CHAMPIONSHIP!: 1. Calefaction 11-0 Vs. 2. Vern Acular 9-2

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  1. U S E R

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  2. Vern Acular

    Vern Acular 12x RSTL Champ

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    30's the magic number
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  3. Calefaction

    Calefaction The Lone Wolf

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    speakin of 30.. the anticipation of 12-0 couldnt' wait..

    Vern Acular aka Can't beat me cuz I actualy show

    I gotta say U suck at audio.. N on mics the notion is true..
    Cuz these lines here are the ONLY time I'd have to open for U..
    I took a trip N got mad cuz dude is a dork..
    So I put VA in the dust as soon as I left for New York..
    Slicin ya lungs.. Ur horrible Vern so stop denyin it son..
    Ur verse got so many holes.. they found sadam hiding in one..
    I bruise emcees wit ease.. N I was soon to see..
    That Ur verse was such ass.. I thought Ur lines were moonin' me..
    U ugly so postin Ur pic woulda took might N steal poise..
    Cuz off the boards he's pinnochio.. makin ink look like a real boy..
    This ain't the RSTL.. N I'm not Ur pal, Ur ass kid..
    Cuz if it was Ur topic would be: Write about how U lost to Calefaction..
    Face it this battles lost dude.. I dont care if U flossin too..
    Sure Ur in a class of Ur own with a helmet on N someone wipin drool offa U..
    This fuckin asian wanted to gimme back rubs.. for that I'm glad to punk ya..
    Flip script.. I'm usin pins, needles, knives N swords to leave Vern Acu'punctured..
    I'm sayin.. fuck this kid cuz he's gettin raped.. its very true..
    So watch me take this V........................N pop his cherry too..
    Like I told namix.. I know Ur punches.. Ur a non-creative vet man..
    I know cuz Ur verses get less flashed smiles than my moms webcam..
    Ur a flamin' homo son.. my advice.. stop callin Cale..
    U did.. now U beg UserName to go with U to touch balls in alleys..
    Skip the drama.. Cal's known to lay pricks to graves..
    U was always a mommas boy.. that's why U dates chicks her age..
    U think I'm gassed N U'll beat me.. but again, that's homo..
    Being that Ur last four big wins were all against no shows..
    Bitch thought he was under-rated.. until this shit drops..
    Now ya see..
    Verns so bad he could stage an attack and still not get props..
    Give up homie or let me deliver the hate..
    Ur text is wack wack wack wack wack wack wack wack wack wack wack wack .. like what the ugly stick did to Ur face..

    I'd say sorry.. but that'd be the first time I lied in the post.. good luck
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  4. Vern Acular

    Vern Acular 12x RSTL Champ

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    Mr. Body aka Calefaction aka Status aka Tom Ruffino


    let's put an end to the beef Cal...how's bout we empty the skillet
    i see you've held the belt for a while now...cause your just to skinny to fit
    so please, simply forget it and stop with the small talk
    cause i've Outlined your future and the topics are all chalk
    you've wandered a long walk but it's your final day as we speak
    cause after this your Record'll have all 1's like Michaels latest release
    title wave in the street'll wash away your chance to win and remove
    so how you gonna Curb your enthusiasm when the landlord's kicking you to it
    this kid is just stupid, you're hardly dope so tell your dickriders to charter hope
    cause cal's about to throw in the towel...a wash cloth, shampoo, and a bar of soap
    his heart was broke but IMO the cause was for wack reasons
    "i really did wanna son you Tom"...but then i'd have to calim you at tax season
    we're past even, your fame's sinking, and im quick to counter your punches
    and i wont call you poor white trash...even that's out of your budget
    you doubting me cousin, well grats on your nephew but i hate you faggot
    claimed you were an Uncle Tom, but it just proves you're confused of your racial Status
    face the ballots, im getting votes and forced to laugh at your opinion
    cause i'll win by not posting my links...OH! and i'll ask for an extension
    it had to all be mentioned - im Inked Well when they - rate our verses
    but let me State my purpose - and say Cal's the first - to Map for re-position
    your wacness is efficient plus you structure and style's lacking
    and now that reading your verse is suicide i guess we're all gonna die laughing
    we know you lie, act, N, cheat i mean hell, i wouldn't wanna lose either
    but when you said you went on Strike, it shocked me to see you shit on your crew leader
    dudes either a pimp or plain desperate, the slums or hollywood
    cause i heard he hit Angelic's Dairy-air...and milk does a Body good
    i know i prolly shouldn't brag but i dissed him cause i know
    VA's WAAAAAAAAAAY out of CAL's league...district and time zone
    your rhymes blow...it's over with...and yes your family's been Exposed from this
    for those that dont know...
    Cal likes to show his Ass on the net...and his Mother just shows her Tits


