CHAMPIONSHIP: 1. Mr. Body 8-0 Vs 2. Papermate 7-0

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  1. U S E R

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  2. Calefaction

    Calefaction The Lone Wolf

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    I'm goin like.. 28? okay
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  3. Papermate

    Papermate Registered Writer

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    I'm pretty sure we can add 2 more to make it a great one..

    30 my man.
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  4. Calefaction

    Calefaction The Lone Wolf

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  5. Calefaction

    Calefaction The Lone Wolf

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    Status NeSs: who is papermate.. you and?
    sequence is: haha
    sequence is: warlokk
    sequence is: and ink helped

    EYO--

    U got no chance.. cuz one of U used to be a herb that bites..
    The Second makes my beats N the Third asks me to re-word his lines
    That's three strikes.. but y'all can bring on the pitches..
    I'll be havin a 'fowl ball' ..... when I swing on these chickens..
    N Q.. lets hope ya friends.. make up for Ur chokin when..
    I let the blade in U N spill ink all over.. like I broke my pen..
    Lokk ain't that big tho.. ain't that talented, smart.. but Ur cryin..
    ^Cuz U'll be those before Ur eminem.. okay? so stop tryin..
    I'm the wrong vet to try .. a walkin bomb threat..
    In otherwords.. U'll bite the dust.. then try to flip its concepts..
    Cal's a world above the rest.. these fuckin cats are queer..
    U just made it past orbit.. N Ur about to burn up in the atmosphere..
    Save Ur name.. U can't win.. so try to get the title at a later date..
    Cuz I'm takin down erry forest in Australia so there's no paper..mate
    One of U'll run Ur mouths.. N even Lokk know he talks..
    So I'ma step up wit a board N own 'Vert' like Tony Hawk..
    Ur the wrong combination to get passed this, stop..
    N fuck.. Cal knows the right combination when I master lokk..
    I'm SOOOO the man right.. cuz I'm known to stamp guys..
    Put my hands on Ur neck N Titan so much.. U'd think I own the franchise..
    Awww man.. U had me goin.. pretendin U was tough N all thug..
    So now I'm crushin balls off the tease' like the end of a golf club..
    That means U better hope santa brings protection to U peasents..
    Cuz Cal's known to slay in the snow.. with out the dear or the presents..
    Lokk's a nobody STILL.. N Vert.. Ur nada jack...
    Soo fat.. when I hit U.. Ur skin not only waved.. but holla'd back..
    On the other hand.. Vert's also no one.. cry to me bitch..
    N Lokk's so skinny his ribs ain't just touchin.. they're siamese twins..
    U'll get ate quick.. Fuck U losers.. Cal know shitty rhymes..
    Ur just a carbon copy of Island.. minus User, Aloe N witty lines..


    YEEEEEAAAAAAAH

    -U just got Body'd
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  6. Scientz

    Scientz Im Good Writtens Bitch!

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    lmao

    whoa...shit like that makes me wanna sign back in

    i will vote when paper drops...should be an ill battle
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  7. Papermate

    Papermate Registered Writer

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    Pfffffft .. Bitch Please..

    [​IMG]

    “Its the real thing.. I know we over the lust..
    Wasn't a nice guy.. you turned me from a soldier to one..
    You stuck around when I was close to a bum..
    Baby girl I got a feelin that I know you the one”
    - Calefaction


