Championship Match: 1. Cane 10-0 v. 2. Tri Optix 11-4

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i'm gay....

how about a nice round 16?

if not Ill just match up

g'luck though..lets give em what they want.


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i'm gay.....

crown me

Champions Are Never Everlasting

Even the bible says Cane is NOT Abel..fuck..I know..aight, look
If you really hate played-out Cane lines, stay away from his rhymebook
Get your arms and knees torn, your face will be horribly deformed
Only reason I havent killed ya, is because you kept my seat warm
Come on man, the only fans you got is in your XBox controllers..
Your punches suck enough, and the fad of puttin links in your lines is over
And youre about to find out..why Im the fan favoriate, it aint hard to tell..
Only upset youre pullin this week,
is that you lied and told us you were gonna sign out the RBL
We know I parked you before..so youre only getting re-served, now listen
Last time you took a Tri-Out, the cast of Queer as Folk were holding auditions
Id rape you..but I wouldnt want your man Nebs to get jealous,you soft fags
We all know that you 2 stick together like the pages in your gay porn mags
Go ahead, put this in your little section of the mag and vent your dry concepts
But the truth is that the RBL wont vote for Cane..they'll vote AGAINST Tri Optix
Give it up..you've had it, dont make have to rip this clown
They'll say Cane went out off the wall..cuz RM's finally taking your picture down..

i might be a little late

i'll post when i get home. might be about an hour late, so i'm just lettin ya know, i'll be here

N.igga Editing Me Like I'm Swaying

nevermind....he came back early lol

Uppin Over No Shows!

k, just got back. something fairly serious came up (you never hear me say that, so you can take it to the bank)

i'll post in about 20 minutes

thanks

i wasn't here in 1999. sorry

nice quote, ya fuckin bitch, i gotta grace this kid with lead
if you wanna give the voters what they want, replace yourself with Nebs
Tri thinks he's beautiful, and if he's not lyin since he's older
beauty is like my fist..cause both are in the eye of the beholder
i never play off a verse, but Tri has it comin and he doesn't even know it
cause the fuckin guy's makin excuses for losin..before i even posted!?!?!
and jesus christ, stop actin ghetto ya w.igger, you aint fuckin black
this pussy bitch's never seen a real block like Arizona running backs
phony personals and stale comedy, as weak as your last punch
dude, how the FUCK you gonna pretend i didn't shut you out last month?
Tri could get off on murder without Cochran..
and what i said means..
that this sick faggot sits and jacks off to death scenes
i'll hurt ya feelings kid, cause i'm not out to please queers
son, how the FUCK are you gonna sit on the newbie side for 3 YEARS?!
i'll end this battle with a quote Sequel gave me
and cause i'm honest
i'll tell ya why he asked me back.."To Save The RBL From Tri Optix"

nice quote, ya fuckin bitch, i gotta grace this kid with lead
if you wanna give the voters what they want, replace yourself with Nebs

vote cane


SERIOUSLY


lmfao...

okay, moving on, i didnt even read his verse but he out did tri with an opener


this pussy bitch's never seen a real block like Arizona running backs

hahaha

i'll hurt ya feelings kid, cause i'm not out to please queers
son, how the FUCK are you gonna sit on the newbie side for 3 YEARS?!

haha

closer was aight


um, thsi was very one sided. Tri IS my boy, and im pretty coo with cane these days.......but cane raped this

i didnt see one standout line from tri optix, nothing that was funny, nothing that was dope.....i dunno, he went run of the mill........cane KILLLLLED this


vote cane, gluck

rape g

Tri Optix
And youre about to find out..why Im the fan favoriate, it aint hard to tell..
Only upset youre pullin this week,
is that you lied and told us you were gonna sign out the RBL
-lol

Cane
nice quote, ya fuckin bitch, i gotta grace this kid with lead
if you wanna give the voters what they want, replace yourself with Nebs
-Nice

i never play off a verse, but Tri has it comin and he doesn't even know it
cause the fuckin guy's makin excuses for losin..before i even posted!?!?!
-lmao

honestly, i felt this was no contest. tri came pretty nice, but cane just came harder and with more consistency.

my vote = cane

Tri

Even the bible says Cane is NOT Abel..fuck..I know..aight, look
If you really hate played-out Cane lines, stay away from his rhymebook
--word, this was all in all a pretty nice punch.. because in the mag he referenced played nameplays on himself.. so that was a pretty relevent subject to flip, i think the cane and able concept coulda been flipped into a smooth punch if it isnt already played though.. but cool start

Get your arms and knees torn, your face will be horribly deformed
Only reason I havent killed ya, is because you kept my seat warm
--well, you said pretty much this same thing in the battle against me and craven, about thanking Cale for keeping your seat warm, in our contendership match.. so i wasnt really feeling it this time around lol... it was a cool concept, but not cool enuf for me to dig twice =)

Come on man, the only fans you got is in your XBox controllers..
Your punches suck enough, and the fad of puttin links in your lines is over
--aiight aiight, well, i felt like you could go into your punch more smoothly from your setup.. i wasnt really feeling the punch too much, it was ok.. it seemed like a forced personal in a way to me hommie lol.. it was aiight