    props on the little run you had...
    but at least you can say you lost to your mentor...

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  5. LDogg The King

    LDogg The King The High Life

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    cal still holds this... both came ok i guess.. vern seemed to stay more consistant but a lot of the shit was kinda boring me. the lines i did like from vern were

    i know i prolly shouldn't brag but i dissed him cause i know
    VA's WAAAAAAAAAAY out of CAL's league...district and time zone

    "i really did wanna son you Tom"...but then i'd have to calim you at tax season

    but when you said you went on Strike, it shocked me to see you shit on your crew leader

    so how you gonna Curb your enthusiasm when the landlord's kicking you to it


    cal's shit read like he did some shit an then came back to it a few days later an started more.. its was kinda sorted out.. these lines i liked:


    Ur verse got so many holes.. they found sadam hiding in one..

    Flip script.. I'm usin pins, needles, knives N swords to leave Vern Acu'punctured..

    Cuz these lines here are the ONLY time I'd have to open for U..

    ....


    more of cals shit kept my interest.

    vote cal.
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  6. Mr. Skull

    Mr. Skull G.T.P.

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    Vote-Calefaction

    I liked the V/Cherry line, and the opening for you line, but the wack line is what one it for you. Very consistent verse. Work on your setups tho keep it consistent too

    Vern had a nice verse that would've beat most in here but your verse was up and down, I did like your opener and a couple others in your verse. Keep this up yo and you'll be back here if you don't win. be Easy

    Good battle yo
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  7. Retulen Reactus

    Retulen Reactus Text Legend.

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    vote- cale

    vern, best verse ive seen from you, but it wasnt enough
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  8. Vern Acular

    Vern Acular 12x RSTL Champ

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    if it matters my first couplet the second line is supposed to say too skiny to fit (it)...i just didn't type it in...
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  9. Dustin Urize

    Dustin Urize 2 DOPE 4 U

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    I took a trip N got mad cuz dude is a dork..
    So I put VA in the dust as soon as I left for New York
    Slicin ya lungs.. Ur horrible Vern so stop denyin it son..
    Ur verse got so many holes.. they found sadam hiding in one..
    I bruise emcees wit ease.. N I was soon to see..
    That Ur verse was such ass.. I thought Ur lines were moonin' me..

    ^^this whole part was fire

    ya verse started off real hot.. but after the lines i quoted u had some decent shit but nothing eye popping like them 6 lines.. kool flow, some creative shit.. but i feel you half assed the last portion of your verse

    let's put an end to the beef Cal...how's bout we empty the skillet
    i see you've held the belt for a while now...cause your just to skinny to fit it

    ^^nice opener lol

    we're past even, your fame's sinking, and im quick to counter your punches
    and i wont call you poor white trash...even that's out of your budget

    haha feelin this

    title wave in the street'll wash away your chance to win and remove it
    so how you gonna Curb your enthusiasm when the landlord's kicking you to it
    this kid is just stupid, you're hardly dope so tell your dickriders to charter hope
    cause cal's about to throw in the towel...a wash cloth, shampoo, and a bar of soap

    hot 4 bars here
    your wacness is efficient plus you structure and style's lacking
    and now that reading your verse is suicide i guess we're all gonna die laughing
    we know you lie, act, N, cheat i mean hell, i wouldn't wanna lose either
    but when you said you went on Strike, it shocked me to see you shit on your crew leader