    ^ An audio from Cal’s page, for that bitter chick that he likes
    Its funny though
    Didn’t you meet Sammi on a rap internet site?
    And I’d rather look like Marshal Mather’s twin bro
    Than a gay Al Pacino with AIDS whos lackin skin tone
    Skinny weakling, takin pictures nude with his purse
    Why name yaself Body – If you barely put food in it first
    Dukes, what kinda fool are you thinkin Mate's a loser?
    When your fuckin alias – is also ya pet name for User
    Its weird, I believe that Cal targets to steal
    Cuz he’s bitin Kabob
    But his skinny ass obviously don’t like barbequed meals
    ITS THE WEEK OF THE 9ths! You know why the shits coolah?
    Cuz it’ll be his 9th win, on his 9th verse, the 9th time he bit Luda
    Kid we’ve all heard ya audios, you brag about it in like every verse
    So I hope you do go places someday – and decide to never return
    Don't lie about jockin Epi, Papers better and I'm fryin ya best, fag
    Cuz your only lines that are Wit-E, were on that Dialects collab
    You don’t play games, theres no doubt that your gay
    So when you say ‘Fuck Candy Land’
    You just mad User kicked you out of his place
    Dukes my guns is impatient, pleedin to buck herbs
    And make ya so red in the cheeks kids was thinking ya flustered
    My reign is now, ya fake personals aint takin Paper down
    But you’ve bit Monster, Luda, Rudge
    And apparently STILL cant gain a pound
    Its known Cal bites, not a lot, but its better to try it
    Cal Eatin Paper? Only cuz hes so skinny its part of his regular diet
    I'm whorin you, duck for cover when Paper is stormin through
    How you expect to wear the title belt when it weighs more than you?
    ROCK, PAPER, SCISSORS – first off, its a game, keep fixin the tally
    But for now, its me - up against a rock, and a perfect mimic of Cale
    I’m popular, the next champ – see I’m closer to winnin
    Its true people stay on line for Mate
    Like how you meet most of your women

    So uhh .. When you're ranked 9th with an 8-1 record .. How about you leave Resins intro alone pal?
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  8. Donis

    Donis New Member

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    both couldve done more in the wit department. both also had some dope wordplay based ish.


    it looks like papermate tried for the rudge look, but missed. cale went for the ideal look, and hit it a bit more central.



    tough call.


    i think ima go for calefaction on this - but its close as FUCK. really hard to call, but i think cale had a bit of an edge.


    real tough to call, but...

    v - Calefaction.
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  9. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    definitely picked up late, beginning had ok concepts but just werent used right to hit all that hard....the twins and skin lines had dope imagery and were funny as fuck


    cool verse

    um, u guys tally that shit..haha..





    dammmn, i didnt do the math but i know who won


    vote = papermate


    this is one of the better champ matches in RECENT memory, both of you need to come like this every week....damn, props to both, cale's my boy and he def brough heat, just was off setted with some lines that didnt hit ....paper, focused on the weight thing but unlike somebody versus username, fliiiipped each line about that creatively different


    damn, props
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  10. Dat Gangsta

    Dat Gangsta •••••••••••••

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    cale



    U got no chance.. cuz one of U used to be a herb that bites..
    The Second makes my beats N the Third asks me to re-word his lines



    hahah that op[enes up perfectly, peronals and all, feeling it alot



    That's three strikes.. but y'all can bring on the pitches..
    I'll be havin a 'fowl ball' ..... when I swing on these chickens..
    N Q.. lets hope ya friends.. make up for Ur chokin when..
    I let the blade in U N spill ink all over.. like I broke my pen..





    ahhah these again were nice, also the hidden personal.... feeling it




    Lokk ain't that big tho.. ain't that talented, smart.. but Ur cryin..
    ^Cuz U'll be those before Ur eminem.. okay? so stop tryin..
    I'm the wrong vet to try .. a walkin bomb threat..
    In otherwords.. U'll bite the dust.. then try to flip its concepts..





    second was flipped nicely, first wasnt so great, had the edge tho as lokk trys to have the em persona







    Cal's a world above the rest.. these fuckin cats are queer..
    U just made it past orbit.. N Ur about to burn up in the atmosphere..
    Save Ur name.. U can't win.. so try to get the title at a later date..
    Cuz I'm takin down erry forest in Australia so there's no paper..mate





    the orbit was coo, but the second was nice and halarious, it actually made you wanna use the aussie accent







    One of U'll run Ur mouths.. N even Lokk know he talks..
    So I'ma step up wit a board N own 'Vert' like Tony Hawk..
    Ur the wrong combination to get passed this, stop..
    N fuck.. Cal knows the right combination when I master lokk..
    I'm SOOOO the man right.. cuz I'm known to stamp guys..
    Put my hands on Ur neck N Titan so much.. U'd think I own the franchise..





    that last was doope, the own vert was nicely used, wasnt expecting it the master lokk wasnt great tho... but nice







    Awww man.. U had me goin.. pretendin U was tough N all thug..
    So now I'm crushin balls off the tease' like the end of a golf club..







    balls of tease i liked that, becuz it was original, used nicely and tyhe wordplay came through with forcing....







