CHAMPIONSHIP: 1. Calefaction 12-0 Vs. 2. Scientz 12-3 Vs. 3. OneDuh 9-1

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  1. U S E R

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  2. Scientz

    Scientz Im Good Writtens Bitch!

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  3. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    I think those are the rules from the Namix vs. Imperial battle.

    Cale & I agreed on 30
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  4. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    Postin early cuz I'm goin outta town.
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  5. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    First 12 wins was all hype, the streak ends Friday
    The only O in your loss column will begin my name
    That roll you were on's over now, sorry it didn't last
    Now you resemble blacks in movies the way your body's in a cast
    I know, you'll cum & defeat me.. I should NOT test your text
    But still the voters'll say "O won", ^ like when those concepts were fresh
    Not yet a vet, so don't front like your lines are the best
    When they're harder to follow,
    then the ones drunks walk for sobriety tests
    You've won alot in the past, but I hope you're focused to win this
    Cuz lately.. your only win was makin the voters lose.. interest
    Forget Gucci or Prada, that aint where Cale gets threads from
    Shit, the only thing he ever seems to wear out's his welcome
    These other two won't bring flames, what would Duh lie for?
    So in the heat of the battle, well.. is just my verse
    I can't fault you for your frailness, see Cale.. it's cool
    If I let User smash for 2 months, I'd be that thin too
    Beat that shit? fool.. that's easily done
    He didn't bat around the idea of winning, instead I.deal beat him with one
    Got people believin in One, ^Sci was hopin I didn't diss em'
    But that cutting edge idea left him open for criticism
    Stop hypin him up like he's the best at this rap shit
    Cuz if Scientz is Raw I must be a whole semester of classes
    Sci didn't post his links last week, I coulda won on my own if..
    I stayed pullin bitch moves, like my other opponent
    I own shit, why you even show in the first place duke?
    Usually I got Cal more shook up than earthquakes do
    Back to the other fag, you winnin this is not in sight kid
    Aint takin risks, if I say here goes nothin.. he started typin
    Here's what it all boils down to, quit tellin kids ya shit's hot
    Your name's Scientz & you still don't possess the elements of hip hop

    Gimme my fuckin title.
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  6. LeX__RuGaR

    LeX__RuGaR G0D

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    Take It To Hook-Ups

    -Inkwell
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  7. Scientz

    Scientz Im Good Writtens Bitch!

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    i coulda sworn the limit on 3-way battles was 20 lines...

    to oneduh/mr ego...and cale/killa blaze/mr. body

    i know yall heard bout cale's mom's pictures on the net...bwahahaha

    i got a riddle for ya...
    what do u drink outta?? thats found at any bar???
    the answer is A cup, like the size ya mothers titties are
    peep her breasts, i seen plenty chests that were curved
    but thats utter disrespect, cuz there r cow titties better than hers
    H20 stops fire, thats the realest phrase
    so ya moms broke her water 5 months early, to try n Killa Blaze
    net gangsta, talkin thug cuz it makes ya raps neat
    but u werent concieved in the hood,
    it was more like the back seat
    this aint monopoly, u'll be drowned n found in a bag
    somewhere close to the atlantic,
    like marvin gardens n ventnor ave
    oneduh's wack, but i guess heads feel the shit he yells
    but if i counted down-falls,
    he'd make the one in niagara look like a wishing well
    u kids always removing votes, n i'll stress that its foul
    but if gore had ur talents, bush wouldnt be president now
    cale's a disaster, i'll be quick to tell this herbs fate
    i'll shift the plates in his head,
    till his brain has a fuckin earthquake
    dont do drugs, or drink alcohol, n have the safest sex
    those damage the body over time,
    but he'll be murdered before they take effect
    i dont respect ya verses, everybody needs to know
    ya wack wack wack wack wack,
    ......like that ender u had a few weeks ago
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  8. Calefaction

    Calefaction The Lone Wolf

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    Oneduh aka unsigned hype aka fabolous jr. and scientz aka unsigned hype jr.

    Mr. Ego = Shitty alias, Scientz.. its a good thing Ur not or U gotta be messin..
    I WIN BY SKILL..
    ..shit I LOST dick riders when they found out Mr. Body aint Resin..

    which means..