    lol hittin him hard wit the personals in this verse



    you had some shit that didnt quit hit too, but u defenitely came more consistant and had a better flow.. the punches were of equal caliber but vern had more quotables.. he also took the personals area of this battle too, basically if cale woulda kept goin how he started off he woulda had a better chance to take it but vern packed more punch per bar

    vote-vern
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  10. Kilometerz

    Kilometerz Active Member

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    Cale - Nice consistent set of punches every couple bars...and u had some pretty dope multis in there to fix it all off...i was feelin the "Leave VA in the dust" line.....i was also feelin that verse is such ass/moonin me line...shit was dope

    Vernacular - u had a pretty cool verse as well...i was feelin that throwin in the toiwel line...i love lines like that for some reason lol...u had a few others that were nice...but not quite quotables....

    heres how i see it

    punches - Cale
    Personals - Cale
    Overall - Cale

    ^^ all these were very close......but not quite enough for verbacular to take it....

    so........

    Vote - Cale
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  11. Scales

    Scales I hold weight here

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    im glad i have a wide computer screen to see all those stretched lines...


    vote-cal...

    only because his stretched lines had better punches em'
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  12. Vern Acular

    Vern Acular 12x RSTL Champ

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    *runs and cries*

    props cal...just make sure you post links i wouldn't wanna win by default
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  13. Jury Duty

    Jury Duty New Member

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    vote- Vern

    I jus liked Verns verse more, cal had some cool name plays n what not, but Verns verse jus had my attention a little more..dope battle tho..pz
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  14. Fatal Words

    Fatal Words .........

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    vote- Cal

    Dope battle here, I like both styles and both had dope punches but cal's verse was just more internest and it had my attention a lil more but vern dropped some flames..just wanst enough.

    this is what a championship battle suppose to be. pz
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  15. Calefaction

    Calefaction The Lone Wolf

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  16. vote - calefaction.

    i just feel he came much much harder than vern.. i was feeling his punches more more as well.

    the acupuntured line was dope, too.
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  17. QuicK SyllaBle

    QuicK SyllaBle New Member

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    ya lets all be cool and vote for cale....but i dont wanna be cool.....vote=vern......it was a pretty much even battle except the middle part of cales verse...most boring shit i read in awhile, especially for a champ.....vern was more consistant with harder punches....vote=vern
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  18. Vern Acular

    Vern Acular 12x RSTL Champ

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    i didn't see scales nor retulen in the ranks unless there alias...

    so that would make 5-3...

    or 7-3 if they are signed in under alias...
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  19. namix

    namix u flip shit, i refine it

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    Calefaction

    Vern Acular aka Can't beat me cuz I actualy show

    I gotta say U suck at audio.. N on mics the notion is true..
    Cuz these lines here are the ONLY time I'd have to open for U..
    --cool opener, relevent, and personal as far as i know..

    I took a trip N got mad cuz dude is a dork..
    So I put VA in the dust as soon as I left for New York..
    --ehh, it was ok, nothing too special here, but not bad either, prolly more personal than i know..

    Slicin ya lungs.. Ur horrible Vern so stop denyin it son..
    Ur verse got so many holes.. they found sadam hiding in one..
    ---lol, well, the sadam thing got soooo damn played out soooo fast, but i read your verses early on and i know you were one of the earlier kids to flip it, so i definately liked this, funny stuff..

    I bruise emcees wit ease.. N I was soon to see..
    That Ur verse was such ass.. I thought Ur lines were moonin' me..
    ---heh, it made me laugh but this was a lil corny i thought hommie..

    U ugly so postin Ur pic woulda took might N steal poise..
    Cuz off the boards he's pinnochio.. makin ink look like a real boy..
    ---aiight aiight, pretty funny

    This ain't the RSTL.. N I'm not Ur pal, Ur ass kid..
    Cuz if it was Ur topic would be: Write about how U lost to Calefaction..
    ---lol, gettin personal with it still, good stuff.. sorta saw it comming, but funny nonetheless

    Face it this battles lost dude.. I dont care if U flossin too..
    Sure Ur in a class of Ur own with a helmet on N someone wipin drool offa U..
    ---hah, nice flip to the retarded concept...