    That means U better hope santa brings protection to U peasents..
    Cuz Cal's known to slay in the snow.. with out the dear or the presents..
    Lokk's a nobody STILL.. N Vert.. Ur nada jack...
    Soo fat.. when I hit U.. Ur skin not only waved.. but holla'd back..





    ahahah at the second.. that slayed in snow wasnt tho, u coulda come with a better approach focker... butt still ahahah at the second


    On the other hand.. Vert's also no one.. cry to me bitch..
    N Lokk's so skinny his ribs ain't just touchin.. they're siamese twins..
    U'll get ate quick.. Fuck U losers.. Cal know shitty rhymes..
    Ur just a carbon copy of Island.. minus User, Aloe N witty lines..





    the siamese was coo, closer killed it.... dope


    paper




    ^ An audio from Cal’s page, for that bitter chick that he likes
    Its funny though
    Didn’t you meet Sammi on a rap internet site?
    And I’d rather look like Marshal Mather’s twin bro
    Than a gay Al Pacino with AIDS whos lackin skin tone






    thje sammi line was haha but that skibn tone wasnt, u tried changin themes / flipping and even adding tone, it never worked....


    Skinny weakling, takin pictures nude with his purse
    Why name yaself Body – If you barely put food in it first
    Dukes, what kinda fool are you thinkin Mate's a loser?
    When your fuckin alias – is also ya pet name for User





    fod line was ok...... and second was coo....

    Its weird, I believe that Cal targets to steal
    Cuz he’s bitin Kabob
    But his skinny ass obviously don’t like barbequed meals
    ITS THE WEEK OF THE 9ths! You know why the shits coolah?
    Cuz it’ll be his 9th win, on his 9th verse, the 9th time he bit Luda






    if ur in the champ battle tyhese madicore lines will not do.... i love ya paper, but seriously, u need to keep it at the same pace or above.. u've dropped/ dropped /' dropped in the last 3 couplet's... all flowing off the tongue, but no thought






    Kid we’ve all heard ya audios, you brag about it in like every verse
    So I hope you do go places someday – and decide to never return
    Don't lie about jockin Epi, Papers better and I'm fryin ya best, fag
    Cuz your only lines that are Wit-E, were on that Dialects collab








    finally a little of the paper weve seen week in and out, dope switch ups, and lines unecpected that keeps every1 smiling..... thw wit-e was nicer






    You don’t play games, theres no doubt that your gay
    So when you say ‘Fuck Candy Land’
    You just mad User kicked you out of his place





    sooooo passay, sorry soooo not to be used here,





    Dukes my guns is impatient, pleedin to buck herbs
    And make ya so red in the cheeks kids was thinking ya flustered
    My reign is now, ya fake personals aint takin Paper down
    But you’ve bit Monster, Luda, Rudge
    And apparently STILL cant gain a pound
    that was a decent flip on the pounds ^..... flustered was a coo simillie but its too obvious.. i aint feeling much of what paper has here..



    Its known Cal bites, not a lot, but its better to try it
    Cal Eatin Paper? Only cuz hes so skinny its part of his regular diet







    ahahah i liked this due to the fact it was original and boasted about his un humanity lmmfao, dope




    I'm whorin you, duck for cover when Paper is stormin through
    How you expect to wear the title belt when it weighs more than you?





    but gawd leave these damn personals out, uve used too many and 1 maybe 2's pulled off






    ROCK, PAPER, SCISSORS – first off, its a game, keep fixin the tally
    But for now, its me - up against a rock, and a perfect mimic of Cale
    I’m popular, the next champ – see I’m closer to winnin
    Its true people stay on line for Mate
    Like how you meet most of your women




    closer was straight, nice... the rock paper scissors wasnt bad.....

    in the end i really felt paper over tried,, or just didnt bring it at all...... i feel he stayed on the same topic faaar too much, didnt have anough versatiltity in his verse with the flare needed, and his originality wasnt up to standards...

    i love paper,ever last part of him.... or one lol..

    but not this week kiko...