    Both of U dudes needa drop gems before laughter is blurted..
    Cuz if U drop normal shit U'll lose to the comments before N after my verses..
    Sci's a poor bitch but a bboy at heart its blatant N true..
    So since Ur mom dont care.. she lets him break on his roof..
    I've done paid my dues N still got cash so pardon my sport..
    But when comparin banks sci's, his always comes up carlton short..
    U know I'll swing on U kid.. best be forgettin the stiches..
    Cuz I'll hit Sci N break his mug, glass jaw N the rest of the dishes..
    I'm boss of this camp.. I'm tellin U, his talk is just amped..
    Cuz a mod helped One get here so he can say he lost to the champ..
    Suckin dick to be popular... the rumors are true in the cypha..
    One aims to please so anthraxspits N swallows if he likes ya..
    Unsigned hype eh? tell me.. why would U boast those writs..
    It'd make me oneduh about U.. but I dont do that homo shit.
    Even now with denyin' -- I used numbers N equations..
    To figure out how to be gay N -- got it down to a scientz..
    I know U tryina find dirt on me.. Ur scopin N frantic..
    No matter the news.. Cal's known to drop sci's like a hopeless romantic..
    Sliiiiick homie, In highschool U was the chiiiiick homie, I'm too serious..
    Everyone knows Ur twice the bitch.. Scientz was usualy two periods..
    Ur both scared of my fists N I know U hate the curb..
    I floss a lot..
    .. Ur so THIN on •••els <--they thought it was a racial slurr..
    I'll get nice wit guns, cock N explode wit the hot finger..
    N leave USH at the front of the ER like the pop singer..
    1 last thing one..
    Ur punches, if User wrote over a third of ya swings then he needs..
    A verse written by more Ghosts than the Return of the King to beat me..
    One's a jack ass N so are his verses.. but I'm not worried in the worst way..
    He's still not pushin his chances as much sci is pushin his wordplay..

    Now go throw the same punches EVERYONE else does, only stretch it completely..
    And Hype, we coo but start writin for yourself for the first time..
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  9. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    Oneduh:
    First 12 wins was all hype, the streak ends Friday
    The only O in your loss column will begin my name
    heh, decent opener
    That roll you were on's over now, sorry it didn't last
    Now you resemble blacks in movies the way your body's in a cast
    played concept, cool flip tho
    I know, you'll cum & defeat me.. I should NOT test your text
    But still the voters'll say "O won", ^ like when those concepts were fresh
    bwahaha..nice
    Not yet a vet, so don't front like your lines are the best
    When they're harder to follow,
    then the ones drunks walk for sobriety tests
    haha, dope concept
    You've won alot in the past, but I hope you're focused to win this
    Cuz lately.. your only win was makin the voters lose.. interest
    another nice concept
    Forget Gucci or Prada, that aint where Cale gets threads from
    Shit, the only thing he ever seems to wear out's his welcome
    bwahaha, nice shit
    These other two won't bring flames, what would Duh lie for?
    So in the heat of the battle, well.. is just my verse
    ehh
    I can't fault you for your frailness, see Cale.. it's cool
    If I let User smash for 2 months, I'd be that thin too
    haha, nice personal
    Beat that shit? fool.. that's easily done
    He didn't bat around the idea of winning, instead I.deal beat him with one
    ehh, kinda forced, cool idea tho
    Got people believin in One, ^Sci was hopin I didn't diss em'
    But that cutting edge idea left him open for criticism
    bwahaha, dope
    Stop hypin him up like he's the best at this rap shit
    Cuz if Scientz is Raw I must be a whole semester of classes
    lol, cool
    Sci didn't post his links last week, I coulda won on my own if..
    I stayed pullin bitch moves, like my other opponent
    ehh, filler
    I own shit, why you even show in the first place duke?
    Usually I got Cal more shook up than earthquakes do
    haha, cool nameplay
    Back to the other fag, you winnin this is not in sight kid
    Aint takin risks, if I say here goes nothin.. he started typin
    bwahaha DOPE
    Here's what it all boils down to, quit tellin kids ya shit's hot
    Your name's Scientz & you still don't possess the elements of hip hop
    nah, not a good closer

    overall it was a pretty dope verse
    u had some nice concepts
    u only had like 5 or 6 couplets that I didn't like
    the rest was good tho