    This fuckin asian wanted to gimme back rubs.. for that I'm glad to punk ya..
    Flip script.. I'm usin pins, needles, knives N swords to leave Vern Acu'punctured..
    ---pretty cool, maybe a lil stretched for nameplay, but maybe not lol.. i liked it..

    I'm sayin.. fuck this kid cuz he's gettin raped.. its very true..
    So watch me take this V........................N pop his cherry too..
    ---aiight, cool concept, i think you could have elaborated off it a lil more to make it more like 'surprising' or something.. but it was coo

    Like I told namix.. I know Ur punches.. Ur a non-creative vet man..
    I know cuz Ur verses get less flashed smiles than my moms webcam..
    ...hey, whats that supposed to mean lol.. but haha@ the punch, creative 'ish

    Ur a flamin' homo son.. my advice.. stop callin Cale..
    U did.. now U beg UserName to go with U to touch balls in alleys..
    --word.. stayin on the personal tip i s'pose, i wasnt feeling this one too much tho..

    Skip the drama.. Cal's known to lay pricks to graves..
    U was always a mommas boy.. that's why U dates chicks her age..
    ----haha, niceness..

    U think I'm gassed N U'll beat me.. but again, that's homo..
    Being that Ur last four big wins were all against no shows..
    ---grill slap if thats true.. damn, is that really true? lol

    Bitch thought he was under-rated.. until this shit drops..
    Now ya see..
    Verns so bad he could stage an attack and still not get props..
    ---lol dope man, at first i thought this was gonna just be a stage/prop flip and i was thinkin blah, but stage an attack was cool, made it a dope punch..

    Give up homie or let me deliver the hate..
    Ur text is wack wack wack wack wack wack wack wack wack wack wack wack .. like what the ugly stick did to Ur face..
    ....hahhah, that was the funniest line of the battle to me (i have read this already), niceness, perfect for a closer.. Overall: good read partna.. you had a few reaaal stand out lines, some nice ones, a couple ok lines... to be real i dont think you came as nice as you did last week, but maybe thats just cuz you were battling me lol.. i dunno.. still a good read, props..

    __________________


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  20. namix

    namix u flip shit, i refine it

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    continued..

    Vern Acular


    let's put an end to the beef Cal...how's bout we empty the skillet
    i see you've held the belt for a while now...cause your just to skinny to fit
    ---lol, that was funny.. i know skinny lines are 'played', but i dont give a shit, if their funny their funny.. nice start... i think you could have worded it slightly better hommie, but its all good, cool idea

    so please, simply forget it and stop with the small talk
    cause i've Outlined your future and the topics are all chalk
    ----ehhh, this was ok.. i see what your getting at obviously with outlining his body with chalk, but i just dont think this was really a good flip to the concept.. it almost seemed conceptually choppy to me.. i dont know what it is..

    you've wandered a long walk but it's your final day as we speak
    cause after this your Record'll have all 1's like Michaels latest release
    ---ahhh, this was creative.. definately fresh, but i really dont think it was all that hard hitting in the end.. almost any flip to a michael jackson punch can only be soooooo strong you know? lol

    title wave in the street'll wash away your chance to win and remove
    so how you gonna Curb your enthusiasm when the landlord's kicking you to it
    ---haha, dopeness, that definatelly made me laugh, that show is hilarious as fug too.. your flow isnt that consistent all the time playa, the last couple bars had been nice, with final-day-as-we-speak michaels-latest-release, and what not but sometimes u sorta fuck it up, like win and remove, kicking you to it, (or did you not want an 'it' there') im not sure.. anyway, still cool punch man

    this kid is just stupid, you're hardly dope so tell your dickriders to charter hope
    cause cal's about to throw in the towel...a wash cloth, shampoo, and a bar of soap
    ----woooooooooh, no way hommie.. i HATE these punches, unless their flipped like INCREDIBLY ill.. i think they are so played, weak and easy to think up.. at best this was an average punch for this style.. very predictable tho, you know?