    VOTE- cal easily
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  11. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    Cale:
    U got no chance.. cuz one of U used to be a herb that bites..
    The Second makes my beats N the Third asks me to re-word his lines
    ok opener
    That's three strikes.. but y'all can bring on the pitches..
    I'll be havin a 'fowl ball' ..... when I swing on these chickens..
    haha
    N Q.. lets hope ya friends.. make up for Ur chokin when..
    I let the blade in U N spill ink all over.. like I broke my pen..
    cool
    Lokk ain't that big tho.. ain't that talented, smart.. but Ur cryin..
    ^Cuz U'll be those before Ur eminem.. okay? so stop tryin..
    decent personal
    I'm the wrong vet to try .. a walkin bomb threat..
    In otherwords.. U'll bite the dust.. then try to flip its concepts..
    haha
    Cal's a world above the rest.. these fuckin cats are queer..
    U just made it past orbit.. N Ur about to burn up in the atmosphere..
    nice, nice
    Save Ur name.. U can't win.. so try to get the title at a later date..
    Cuz I'm takin down erry forest in Australia so there's no paper..mate
    ohhhhhh, i liked that alot, nice concept cal
    One of U'll run Ur mouths.. N even Lokk know he talks..
    So I'ma step up wit a board N own 'Vert' like Tony Hawk..
    haha!
    Ur the wrong combination to get passed this, stop..
    N fuck.. Cal knows the right combination when I master lokk..
    another nice concept
    I'm SOOOO the man right.. cuz I'm known to stamp guys..
    Put my hands on Ur neck N Titan so much.. U'd think I own the franchise..
    ohhhh!! nice wordplay, love it
    Awww man.. U had me goin.. pretendin U was tough N all thug..
    So now I'm crushin balls off the tease' like the end of a golf club..
    another good concept, nice
    That means U better hope santa brings protection to U peasents..
    Cuz Cal's known to slay in the snow.. with out the dear or the presents..
    nah
    Lokk's a nobody STILL.. N Vert.. Ur nada jack...
    Soo fat.. when I hit U.. Ur skin not only waved.. but holla'd back..
    decent
    On the other hand.. Vert's also no one.. cry to me bitch..
    N Lokk's so skinny his ribs ain't just touchin.. they're siamese twins..
    ahahahahahhaa, dope
    U'll get ate quick.. Fuck U losers.. Cal know shitty rhymes..
    Ur just a carbon copy of Island.. minus User, Aloe N witty lines..
    haha, good closer

    nice verse overall man
    I was feelin alot of the concepts in this one
    was put together nicely
    good shit


    Paper:
    ^ An audio from Cal’s page, for that bitter chick that he likes
    Its funny though
    Didn’t you meet Sammi on a rap internet site?
    ok opener
    And I’d rather look like Marshal Mather’s twin bro
    Than a gay Al Pacino with AIDS whos lackin skin tone
    haha, nice
    Skinny weakling, takin pictures nude with his purse
    Why name yaself Body – If you barely put food in it first
    hmm, i dunno about that one, could've been better
    Dukes, what kinda fool are you thinkin Mate's a loser?
    When your fuckin alias – is also ya pet name for User
    nah
    Its weird, I believe that Cal targets to steal
    Cuz he’s bitin Kabob
    But his skinny ass obviously don’t like barbequed meals
    nah, not feelin it
    ITS THE WEEK OF THE 9ths! You know why the shits coolah?
    Cuz it’ll be his 9th win, on his 9th verse, the 9th time he bit Luda
    haha, decent
    Kid we’ve all heard ya audios, you brag about it in like every verse
    So I hope you do go places someday – and decide to never return
    nah
    Don't lie about jockin Epi, Papers better and I'm fryin ya best, fag
    Cuz your only lines that are Wit-E, were on that Dialects collab
    haha, creative
    You don’t play games, theres no doubt that your gay
    So when you say ‘Fuck Candy Land’
    You just mad User kicked you out of his place
    this was iight
    Dukes my guns is impatient, pleedin to buck herbs
    And make ya so red in the cheeks kids was thinking ya flustered
    ehhh, gun-line
    My reign is now, ya fake personals aint takin Paper down
    But you’ve bit Monster, Luda, Rudge
    And apparently STILL cant gain a pound
    haha, pretty decent personal
    Its known Cal bites, not a lot, but its better to try it
    Cal Eatin Paper? Only cuz hes so skinny its part of his regular diet
    haha
    I'm whorin you, duck for cover when Paper is stormin through
    How you expect to wear the title belt when it weighs more than you?
    ahahaha
    ROCK, PAPER, SCISSORS – first off, its a game, keep fixin the tally
    But for now, its me - up against a rock, and a perfect mimic of Cale
    lol, coo
    I’m popular, the next champ – see I’m closer to winnin
    Its true people stay on line for Mate
    Like how you meet most of your women
    decent ending

