CHAMPIONSHIP MATCH: 1. Got Life 25-12 vs. 2. Nique 23-5

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by MC4SiGHT, Jul 12, 2006.

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  1. MC4SiGHT

    MC4SiGHT JOE COMMiSSO

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    62 lines MAXIMUM - CONTENDERS & TITLE MATCH ONLY!



    VERSES DUE:
    Thursday, July 20,2006
    10:00pm PST/1:00am EST

    VOTES DUE:
    Sat July 22,2006
    10:00pm PST/1:00am EST

    TOPICS:
    Topics will be provided at the beginning of the week so that everyone has ample time to get involved.

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    ALTERNATES:
    If your opponent NO-SHOWS, and you posted a full verse you will be bumped up appropriately to face the next person in the brackets within your range. If no opponent is available such as if you were in the bottom 20 and the next up no show is in the top 10 then you will be given a win for your efforts. You must still vote on 5 matches accordingly as any failure to vote will result in no win and no progress in the ranks. The only event other than this in which you may take the no show win is if you only did post a no-show verse which consists of 4 rhyming lines.

    Topics:
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=996204
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  2. Got Life?

    Got Life? Resident Megalomaniac

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    you wanna drop 2morrow anyway GUY?
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  3. Got Life?

    Got Life? Resident Megalomaniac

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    Wait at the Pearly Gate

    Wait at the Pearly Gate

    I never though Heaven's pearly gate would seem so cold,
    Yet low and behold, the hot spots were long since sold,
    Hence St. Peter stood above the throng and told us all,
    That we must recall a bitter downfall so as to enthral,
    Sympathy from the relentless and oh so lamented Saint,
    Or at the slightest complaint we'd be lost in restraint,
    Destined to watch our souls burn till eternities end,
    And only 1 of 3 would get in to heaven as it'd all depend,
    Upon the most uncalled for and painful means of death,
    So the first man spoke while holding his breath.

    It seemed to me that my wife was a treacherous whore,
    You see I tried to please her but she always wanted more,
    That's why I arrived far to early back at the house,
    I saw her torn open blouse, but my oh so lovely spouse,
    Was in the shower and I couldn't seem to find her lover,
    Until I walked toward the balcony where I saw him hover,
    The bastard was hopeless grasping to get back inside,
    But I let my anger reside so I let loose a tide,
    Of nothing but fury as I smashed my feet upon his hand,
    Yet the bastard held on...so he must not understand,
    Thats why I grabbed my mallet...putting it to his palate,
    "You're the weakest link. Goodbye!" and he's off the ballot,
    Yet the nerve of this prick to land in the brush below,
    So my animosity grew to a new found plateau,
    That's when I dragged the fridge to drop on his head,
    After all I had to make sure that the bastard was dead.
    Unfortunately my remorse is what then brings me here,
    I shot myself in the head for succumbing to beer.

    After hearing it all St. Peter moved onto the next man,
    Holding together his shattered skull as he slowly began...
    You see I was dancin on my balcony to hot ninety seven,
    When a plane swooped by just like in nine, eleven.
    Startled I slipped, falling until I gripped,
    Upon the balcony found just two floors below,
    Yet as I went to bestow a plead for help upon this guy,
    He looked me dead in the eye, and started yelling goodbye,
    At first I thought his assault was over as I tried to climb,
    Until I felt the agony of a hammer breaking my hand in chime,
    As I lay there thinking I was long dead and forgotten,
    I realized things could be worse as I was in shrubs of cotton,
    Until the last thing I saw coming at me,
    Was some giant device, twice the size of a T.V.

    St. Peter beamed with sorrow realizing the man's bitter fate,
    But turned then to me, to learn of my grim reaper's date...

    That's when I turned to St. Peter and said to him calmly,
    "Picture this. You're hiding, naked, in a refrigerator..."

    Ironically none of us ever actually got into heaven,
    But at least I won't be cold in hell's ring number seven.


    Topics:
    1. what would u do to make it to heaven?

    2. a song where u die at the end...

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  4. UneekTestimony

    UneekTestimony New Member

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    Pffft..