    Scientz:
    i got a riddle for ya...
    what do u drink outta?? thats found at any bar???
    the answer is A cup, like the size ya mothers titties are
    haha, cool open
    peep her breasts, i seen plenty chests that were curved
    but thats utter disrespect, cuz there r cow titties better than hers
    lmao
    H20 stops fire, thats the realest phrase
    so ya moms broke her water 5 months early, to try n Killa Blaze
    haha, cool concept
    net gangsta, talkin thug cuz it makes ya raps neat
    but u werent concieved in the hood,
    it was more like the back seat
    bwahahaha, niiiice
    this aint monopoly, u'll be drowned n found in a bag
    somewhere close to the atlantic,
    like marvin gardens n ventnor ave
    ehhh
    oneduh's wack, but i guess heads feel the shit he yells
    but if i counted down-falls,
    he'd make the one in niagara look like a wishing well
    haha
    u kids always removing votes, n i'll stress that its foul
    but if gore had ur talents, bush wouldnt be president now
    nah
    cale's a disaster, i'll be quick to tell this herbs fate
    i'll shift the plates in his head,
    till his brain has a fuckin earthquake
    ehh, decent concept
    dont do drugs, or drink alcohol, n have the safest sex
    those damage the body over time,
    but he'll be murdered before they take effect
    haha, nice aliasplay
    i dont respect ya verses, everybody needs to know
    ya wack wack wack wack wack,
    ......like that ender u had a few weeks ago
    ehh, ok closer

    not a bad verse here either
    had some nice concepts here and there
    u had like 5 couplets I didn't like
    the rest was cool
    overall it was a good verse


    Calefaction:
    Both of U dudes needa drop gems before laughter is blurted..
    Cuz if U drop normal shit U'll lose to the comments before N after my verses..
    ehh, decent opener
    Sci's a poor bitch but a bboy at heart its blatant N true..
    So since Ur mom dont care.. she lets him break on his roof..
    haha, I think u meant *her roof, that's dope if u did
    I've done paid my dues N still got cash so pardon my sport..
    But when comparin banks sci's, his always comes up carlton short..
    ahaha, sci's = size.. dope wordplay and nameplay
    U know I'll swing on U kid.. best be forgettin the stiches..
    Cuz I'll hit Sci N break his mug, glass jaw N the rest of the dishes..
    nah
    I'm boss of this camp.. I'm tellin U, his talk is just amped..
    Cuz a mod helped One get here so he can say he lost to the champ..
    haha, nice personal there, *cough*user*cough* lol
    Suckin dick to be popular... the rumors are true in the cypha..
    One aims to please so anthraxspits N swallows if he likes ya..
    ehh, decent
    Unsigned hype eh? tell me.. why would U boast those writs..
    It'd make me oneduh about U.. but I dont do that homo shit.
    haha, cool nameplay
    Even now with denyin' -- I used numbers N equations..
    To figure out how to be gay N -- got it down to a scientz..
    nah
    I know U tryina find dirt on me.. Ur scopin N frantic..
    No matter the news.. Cal's known to drop sci's like a hopeless romantic..
    ahaha, nice shit
    Sliiiiick homie, In highschool U was the chiiiiick homie, I'm too serious..
    Everyone knows Ur twice the bitch.. Scientz was usualy two periods..
    decent
    Ur both scared of my fists N I know U hate the curb..
    I floss a lot..
    .. Ur so THIN on •••els <--they thought it was a racial slurr..
    haha, cool concept
    I'll get nice wit guns, cock N explode wit the hot finger..
    N leave USH at the front of the ER like the pop singer..
    nah
    1 last thing one..
    Ur punches, if User wrote over a third of ya swings then he needs..
    A verse written by more Ghosts than the Return of the King to beat me..
    bwahahaha, nice personal
    One's a jack ass N so are his verses.. but I'm not worried in the worst way..
    He's still not pushin his chances as much sci is pushin his wordplay..
    decent ending

    overall it was a pretty cool verse
    u had like 6 or 7 couplets I didn't like
    but the rest was good tho


    this shit is real close
    all had their share of lines that I didn't like
    and their share of lines that I did like
    all 3 basically went line for line in this shit
    it's a hard decision
    but I think I'ma haveta give this shit to oneduh
    scientz had his share of dope lines
    and so did cale
    but oneduh had more lines that I liked
    this was a very nice battle tho
    I had to re-read like twice and then break it down too

    props to all 3.

    vote = oneduh


    holla.
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  10. Tri Optix

    Tri Optix erator

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    Oneduh= Nothing. Not hatin, but I didnt see anything in your verse that stood out as championship material..