    a pretty str8 verse here
    nothing was really stand-outish tho
    had a few nice lines here and there
    I felt that alot of ur lines could've been better
    decent shit tho


    vote=Calefaction

    I felt he had harder/wittier punches and concepts
    he was just more thought out
    paper had his on and off points
    he wasn't as consistent as Cale

    holler.
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  12. Resen

    Resen Do i need a title?

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    calefaction

    got no chance.. cuz one of U used to be a herb that bites..
    The Second makes my beats N the Third asks me to re-word his lines
    ha, cool intro
    That's three strikes.. but y'all can bring on the pitches..
    I'll be havin a 'fowl ball' ..... when I swing on these chickens..
    this was aight
    N Q.. lets hope ya friends.. make up for Ur chokin when..
    I let the blade in U N spill ink all over.. like I broke my pen..
    heh, coo
    Lokk ain't that big tho.. ain't that talented, smart.. but Ur cryin..
    ^Cuz U'll be those before Ur eminem.. okay? so stop tryin..
    cool
    I'm the wrong vet to try .. a walkin bomb threat..
    In otherwords.. U'll bite the dust.. then try to flip its concepts..
    lol, this was nice
    Cal's a world above the rest.. these fuckin cats are queer..
    U just made it past orbit.. N Ur about to burn up in the atmosphere..
    haha, dope
    Save Ur name.. U can't win.. so try to get the title at a later date..
    Cuz I'm takin down erry forest in Australia so there's no paper..mate
    nice
    One of U'll run Ur mouths.. N even Lokk know he talks..
    So I'ma step up wit a board N own 'Vert' like Tony Hawk..
    hahaha, dope
    Ur the wrong combination to get passed this, stop..
    N fuck.. Cal knows the right combination when I master lokk..
    haha, preety coo
    I'm SOOOO the man right.. cuz I'm known to stamp guys..
    Put my hands on Ur neck N Titan so much.. U'd think I own the franchise..
    haha this was dope
    Awww man.. U had me goin.. pretendin U was tough N all thug..
    So now I'm crushin balls off the tease' like the end of a golf club..
    aight, cool
    That means U better hope santa brings protection to U peasents..
    Cuz Cal's known to slay in the snow.. with out the dear or the presents..
    nawww not feelin this
    Lokk's a nobody STILL.. N Vert.. Ur nada jack...
    Soo fat.. when I hit U.. Ur skin not only waved.. but holla'd back..
    lol
    On the other hand.. Vert's also no one.. cry to me bitch..
    N Lokk's so skinny his ribs ain't just touchin.. they're siamese twins..
    hahahaha, nice shit
    U'll get ate quick.. Fuck U losers.. Cal know shitty rhymes..
    Ur just a carbon copy of Island.. minus User, Aloe N witty lines..
    hahaha, dope