    his heart was broke but IMO the cause was for wack reasons
    "i really did wanna son you Tom"...but then i'd have to calim you at tax season
    ---pretty cool.. one of the better 'son' punches i have seen in a minute.. i dug it..

    we're past even, your fame's sinking, and im quick to counter your punches
    and i wont call you poor white trash...even that's out of your budget
    ---hah, pretty nice, your picking it back up again here, i liked it..

    you doubting me cousin, well grats on your nephew but i hate you faggot
    claimed you were an Uncle Tom, but it just proves you're confused of your racial Status
    ----well, i used an uncle tom line last week on him, so i wasnt feeling it as much, you had a pretty cool hit with it by including Status, i bet alot of kids woulda overlooked it tho.. i liked it overall still

    face the ballots, im getting votes and forced to laugh at your opinion
    cause i'll win by not posting my links...OH! and i'll ask for an extension
    ---naaaawww man.. he said last week 'ill beat nam so bad i could ask for 3 or 4 extensions'.... so i reaaaaaaaaaally wasnt feeling this at all man.. i have seen the link thing a couple times.. this is a very played concept, but you DID have nice wording with it..

    it had to all be mentioned - im Inked Well when they - rate our verses
    but let me State my purpose - and say Cal's the first - to Map for re-position
    ----this rhymescheme never flies well with me in text because its not what we 'anticipate' so we almost have to reread it to catch the flow.. and to be honest your lines are sooo long that i would stear clear of this scheme because you litereally have ALOT of words between mentioned and position and they didnt rhyme alll to well as it was.. so your flow was sorta crazy.. but pretty coo punch.. alot in it.. nothing too hard hitting, but definately nice complexity in it..

    your wacness is efficient plus you structure and style's lacking
    and now that reading your verse is suicide i guess we're all gonna die laughing
    ---this has been flipped alot, but not in suicide way, just die laughing.. so i was still sorta feeling it.. cool bar

    we know you lie, act, N, cheat i mean hell, i wouldn't wanna lose either
    but when you said you went on Strike, it shocked me to see you shit on your crew leader
    ---hehe, i liked this alot actually.. your lines are getting a little long tho sometimes man..

    dudes either a pimp or plain desperate, the slums or hollywood
    cause i heard he hit Angelic's Dairy-air...and milk does a Body good
    ---haha, word up man.. i was trying to think of a Body/milk line but i couldnt quite pull it off, you did, i thought this was one of your better personal-tinged punches, nice shit..

    i know i prolly shouldn't brag but i dissed him cause i know
    VA's WAAAAAAAAAAY out of CAL's league...district and time zone
    --aiight..... his VA thing sorta made this alil less interesting, but you actually had a nicer flip on it in the light that you both have state names.. i liked this punch as a whole, cool stuff brotha

    your rhymes blow...it's over with...and yes your family's been Exposed from this
    for those that dont know...
    Cal likes to show his Ass on the net...and his Mother just shows her Tits
    .....hah, i dont know what to believe in battles, but that is pretty funny eitherway.. you have very subtle complexity in your verses.. i see the topicalist in you.. ie- just "exposed' in the setup' and what not.. overall: nice verse man, i liked it.. you came out swinging, and DID have some nice personals, nice nameplays... You had a couple real hard hitters, but several lines that were just a lil played or weak hommie.. I dont know what it is, sometimes your concepts were fire, but your wording was just not strong enuf.. and your lines were a bit long too (mine normally are as well, so i can relate doggy lol).. but nice showing bro..



    Vote- Cal

    Why? wow, to be honest this was even closer once i broke the verses down... It really came down to consistency though.. i feel like vern WANTED this more, he gets muh props for sure because he came out with some effort (not that Cal didnt), but it was just evident in the personals and what not.. Cal just had a nonchaulant consistent, and nice verse.. whereas vern was a stroooooong hit and a stroooooooong miss, as hopefully evident by my breakdown.. sorry for getting at this so late fella's... good showing for sure... vern came nice ya'll..
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