    Scientz=Dope..once you got past all the momma jokes there was some tight punches..your flaw I think being that you really rely on your punches..hopefully you havent pigeon-holed yourself.

    Cale= I think al most lost it...until I sawhopeless romantic line and the 2 period line...

    Shit was definaetly closer then the last few weeks..

    But Cale edged it out again...

    Vote=Cale

    2nd=Scientz

    3rd=Oneduh


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  11. Vember

    Vember New Member

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    Oneduh=whole verse was boring cept for the Drunk line, which was good, i was bored outta my mind with the rest tho, nothing special

    Scientz=monopoly line was creative, Tha momma jokes was ight, seen the cow play before of course, but the middle to end was nice and the most consistent of the 3, I liked tha niagra falls line too, had some nice ones

    Cale=some of yours was as boring as One's, had Good ones every now and then, and then just had bullshit thats like 'watever'.

    U know I'll swing on U kid.. best be forgettin the stiches..
    Cuz I'll hit Sci N break his mug, glass jaw N the rest of the dishes..

    Seriously, i told this to One when he used this as well as everyone else, THIS STYLE IS OVER, ITS BEEN USED TOO MANY TIMES, let it die, this was a major negative

    2 periods line, no, looks like youre tryin to be creative, but no-scientz was always 2 periods,wtf, no it wasnt.....

    end was just okay, Usher/popsinger one was terrible, looked like you rushed on ya verse to me puttin that shit in, idk

    Scientz ender was not felt at all,lol, its just like you was thinkin "letz get this over with, i dont wanna think of a creative ending"

    dont do drugs, or drink alcohol, n have the safest sex
    those damage the body over time,
    but he'll be murdered before they take effect

    this was a nice str8 at him punch

    Scientz and cale were tied, but alot of cale's were terrible and boring, which took away from his good punches too much, where as i was not once bored with scientz's nor did he have any bad punches
    sol..........

    V/Scientz
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  12. Klobb

    Klobb PAV

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    Oneduh..

    I know, you'll cum & defeat me.. I should NOT test your text
    But still the voters'll say "O won", ^ like when those concepts were fresh
    Forget Gucci or Prada, that aint where Cale gets threads from
    Shit, the only thing he ever seems to wear out's his welcome
    Got people believin in One, ^Sci was hopin I didn't diss em'
    But that cutting edge idea left him open for criticism
    Stop hypin him up like he's the best at this rap shit
    Cuz if Scientz is Raw I must be a whole semester of classes
    Back to the other fag, you winnin this is not in sight kid
    Aint takin risks, if I say here goes nothin.. he started typin

    Science..
    i got a riddle for ya...
    what do u drink outta?? thats found at any bar???
    the answer is A cup, like the size ya mothers titties are
    peep her breasts, i seen plenty chests that were curved
    but thats utter disrespect, cuz there r cow titties better than hers
    net gangsta, talkin thug cuz it makes ya raps neat
    but u werent concieved in the hood,
    it was more like the back seat
    oneduh's wack, but i guess heads feel the shit he yells
    but if i counted down-falls,
    he'd make the one in niagara look like a wishing well

    Cale..
    Unsigned hype eh? tell me.. why would U boast those writs..
    It'd make me oneduh about U.. but I dont do that homo shit.
    Sliiiiick homie, In highschool U was the chiiiiick homie, I'm too serious..
    Everyone knows Ur twice the bitch.. Scientz was usualy two periods..

    1st- onedah
    2nd- science
    3rd- cale

    Oneduh and Science were basically the same, both had dope verses, but Ima go with oneduh, I felt he edged it out, and I dont think cale was up to hang with one and sci.. I wasnt feelin much of his verse, Some lines were stretched others were not hard hitting..
    Blah..
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  13. Calefaction

    Calefaction The Lone Wolf

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    scientz WAS 2 periods, normal class/lab..