    papermate

    ^ An audio from Cal’s page, for that bitter chick that he likes
    Its funny though
    Didn’t you meet Sammi on a rap internet site?
    lol, preety coo
    And I’d rather look like Marshal Mather’s twin bro
    Than a gay Al Pacino with AIDS whos lackin skin tone
    hahaha, nice
    Skinny weakling, takin pictures nude with his purse
    Why name yaself Body – If you barely put food in it first
    ha, cool personal
    Dukes, what kinda fool are you thinkin Mate's a loser?
    When your fuckin alias – is also ya pet name for User
    this was ok
    Its weird, I believe that Cal targets to steal
    Cuz he’s bitin Kabob
    But his skinny ass obviously don’t like barbequed meals
    ok. decent
    ITS THE WEEK OF THE 9ths! You know why the shits coolah?
    Cuz it’ll be his 9th win, on his 9th verse, the 9th time he bit Luda
    lol, nice
    Kid we’ve all heard ya audios, you brag about it in like every verse
    So I hope you do go places someday – and decide to never return
    ok.. not really feelin this
    Don't lie about jockin Epi, Papers better and I'm fryin ya best, fag
    Cuz your only lines that are Wit-E, were on that Dialects collab
    lol, nice
    You don’t play games, theres no doubt that your gay
    So when you say ‘Fuck Candy Land’
    You just mad User kicked you out of his place
    coo
    Dukes my guns is impatient, pleedin to buck herbs
    And make ya so red in the cheeks kids was thinking ya flustered
    ha, coo
    My reign is now, ya fake personals aint takin Paper down
    But you’ve bit Monster, Luda, Rudge
    And apparently STILL cant gain a pound
    hahahaha, this was dope
    Its known Cal bites, not a lot, but its better to try it
    Cal Eatin Paper? Only cuz hes so skinny its part of his regular diet
    ahaha, illness
    I'm whorin you, duck for cover when Paper is stormin through
    How you expect to wear the title belt when it weighs more than you?
    lmao, this was dope
    ROCK, PAPER, SCISSORS – first off, its a game, keep fixin the tally
    But for now, its me - up against a rock, and a perfect mimic of Cale
    dope
    I’m popular, the next champ – see I’m closer to winnin
    Its true people stay on line for Mate
    Like how you meet most of your women
    ha, aight

    this was a really nice battle, both came real nice.. cale came dope through out a couple weak lines in the beginning but the around the end was dope.. papermate had a nice verse but you dissed on his weight to much like everyline was about that so it got boring the beginning was preety weak but the end was dope.. u came nice then weak nice then weak.. so ima give it to cale for consistancy

    vote - calefaction.. dope battle
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  13. Retulen Reactus

    Retulen Reactus Text Legend.

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    Cale, you my boy n all but i think paper won this


    Cale- had some real dope lines, some filler like the key line, but for the most part it was dope, good concepts just didnt come hard enough...

    Paper- hilarious verse. had some filler like cale, but i think the punches that wern't connected better, was a lil more personal and i could tell you wanted this more..

    so
    vote- paper

    both had dope dope verse's good match
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  14. UG MC

    UG MC Captain Zapp Brannagin

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    That means U better hope santa brings protection to U peasents..
    Cuz Cal's known to slay in the snow.. with out the dear or the presents..
    Lokk's a nobody STILL.. N Vert.. Ur nada jack...
    Soo fat.. when I hit U.. Ur skin not only waved.. but holla'd back.
    ^^dopeness

    Both came with dope verses but Cale had the better word play N wittier, fresher concepts

    v- Cale
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  15. Dee-Zy

    Dee-Zy Free Willy!!!

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    U got no chance.. cuz one of U used to be a herb that bites..
    The Second makes my beats N the Third asks me to re-word his lines
    ouch! nice open

    I let the blade in U N spill ink all over.. like I broke my pen..
    nice

    In otherwords.. U'll bite the dust.. then try to flip its concepts..
    LOL

    Cuz I'm takin down erry forest in Australia so there's no paper..mate
    LOL, nice

    Put my hands on Ur neck N Titan so much.. U'd think I own the franchise..
    nice

    Soo fat.. when I hit U.. Ur skin not only waved.. but holla'd back..
    LOL

    N Lokk's so skinny his ribs ain't just touchin.. they're siamese twins..
    LOL

    ---

    ^ An audio from Cal’s page, for that bitter chick that he likes
    Its funny though
    Didn’t you meet Sammi on a rap internet site?
    LOL, OUCH! nice open

    Skinny weakling, takin pictures nude with his purse
    Why name yaself Body – If you barely put food in it first
    nice

    ITS THE WEEK OF THE 9ths! You know why the shits coolah?
    Cuz it’ll be his 9th win, on his 9th verse, the 9th time he bit Luda
    nice

    Cuz your only lines that are Wit-E, were on that Dialects collab
    lol

    You don’t play games, theres no doubt that your gay
    So when you say ‘Fuck Candy Land’
    You just mad User kicked you out of his place
    lol

    But you’ve bit Monster, Luda, Rudge
    And apparently STILL cant gain a pound
    lol

    Cal Eatin Paper? Only cuz hes so skinny its part of his regular diet
    LOL

    How you expect to wear the title belt when it weighs more than you?
    OUCH!

    I’m popular, the next champ – see I’m closer to winnin
    Its true people stay on line for Mate
    Like how you meet most of your women
    OUCH! nice close


    to me it basicly comes down to...

