google new jokes
    --i guess you're mexicano? then this is just another mediocre bar
    You're either fuckin' ya life up or you confused a trend...
    'Cause I thought Arab bitches covered their faces to other men
    -- this is the best line so far. good punch on a personal tip. not much else here
    I macked ya moms n sister too, used english n spanish
    Now i got 2 tongues under my belt that isnt my language
    --i thought he was arab? does this^ mean he's tri-racial?
    Plus i been rubbed ya mom, Sika knows thats its true
    That the last time we shook hands, he chilled by a falopian tube
    --now this is the best bar of the verse
    You know you lost, so just get the peelin'
    'Cause you're drownin' in a see of doubt to compliment ya sinkin' feelin'
    --just didn't connect well from my point of view
    Mouth's closed 'cause teeth crooked, sharp n' bad
    I slapped the back of his head n' circumsized his dad
    --another just okay line...not really having anything to do with the pic
    You suck, ya verses have bland features
    And your lyrics are about as in-depth as land creatures
    --an okay punch. not much else
    You barkin' up the wrong tree, a bum lookin' rover
    ya not witty...
    ...You drop outta the box like I just tipped ya house over
    --another okay punch, but i thought this was a pic-battle?
    You fuck a camel, theres no room for arguement
    ^..If that comments the last straw...ya girl will starve to death
    --this was funny as hell. but he's not in a pic with his girl
    A tempermental newbie, ya actions is the funniest
    'Cause only cool you been keepin is ''serge dot T'' on ya buddy list
    --notta good closer to me. rather blah. who really cares about his buddy list? i'd rather have read a good punch about the pic at the end.

    3 maybe 4 good lines in that verse. none of which were pertaining to the picture. alot of filler. decent flow, but not real innovative in the rhyme dept.


    yo, no one here really knows me so you'll learn this quick
    unlike u I never AIM'ed for respect I just earned it bitch
    --alright opener. startin out on the personal tip.
    Comedy Central crook u know it, u bit in the worst way
    & if not...who watches Appollo...
    n starts thinkin bout black dicks in the first place?
    --kinda funny. it would really suck if he did infact bite a joke from an apollo comic. but with this being a pic-battle, does this hold any relavance? the line he's talkin about ain't even in the verse he's battlin against
    serge gay in every sense of the word this sensitive herb can't hope to touch me
    even his mad doggin lookin more like a hopeless puppy
    --OMG!! a punch that actually is about the picture
    trust me, Serge ain't bitin no more he tired of that dismal road
    he ready to be cleansed...already rockin the baptismal robe
    --good punch. kinda okay on the wordplay.
    I'll slit ya throat so get ghost ya better be duckin out
    or get put under more dirt than u got around ya fuckin mouth
    --funny punch
    empty room show why he shark every line he's turnin around
    Serge reachin new Lowe's so he can finally furnish his house
    --i liked this one
    murder this clown claimin he writin & gifted
    verses like a fat Wendy's cook...
    every punch-in nuttin but bitin & flippin
    --not all that great. prolly due to wording
    a strikin resemblence every verse, this bitten flow u sell us
    prove u milkin Beautiful Minds so much Russell Crowe is Jealous
    --worplay-yes...about the pic-no...good punch tho
    tell us them lines are yours, u lyin filthy faced bitch
    if you ever get a bar of ya own...use it to bathe with
    --i liked this one too
    kid laced wit dirt & the growth in size imminent
    fuck a gang of ring worms his neck got it's own crime syndicate
    --alright...they're getting better
    simpleton stay in a cespool it's kinda shockin when lookin
    shady to the bone...even his damn eye socket is crooked
    --way to throw a pic punch in there after two other good punches
    look at his eye brows colonial times coulda helped u to save face
    cuz them thick black lines u own bring in a fortune on slave trades
    --funny..nicely worded
    2 huge lumps on ya forehead this niggas a dunce, why?
    brain warps his cranial walls n still can't form origional punchlines
    --better closer than your opponent, definately. although, dunce caps are cone shaped. it still came together nice.

    well, from what i can tell sikabod ran away with this in the end. but he got away by the skin of his teeth. the last 4 bars saved him. until then i was about ready to give it to serge. i thought serge was nicer than what this verse portrayed him to be. especially with all the shit he talks. serge didn't really have any super hard punches. even the best bars of his verse were a bit sub-par. sikabod's verse started to pick up towards the end. he must've read through it when he got half way and realized he had to come better in the latter half of the verse. so, i'm givin this to sikabod. just callin'em how i see'em.
    VOTE=SIKABOD KHRAYNE
    test
  17. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    Serge dot T wins & becomes new Rbl Champion.
    test
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