Champ Match: 1. IAmBent (1-0) vs 2. Breathlesss (1-0)

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  1. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    RULES & REGULATIONS

    DEADLINES

    [01] - The deadline to check into your battle is Wednesday at 11:59 PST. The deadline for verses is Friday @ 11:59pm PST.
    [02] - There are absolutely NO extensions under any circumstances. For this reason, It is unnecessary to request extensions. I apologize in advance.
    [03] - The deadline for voting is Sunday @ 11:59am PST.​

    VOTING

    [04] - You must post at least 5 valid voting links within your match. If there are less than 5 battles available to vote on, you must vote on all available battles.
    [05] - Within those 5 links, you must be sure to vote on both the Championship and Contender matches.
    [06] - Votes must be at least 2 full lines of feedback per competitor followed by the competitor's name in which you choose to vote for.
    [07] - Voting a tie result is deemed a failure to vote.
    [08] - Voting links must be posted in your battle thread with the Champ and Contender matches labeled clearly. Failure to post your links will result in a DQ. It is not our responsibility to make sure you voted.
    [09] - Votes changed after 1 hour of posting will be deemed a failure to vote.
    [10] - Voting is open to current participants, past champions, and active RBL moderators ONLY. Specifically, vote under the name that you signed in under, please.​

    VERSES

    [11] - All verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 40 lines. Any breach of line limit must be agreed upon by both competitors prior to a verse being posted. Failure to comply will result in an automatic forfeit by all failing parties.
    [12] - An agreement of a line limit will serve as the maximum allowed; competitors are allowed to post under an agreed limit, but never over. An agreement is not required. Upon failure to agree to a line limit, the second competitor is thereby required to meet the limit set by the first competitor to post.
    [13] - You must not edit your verse once your opponent has posted, who in turn must not edit their verse after the first vote is cast.​

    MISCELLANEOUS RULES

    [14] - All chatter is to remain in the Lounge, that is it's purpose. Under no circumstance are you to post a useless post in a battle thread. Section 14a,b define useless posts.

    [14a] - Contestants are allowed exactly three posts in their thread: a check in, a verse and voting links. Any extraneous posts will forfeit a vote each (1 extra post = -1 vote, 2 extra = -2 votes...).

    [14b] - Non-contestants are allowed a single post, that is, their vote. Any post that is not a vote will also lose a vote at a one-to-one rate.

    Good luck, gentleman.
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  2. breathlesss

    breathlesss Registered Sex Offender

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    Check, lol, champ match... Me? Really?
    Going at least 12, less than 24, do what you do though
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  3. IAmBenT

    IAmBenT Eat a dick, faggot

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    checcin in wtf champ match? ?? Lol
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  4. breathlesss

    breathlesss Registered Sex Offender

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    four five six, think it goes like that, nah, it's more like this

    Somehow Brown Jesus stuck me in the second spot of the champ match, odd
    I bet ya must be feelin' hella lucky, the mod's jacked on that damn pot,
    twelve twenty one twenty twelve is over, even yer post total is three sevens
    and everyone knows only a no show is what would not beat breathless

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    let this be a reminder, don't ever scoff or cast doubt
    judgin' by your last round, you'd be better off to back down,
    and hold it, don't blow yer lid, charged with all that weapon talk,
    keep ya cap calm, it's hard to imagine that Bent has fought
    on the streets, kid, I'm NeverSoft... Go ask mom

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    i bet you have gentle thoughts beneath that horrorcore shell
    never connectin em, might as well end lines with or, or, or...well, what you weightyng four?
    i'm just assuming you'd be sounding like a human seal hybrid
    can't get personal since your profile's empty, it's stupid, real nice Bent
    I should know who I'm battling, you're no newb, but feels like it
    c'mon man, I mean, you signed up a couple few weeks before i did
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  5. IAmBenT

    IAmBenT Eat a dick, faggot

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    Look, "breathless",....