    Cal's open, paper/australia and the holla lines

    Paper's Open, title belt and close.

    Although Paper killed with the open and closer he used alot of skinny lines and to be honest, Cal doesn't look skinny from that pic plus I think Cal was wittier with the wordplay (paper/australia, holla and titan lines)

    vote - Cal edged this out.

    Nice battle though. I think this can go either way.
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  16. Tri Optix

    Tri Optix erator

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    this was the tightest battle Ive seen in weeks..

    Ill be back to vote in a bit.
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  17. Sur*5*ILL

    Sur*5*ILL Kangs

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    Damn...Close Battle....Very Good Showing


    Punches: I'd Say They Were Even...
    Flow: Even
    Wordplay: Body
    Personals: This Aspect Was Tough...I Had To Count...Cal (7) - Paper (9) : Paper
    Appeal: This Was Close...I Just Deducted From The Lines I Didn't Feel...Cal (4) - Paper (7) : Body


    Vote - Calefaction

    Honestly.
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  18. U S E R

    U S E R NON-DOHPE.squad

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    Up' Over No Shows
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  19. Imperial

    Imperial Lex

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    Calefaction:
    U got no chance.. cuz one of U used to be a herb that bites..
    The Second makes my beats N the Third asks me to re-word his lines
    ----nice personal, 3.5/5
    That's three strikes.. but y'all can bring on the pitches..
    I'll be havin a 'fowl ball' ..... when I swing on these chickens..
    ----coo, 3/5
    N Q.. lets hope ya friends.. make up for Ur chokin when..
    I let the blade in U N spill ink all over.. like I broke my pen..
    ----kinda played, but not bad, 1.5/5
    Lokk ain't that big tho.. ain't that talented, smart.. but Ur cryin..
    ^Cuz U'll be those before Ur eminem.. okay? so stop tryin..
    ----aight, 1.5/5
    I'm the wrong vet to try .. a walkin bomb threat..
    In otherwords.. U'll bite the dust.. then try to flip its concepts..
    ----nice, 4/5
    Cal's a world above the rest.. these fuckin cats are queer..
    U just made it past orbit.. N Ur about to burn up in the atmosphere..
    ----pretty nice, 3/5
    Save Ur name.. U can't win.. so try to get the title at a later date..
    Cuz I'm takin down erry forest in Australia so there's no paper..mate
    ----haha, dope, 4.5/5
    One of U'll run Ur mouths.. N even Lokk know he talks..
    So I'ma step up wit a board N own 'Vert' like Tony Hawk..
    ----dope personal, 4.5/5
    Ur the wrong combination to get passed this, stop..
    N fuck.. Cal knows the right combination when I master lokk..
    ----coo personal, 3.5/5
    I'm SOOOO the man right.. cuz I'm known to stamp guys..
    Put my hands on Ur neck N Titan so much.. U'd think I own the franchise..
    ----nice, 4/5
    Awww man.. U had me goin.. pretendin U was tough N all thug..
    So now I'm crushin balls off the tease' like the end of a golf club..
    ----coo wordplay, aight, 2.5/5
    That means U better hope santa brings protection to U peasents..
    Cuz Cal's known to slay in the snow.. with out the dear or the presents..
    ----ehh, 1/5
    Lokk's a nobody STILL.. N Vert.. Ur nada jack...
    Soo fat.. when I hit U.. Ur skin not only waved.. but holla'd back..
    ----LMAO nice, 4/5
    On the other hand.. Vert's also no one.. cry to me bitch..
    N Lokk's so skinny his ribs ain't just touchin.. they're siamese twins..
    ----dope, 4/5
    U'll get ate quick.. Fuck U losers.. Cal know shitty rhymes..
    Ur just a carbon copy of Island.. minus User, Aloe N witty lines..
    ----pretty good closer, 2.5/5