And youre about to find out..why Im the fan favoriate, it aint hard to tell..
Only upset youre pullin this week,
is that you lied and told us you were gonna sign out the RBL
--haha, that was pretty funny, cool shit.. really man, its not like im one to talk, but this was a real stretched line.. the three bar rhyme scheme is a plague, i try to avoid it now lol.. it is nice for the "perfect" punch that requires a dramatic pause, but other than that, it is just more room to chit chat, you know? lol.. The 'upset' 'ish has been flipped obviously, alot of times in this context, but you applied it to a personal which made it nicer.. I think maybe your wording in the punch coulda been a little smoother though.. "is that you lied and told us".. i think saying something like "is when we found out you werent signing out" would bear in mind the "upset" a little more, but i got your drift.. I would say if your gonna use the three bar line cuz u need to talk more, something that helps is if you either have it rhyme with the first half of your setup line at the break (rhyming with about to find out), or if you continue your hard-to-tell multi with it.. just some advice that i dont take myself alot lol.. coo punch

We know I parked you before..so youre only getting re-served, now listen
Last time you took a Tri-Out, the cast of Queer as Folk were holding auditions
--aiight aiight, i dont normally dig when kids use nameplays on their own name, and im shocked if this hasnt been used on you before, but it was still an aiight hit

Id rape you..but I wouldnt want your man Nebs to get jealous,you soft fags
We all know that you 2 stick together like the pages in your gay porn mags
--heh, aiight, this was pretty funny.. it was pretty much to the point 'ish.. your lines are a bit long at this point i'd say still, but otherwise, pretty decent personal flip here

Go ahead, put this in your little section of the mag and vent your dry concepts
But the truth is that the RBL wont vote for Cane..they'll vote AGAINST Tri Optix
--thats pretty cool, i dont know why you are so hated, or why you think you are so hated.. but if its the case, then it was a pretty nice flip.. I dont think that is the best way to lure in voters though lol, catch more flies with honey =P

Give it up..you've had it, dont make have to rip this clown
They'll say Cane went out off the wall..cuz RM's finally taking your picture down..
--i know its specific, but heads up on switching reference to a person in one line, or even a bar.. it kinda throws the reader for a subtle loop when you go from like the second to third person.. (you've had it, dont make (me) have to rip this clown).. it would sound more conceptually smooth if you said 'dont make me have to rip YOU clown' since u started off with you.. but the punch was cool, i was feeling it, prolly one of my favorite punches from you out of this verse.. overall you had a pretty decent verse pawtna, nothing too jaw dropping, but u still had a couple nice hits up in it..



...contined

....continued



Cane


nice quote, ya fuckin bitch, i gotta grace this kid with lead
if you wanna give the voters what they want, replace yourself with Nebs
--wooord, nice throwback at his quote.. haha.. personal, relevent, and probably true in most kids cases, tight start..

Tri thinks he's beautiful, and if he's not lyin since he's older
beauty is like my fist..cause both are in the eye of the beholder
--hmm, well, the thing is, you took care of calling him beautiful in the setup, but theres something missing here still, like, why is he the 'beholder'? i dont know if you see what im getting at, so i wont elaborate, but i think if you used your setup to imply how he is the 'beholder' rather than how he's beautiful it mighta been a more effective punch, but it was still an aiight bar

i never play off a verse, but Tri has it comin and he doesn't even know it
cause the fuckin guy's makin excuses for losin..before i even posted!?!?!
--hahah, simple, to the point, and ouch. good shit

and jesus christ, stop actin ghetto ya w.igger, you aint fuckin black
this pussy bitch's never seen a real block like Arizona running backs
--aiight, well this type of shit just gets flipped to much for me to dig pawtna.. i see block references all the time, and most the time they are in reference to football too.. so i wasnt really feeling this one too much..

phony personals and stale comedy, as weak as your last punch
dude, how the FUCK you gonna pretend i didn't shut you out last month?
--cool.. nothing too fancy, but again, its just a straight forward punch, and it was pretty effective..it was definately a nice personal to tie in.. I could have maybe gone for a little more flip to it, but it wasnt really needed, u still got ur point across

Tri could get off on murder without Cochran..
and what i said means..
that this sick faggot sits and jacks off to death scenes
--haha, i have to say this is creative, it is definately a strange punch, like not something i would normally anticipate dissing someone about, but if nothing else its fresh, and it was definately funny.. haha, get off, its just funny

i'll hurt ya feelings kid, cause i'm not out to please queers
son, how the FUCK are you gonna sit on the newbie side for 3 YEARS?!
--why do you keep on capitalizing FUCK? lol.. but again, a nice straight forward punch, im feeling it.. it seems like you been alternating straight forward personal punches with more impersonal semi-complex punches, thats always a good call so nothing gets too redundant by stacking a style in a row.. this was funny.. i wasnt feeling as much as some of your personals, but just the fact that (if) he was on the newbie side for three years is funny enough to make me laugh lol

i'll end this battle with a quote Sequel gave me
and cause i'm honest
i'll tell ya why he asked me back.."To Save The RBL From Tri Optix"
--hah, aiight.. that was an aiight closer.. punch-wise it was ok, but it felt 'closer-like' if you know what i mean, overall you had a pretty nice verse, definately had a handful of hilarious lines, a couple a bit blander, but nothing bad by anymeans. it was a solid drop. hater. lol =P




vote- cane


why? consistency. both of you had a fair share of personals, but cane's rolled off easier, tri's came off a little more forced.. by forced i mean like "i have to get this in here" forced, not forced like cane thinks my wordplay is haha.. but word.. I think his personals just one after another, were harsh, he didnt flip them all that creative, but he didnt need to, cuz the personals spoke for themselves, and he led into 'em nice.. good read fella's..

now thats a vote^^

good shit namix, thanks for the breakdown.

Vote = Cane

Cane came with the more wittier punches and his verse was flamen plus I wasnt feeling Tri at all

I felt the shit out of what he said about replacing tri with nebs /// lmao!

im difficult. thanks to everybody for peepin. up.