    I'm astonished cuz, to be honest, I feel extra great../
    After all.... it's not everyday you get to take the league's Breath away/
    Let me explicate: I'll take this belt, its not an aggravated necklace/
    For this choker - He's the only bitch who's masturbated breathless/
    What a Joker, Imma pull your card just to START the game/
    Broke ya Back like Heath to Jake so you'll never fart the same/
    I'm the Bane of Lansing rappers, call me MC Buckeye/
    I don't have to know you're homo to tell you suck, guy/
    You on that faggot shit, paid low wage to handle packages/
    I don't need a Blade to slice this Night Stocker into bandages*/

    This explains why you can barely string a rhyme together/
    The Only Tough Text You Type... would have to be in tiny letters//

    You couldn't win this Hands-down if it was Twister, Mister/
    Coudn't swing a sick punch if your fucking fist was blistered/

    You're best bet is CC Mixter, to get BEAT more freely than this,/
    You're gonna need a breather, after this ether.. a 'Win'd is easy to miss./

    I'm the Champ, my royal 'aides' will leave you dyin as a homo/
    The closest you'll get to the crown..
    ... is if I feed you to the Lion in the Logo./




    *Blade was a member of the Night Stalkers in Marvel Comics FYI
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  6. Envy

    Envy Song Writer / Artist.

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    Iah, this was pretty straight forward - IamBent got it with better punches and flow though some of the name flips were a little forced and a few lines that were cringeworthy (really? brokeback mountain, fart the same?) he had a few lines that made me laugh.

    To me, overall breathless' stuff wasn't that great - it was a little choppy and some of it was just badly written.

    V/Bent.
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  7. Brown Recluse

    Brown Recluse Hermit, no crabs

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    breathless, these bars were dope:

    can't get personal since your profile's empty, it's stupid, real nice Bent
    I should know who I'm battling, you're no newb, but feels like it
    c'mon man, I mean, you signed up a couple few weeks before i did

    breathless, these bars I wasn't feeling so much:

    and everyone knows only a no show is what would not beat breathless
    on the streets, kid, I'm NeverSoft... Go ask mom

    IAmBenT, these bars were dope:

    I'm astonished cuz, to be honest, I feel extra great../
    After all.... it's not everyday you get to take the league's Breath away/
    You couldn't win this Hands-down if it was Twister, Mister/

    IAmBenT, these bars I wasn't feeling so much:

    Broke ya Back like Heath to Jake so you'll never fart the same/ (whoo...horrid)
    I don't have to know you're homo to tell you suck, guy/

    My vote is for: breathless

    Notes:

    Both emcees had a few dope lines. They both also had typos which made things a bit confusing...but the homosexual bars from IAmBenT lost it for him IMO.
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  8. SonnyDaze

    SonnyDaze 7 train heavyweight

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    Breathlesss: Your verse was all over the place, but your punches didn't do much for me. The 1984 punch had me :hoffawut: -definitely could've been worded better. Your "cast doubt/better off to back down" lines were your best in my opinion.

    IAmBent: This verse had some good stuff going on. The big text-little text line was my favorite. Some of the references/wordplay didn't fit perfectly to me, but it didn't take too much away from the verse.

    This battle came down to who could construct a punch and who couldn't.

    Vote: IAmBent
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  9. Chris Phoenix

    Chris Phoenix New Member

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    Not sure if I'm allowed to vote yet. I signed up for this upcoming week. I haven't done this in YEARS... so forgive me if I'm not following a rule.

    Breathless was decent. Lines were a little long and didn't hit too hard for me.

    This one seemed backwards. "and everyone knows only a no show is what would not beat breathless". I could be reading it wrong. but then again.. i shouldn't have to read that deep into this line. Feels like a double negative.

    Bent's verse felt like a better verse overall. Had some good punches. I enjoyed reading most of it.

    "After all.... it's not everyday you get to take the league's Breath away/". Nice way to open up a verse. Not really uberly-clever since you have to expect a "breath away" line..... but it was worded nicely. I liked the "tiny text" visual.

    Respect to both, just giving honest opinion here.

    Vote - bent.
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  10. breathlesss

    breathlesss Registered Sex Offender

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    Yea, your vote won't count after Sunday night, the new week should be up by now. I guess brown Jesus has went missing in action

    That line was meant exactly how it was put, last year I was the joke of the league, I rarely no showed so I actually ended up having the most wins on record, I think I was up to 30 some losses, actually had em change my loss total to an infinity sign
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  11. Chris Phoenix

    Chris Phoenix New Member

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    Cool. Well... good thing my vote don't count lol.
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