    GO TO SCHOOL

    and if you fucktards can't read lines, dont vote
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  14. Unanimous

    Unanimous akabetterthanyou

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    Oneduh's Best Lines:
    1. "Stop hypin him up like he's the best at this rap shit
    Cuz if Scientz is Raw I must be a whole semester of classes"--Decent
    2."That roll you were on's over now, sorry it didn't last
    Now you resemble blacks in movies the way your body's in a cast"--ok i guess kinda stretched
    3."Back to the other fag, you winnin this is not in sight kid
    Aint takin risks, if I say here goes nothin.. he started typin"--umm i dunno yeah decent


    Scientz Best Lines:
    1."H20 stops fire, thats the realest phrase
    so ya moms broke her water 5 months early, to try n Killa Blaze"--Funny
    2. "this aint monopoly, u'll be drowned n found in a bag
    somewhere close to the atlantic,
    like marvin gardens n ventnor ave"--i have a sore spot for monopoly not bad kid
    3. "dont do drugs, or drink alcohol, n have the safest sex
    those damage the body over time,
    but he'll be murdered before they take effect"--nice nice
    4. "oneduh's wack, but i guess heads feel the shit he yells
    but if i counted down-falls,
    he'd make the one in niagara look like a wishing well"--very creative very nice


    Cales Best lines:
    1."I've done paid my dues N still got cash so pardon my sport..
    But when comparin banks sci's, his always comes up carlton short.."--kinda funny
    2. "1 last thing one..
    Ur punches, if User wrote over a third of ya swings then he needs..
    A verse written by more Ghosts than the Return of the King to beat me.."--nice


    Overall a decent battle, some personals went over my head, that aint my fault. Some real creative concepts and original lines.

    But after all becasue of his ability to flip concepts i havent seen, a little bit more funny, just hit me as a better verse.


    I vote Scientz.

    Good battle guys
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  15. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    Wtf happened to 16 lines?

    Anyway...

    ONEDUH
    Pretty unimpressive, especially for a championship match. If you dont like my review, feel free to make a verse saying your better than me, if it makes you feel better. I wasnt feeling much of anything in your verse, nothing new, or creative, just a bunch of old concept punches....alot of which were played.

    SCIENTZ

    As of right now I definitely got scientz taking this easily. he had some ORIGINAL punches, and creative ideas. He also did a shared concept much better.

    CALEFACTION

    Lines be long....
    Anyway, seems like your throwing the same type punches everyone else is. Verse was aight...

    Vote Scientz
    2nd if it matters is CALE
    3rd is oneduh and his boring played concept punches
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  16. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    For the record...at my school we had block scheduling, so all classes including science were 80 minutes...aka 2 periods
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  17. Scales

    Scales I hold weight here

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    vote=Cale..

    ....because no one else wants him to be champ anymore
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  18. Tethus

    Tethus straight up jerkoff

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    real dop battle playa's. this was one of the better matches bc it showed the top 3 text battlers in the rbl.

    Oneduh: Good verse, your flow was tight but i dont think you got really personal with your two opponents and had some really played lines in there, seemed like one of my verses.

    Scientz- real dope verse, i been peeping your stuff and i really like your style and punches, after reading your verse i was really confident that you were going to win

    Calefaction- and then i read his. Straight up fire. When i read verses imo i want to see people going at eachothers neck and that is what Calefaction did. His flow was extremely good and his punches were really thought out, it seemed hejust spent more time on his verse, but i guess that's why he is undefeated


    vote calefaction
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  19. the_faculty

    the_faculty New Member

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    this battle was close throughout the whole match

    Oneduh had a consistent verse with pretty good punches...
    Owon line was cool, opener was decent.
    sci came dope, but I was not feeling the first 4 bars at all
    the monopoly and killa blaze lines were hot...
    Cal had a few played punches but I felt most of them more than the others
    ghost line was raw, scientz two periods, down to a scientz...

    definitely close
    I think sci and one cam equal.
    but cal edged it out

    vote - calefaction
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  20. Knucklez!

    Knucklez! New Member

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    vote - scientz.

    i got bored halfway into the verses, but dragged on.

    wtf.. this was WAY too long.

    either way, all three verses were coo and had their good punches.. but i think scientz edged it out with his creativity, and wittyness.
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