    Flow: 4/5
    Overall: 51/80

    Papermate:
    ^ An audio from Cal’s page, for that bitter chick that he likes
    Its funny though
    Didn’t you meet Sammi on a rap internet site?
    ----decent personal, 2/5
    And I’d rather look like Marshal Mather’s twin bro
    Than a gay Al Pacino with AIDS whos lackin skin tone
    ----coulda been worded betta, but coo, 2/5
    Skinny weakling, takin pictures nude with his purse
    Why name yaself Body – If you barely put food in it first
    ----nice diss, 4/5
    Dukes, what kinda fool are you thinkin Mate's a loser?
    When your fuckin alias – is also ya pet name for User
    ----kinda weak, 1/5
    Its weird, I believe that Cal targets to steal
    Cuz he’s bitin Kabob
    But his skinny ass obviously don’t like barbequed meals
    ----coo personal, 2.5/5
    ITS THE WEEK OF THE 9ths! You know why the shits coolah?
    Cuz it’ll be his 9th win, on his 9th verse, the 9th time he bit Luda
    ----haha, 3.5/5
    Kid we’ve all heard ya audios, you brag about it in like every verse
    So I hope you do go places someday – and decide to never return
    ----dope, 4.5/5
    Don't lie about jockin Epi, Papers better and I'm fryin ya best, fag
    Cuz your only lines that are Wit-E, were on that Dialects collab
    ----seen concept before, but dope flip, 3.5/5
    You don’t play games, theres no doubt that your gay
    So when you say ‘Fuck Candy Land’
    You just mad User kicked you out of his place
    ----aight, 2/5
    Dukes my guns is impatient, pleedin to buck herbs
    And make ya so red in the cheeks kids was thinking ya flustered
    ----ehh, 1/5
    My reign is now, ya fake personals aint takin Paper down
    But you’ve bit Monster, Luda, Rudge
    And apparently STILL cant gain a pound
    ----nice, 4/5
    Its known Cal bites, not a lot, but its better to try it
    Cal Eatin Paper? Only cuz hes so skinny its part of his regular diet
    ----dope, 4/5
    I'm whorin you, duck for cover when Paper is stormin through
    How you expect to wear the title belt when it weighs more than you?
    ----haha, 4/5
    ROCK, PAPER, SCISSORS – first off, its a game, keep fixin the tally
    But for now, its me - up against a rock, and a perfect mimic of Cale
    ----pretty nice, 3.5/5
    I’m popular, the next champ – see I’m closer to winnin
    Its true people stay on line for Mate
    Like how you meet most of your women
    ----wordin coulda been betta, pretty nice, 2/5

    Flow: 4/5
    Overall: 47.5/80

    Came out pretty close, i was really feelin this battle. Cale had a better overall impression on me too, i think he took this. Dope battle yall.

    Vote: Calefaction
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  20. god_son

    god_son Hollow Shellz

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    cale


    U got no chance.. cuz one of U used to be a herb that bites..
    The Second makes my beats N the Third asks me to re-word his lines

    I'm the wrong vet to try .. a walkin bomb threat..
    In otherwords.. U'll bite the dust.. then try to flip its concepts..


    Save Ur name.. U can't win.. so try to get the title at a later date..
    Cuz I'm takin down erry forest in Australia so there's no paper..mate

    One of U'll run Ur mouths.. N even Lokk know he talks..
    So I'ma step up wit a board N own 'Vert' like Tony Hawk..
    Ur the wrong combination to get passed this, stop..
    N fuck.. Cal knows the right combination when I master lokk..
    I'm SOOOO the man right.. cuz I'm known to stamp guys..
    Put my hands on Ur neck N Titan so much.. U'd think I own the franchise..
    Awww man.. U had me goin.. pretendin U was tough N all thug..
    So now I'm crushin balls off the tease' like the end of a golf club..
    That means U better hope santa brings protection to U peasents..
    Cuz Cal's known to slay in the snow.. with out the dear or the presents..
    Lokk's a nobody STILL.. N Vert.. Ur nada jack...
    Soo fat.. when I hit U.. Ur skin not only waved.. but holla'd back..
    On the other hand.. Vert's also no one.. cry to me bitch..
    N Lokk's so skinny his ribs ain't just touchin.. they're siamese twins..
    U'll get ate quick.. Fuck U losers.. Cal know shitty rhymes..
    Ur just a carbon copy of Island.. minus User, Aloe N witty lines..

    most of cale's verse i was feeling

    Paper's verse i was just feeling
    Its known Cal bites, not a lot, but its better to try it
    Cal Eatin Paper? Only cuz hes so skinny its part of his regular diet
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