Championship: 1. Mr. Body 9-0 vs. 2. Inkwell Q 15-1

dayum Cale, i gots to give where credit is due!

Cale took this
..both came correct

Cale took it by far



Personals were better....and using the pic overall gave him the advantage.....its kinda grimey tho....big disadvantage


overall took it with a better verse....Plus Ink said he was sick and ill.....and I could tell....you lacked ya creativity


Vote=Cale

vote- ink

good battle, ink just had better punches, cale had the personals but it wasnt enough to take it

8-6....aresenic an jinks didnt explain anything....this is gonna be close

^ unofficial ruling by the way

heres how I see it..

Cale..

KDawg8298: Have u ever taken one of tha chess pieces and used it to pleasure urself?
the risen soul: Nah, I'm a nerd, not a pervert
KDawg8298: o ok
KDawg8298: Do u have a girlfriend?
the risen soul: wtf, of course not


haha..nice intro.


Judgin by the convo N Ur pic.. ink the homo's right son..
He can't get a bitch at all.. cuz he looks so much like one..
This kid lacks pure talent.. he had a chicks stature..
So son came back wit a vengeance.. same one that bit fracture..

liked this..very nice set-up.
..


.....Fuck wide.. this kid got some broadS shoulders..

haha

No sir.. U wont win.. this kid's frail N gay..
Mad in his own pic..
..cuz he couldn't put his hair in pig tails or braids..


wasnt feelin this till I looked at his pic again..then it made me laugh.


N dude if it was a race.. U'd be left very swoll man..
Cuz U about to add Cale to Ur loss column.. like gary coleman..

nice finish



Ink..

intro was aiight..but it looked too much like you were tryin to flip cale's idea..



Cause Cale's the only cat who has thicker bones than muscles

haha

that was really the only line that stood-out to me.

Ive seen Ink come 10x better then this..maybe its cuz youre sick or somethin..but I was just not feelin this verse.


cale had more lines I liked so...


vote=Mr.Body

dammmmmn, this was close as hell...both cale and ink came real nice..as i write this im still undecided as to who won..=/
its kinda gay that one emcee used the pic and the other didnt, not because of any unfair advantage or anything, but just because its a bit harder to compare them because u take shots at different things and use a slightly different style when ya dissing a pic..

cale - dope verse man, some funny ass lines in there..the whole biting names/lines concept was well done..and the gurl/homo lines were cool...
my only criticism would be that you only really had 2 concepts in your verse, the biting one and the looking like a gurl one...you did them good but maybe you stayed on that tip a little to much...im not sure whther using a pic is an advantage or a disadvantage..

ink - dope verse again, you manage to get away easily with having slightly stretched lines..lol
now here u didnt use a pic, and it allowed you too cover alot more concepts, and it added that original flavour to your verse..the last half was better than the first and it was pretty damn hot...funny closer, lol

so yeah, cal using a pic here may have actually disadvantaged him by, in comparison to inkwell, limiting his scope of punches...inkwells verse seemed fresher to me..

so in a close one..

vote = inkwell

vote - cale

the thing that won it for him was consitency. even tho he stayed on inkwell's appearance alot, he never really had any corny lines, the worst was probably and average line. however, inqwell in my opinion fell off a few times.

close battle tho, i can see how its going either way.

vote-ink

cale - your second and third punches were fire, and personal. pic disses could have been better. broads shoulders line was creative tho. and the dentist line was straight, i liked it.

ink - opener was nice, but that tickle me elmo line seemed like a hit or miss thing based on peoples opinions, and it missed here. came kind of fresh on the skinny jokes, the muscles/bones line was nice, so was the chain line, probably line of the battle. wasnt feelin the fountain pen or fracture line though. the rest was nice though. pretty good verse

nice read

Inkwell got in Cals ass.

Now that, that is stated .....

Cal got in Inkwells ass.

Roflmao, yall both are dope.

But my vote goes to Cal on some skinnyminny type victory here, he just pulled it off. I dug one more of his lines than I dug of Inkwells. Both had cool flow and tore this up.

Ink or Cal if you lose, dont sign out yall are the rbl.

vote- Calburger.

Cal Wins

-3 for late verse from Inkwell

FINAL VOTE: 9-8 Inkwells Favor


VOTE AFTER LATE VERSE DEDUCTION: 8-6 In Cal's favor
...good shit