    Ferocious and viscious,
    So potent, consistent, on making hopeless decisions,
    Provoking a witness, victims are thrown in the prisons,
    Foes in Christian sadistic cult-specific throned on commission,
    Consoling commitments, gripping and blown by the spirits,
    Then in zone by the image, and Christ's a chromed, iced inscription,
    Just a prone hyped addition of a home life addiction,
    Bible inflictions leaves us miserable, like long psych prescriptions,
    Grown enlightened, yet ignorant- No truth in the end,
    It's just foolishness- protruding into uselessness trends,
    From the puke in the binge, youth is the root of the cringe,
    That is fused between the two movements of truth and our sins,
    Proving to be ruthless, intruding, it's confusing, and then,
    Our stupid choices are alluding to abuse and revenge,
    Yet we're used to the spins, thrusts that few could avenge,
    Being smooth is a miscue in a viewable lens,
    Misused and screwed in a sense, yet we abide by the laws,
    But then fight for it all with and for reliable cause,
    See we vibe with the flaws, just so excited, in awe,
    Then the plight of a fall hits us, like a strike of a claw,
    Recite and then pause, think about employing yourself,
    Not in form of our wealth, but in restoring our health,
    Then informing ourselves about our arguable fate,
    And our fallible weight of burdens fall at plausible rates,
    The cause of our hate crawls from the mouths of our race,
    And holds an astonishing place in our heart and our face,
    Yet we pardon the stakes, willing to go far if it takes,
    Our ability to judge, and disregarding mistakes,
    So startled, we may stay bottled then thus,
    We remain hollow- until we learn to follow in trust,
    Improbable JUS- tification modeling US,
    Some action must be taken, so swallow it UP,
    Harboring lust, plain Jane's now borrowing bucks,
    And debt's becoming a beast- mauling and crushed,
    Hauling the fuss, and now the finest has came,
    Now you've heightened the blame between all your whine's & complaints,
    It's designed in a range of our high and lows,
    Where we're riding slow through Life on a minor road,
    The cycle shows, that we're the cause of our death,
    The reason for all reasons, the scars on ourselves,
    All the talks on the shelves now, and the turn is mischievous,
    Cuz Life is a long path, until you learn to lead it.

    -Nique


    6. just a sheerly lyrically track, like some 95 hip-hop, no-topic, lyrical jawn
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  5. Fold

    Fold *NEW* DIC - just add gay!

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    Gotlife? - this has some points that are interesting and as it kept going, I was thinking, he's going to die so the use ofg that topic was forseeable, but still well told and displayed. St. Peter and the Grim Reaper are the same person? Couldn't really tell in your breakdown, but they seem to be. I liked some of the details you used, your word choices were nice in some parts too, just thought if you put a little more focus on you rhymes, this could of been much better.

    Nique, lyrically, this was filled with witty liners and punching metas that kept up with the pace of off the wall rhymes all over the place. I thought it was going to comtinue with the same rhyme all the way through at first, but you kept it up for a long part of the verse. Content wise, it didn't really move me much, but I guess that wasn't the point of it as I come to your topical selection at the end. You followed that topic well


    My vote is for Nique

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  6. Extreme Venom

    Extreme Venom Well-Known Member

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    up over no shows
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  7. DIVINITY FLOWZ

    DIVINITY FLOWZ New Member

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    [HIDE]GotLife, your story actually had some interesting points in it with the whole angel of the death sequence. It wasn't really up to par on the flow, but you're working on that right? cuz you won't win championships without it, especially not against Nique. You could of used a lil better choice than the cliche grim reaper style theme, but this was pretty cool anyway. Didn't get bored reading, which I often do with your pieces, you're starting to put more detailing on things that are more interesting and make it a better read.

    Nique, damn flowing ass mothafucka. do da damn.... this was narrated nicely in it's format and for you to keep it going as long as you did in the first part was cool. Some of the lines seem to say the same thing over, but it didn't get stagnant really and I guess you were doing a 'be a lyrical fool from the early 90s' type of shit so that's gravy. I was impressed by some of the rhymes like usual, but some of them just seem to be thrown in there, not many though. Good shit

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  8. Pent uP

    Pent uP I'd Like to Fight Ten Men

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    [Hide]lmfao, no not@ur verse, at you...why? I used to tell that joke in middle school, therefore making the verse 100% predictable, u didn't even do it justice. Ur description of the jealous guy finding the innocent guy on the balcony threw me off I seriously thought u weren't gonna do the joke until I got to the second guys story. Your flow was garbo, sounded all forced and shit like u didn't know what to say so u tried to make it 'expirimental' or w/e.....ill give you credit for ur opener that was dope wordplay, but the flow was to lackidasiacal, and u have no sense of rhythm. Also the refrigerator line didn't rhyme to shit and that pissed me off and my last and final complaint is this is not at all a verse about 'what u would do to get into heaven' its about why you're@the gates

    Anyways that verse wasted my time, bring your a-game in the champ match, chump

    Nique -- thank god for flow, I got thru ur shit in a breeeeeze. I must say I had a problem with ur multis around the 'fuss' line because it started sounding repetitive like u were trying to hard to rhyme, but then again maybe its my perception....anyways this was a cool piece, lyrically inclined, I really dunno wut to say righ now, after reading GLs verse you were fire as fuck....I can't really knock content, but since life is such a broad topic I appreciate how u strung toether ur thought process

    Vote -- nique[/hide]
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  9. TeKneeK

    TeKneeK The Heart and Soul of RM

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    .........................
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  10. TeKneeK

    TeKneeK The Heart and Soul of RM

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    nique 2x champ
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