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  1. TeKneeK

    TeKneeK The Heart and Soul of RM

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    THE CYPHER COLLABO II

    If you are going to participate this week to earn a win in here, here is your opponent:

    01. Nique 2-0
    02. Ace the Prophet 3-0

    03. TeKneeK 3-0
    04. Burd 1-0

    05. MeNTiLL PoET 1-0
    06. Scatterboxx 2-0

    07. Bonnie Bathory 1-0
    08. Headless Verseman 2-0

    09. Dsp2k5 2-0
    10. NOBLE SOLDIER 2-1

    11. Blitz_Krieg 0-1
    12. Master Peace 1-1

    13. Formal Logic 0-1
    14. :pain: 1-2

    15. ForeShadow 0-1
    16. T.a.C. 0-2

    17. -Wordplay-
    18. Hush! 0-1

    19. Rem Lynxis 1-1
    20. Urizen

    21. T-Loc
    22. Cormier

    23. Cereal_killer
    24. Jook

    25. Worst Enemy
    26. 3-Planes

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    - You are posting on here to arrange your rhyme with everyone elses on this thread to create one giant cypher verse.

    - If you participate you MUST vote on the matches of everyone else that posts their verse! After tallying the votes at the end, the winner will be announced as to who earns the extra win to their record!

    - LINE LIMITS: 8-20 Bars

    - VERSES DUE: Friday - 9:30pm PACIFIC/12:30am EASTERN
    - VOTES DUE Sunday - 9:30PM PACIFIC/12:30am EASTERN


    THE CYPHER TOPIC

    Wu-tang Clan -- Triumph
    [youtube]qQfVte5nfg0[/youtube]

    THE INTRO LYRICS:

    [Inspectah Deck]

    I bomb atomically, Socrates' philosophies
    and hypothesis can't define how I be droppin these
    mockeries, lyrically perform armed robbery
    Flee with the lottery, possibly they spotted me
    Battle-scarred shogun, explosion when my pen hits
    tremendous, ultra-violet shine blind forensics
    I inspect you, through the future see millenium
    Killa B's sold fifty gold sixty platinum
    Shacklin the masses with drastic rap tactics
    Graphic displays melt the steel like blacksmiths
    Black Wu jackets queen B's ease the guns in
    Rumble with patrolmen, tear gas laced the function
    Heads by the score take flight incite a war
    Chicks hit the floor, diehard fans demand more
    Behold the bold soldier, control the globe slowly
    Proceeds to blow swingin swords like Shinobi
    Stomp grounds and pound footprints in solid rock
    Wu got it locked, performin live on your hottest block

    [Insert Your Rhyme Here]
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  2. .:Pain:.

    .:Pain:. Futurely J. Keeper

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    I'll start it again...

    Iller than a quarantined kid, I breath germs,
    Yea I'm spillin' like a forty for kids that eat dirt,
    If you got that, baby then pop that,
    I'm bringin' the block back, with every single avian drop rap,
    Cuz shittin' on these bitches ain't nothin' to me,
    I just fly over top of these punks in the breeze,
    Fuckin' with me? I keep a blade in my right hand,
    Have you lookin' like you got shaved by a blind man,
    Get it? Got it? Keep 'em locked in your brainstem,
    Before I pop shots, use this glock to display them,
    Your mainframe wrecked, I'm comin' out of the box,
    Only to be reborn as a powerful God,
    The way I'm ridin' the grooves brings violence in twos,
    Two guns, two shots, two eyelids to glue,
    Too bad your boys weren't tryin' it too,
    I was lookin' forward to gettin' mind from a duece,
    You ain't merkin' me, no thuggin', just stop,
    Cuz you ain't Hercules, so don't fuck with a God,
    So go ahead, try bein' fly with that pimp shit,
    Cuz beatin' me son, is like climbin' Olympus...
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  3. T-LoC

    T-LoC The Truth

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    even the simplest sentence gets lost in the trenches..
    a judge behind benches gets seduced by the mistress.
    of words.. and it hurts, so absurd to get played by verbs..
    blocking nerves like herb-reduced like aids germs
    stay firm- like nasty nas taking blue pills.. its blue steel--
    destroying goals like a loop to shaquille- oneal..
    you're gonna feel the affect- what we instill in your neck
    seems to be concealed in this deck- for the thrill I expect
    to check like inspectah- If you come correct I may let ya..
    invest a little time within these lines of my chest a
    heart is caressed by the best of an emcee with passion..
    if you simply imagine.. me jabbin this mic in your abdomen..
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  4. Master Peace

    Master Peace coolest nigga yo mama kno

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    My flows dramatically challenging to the soul on hold for some truth
    Peace’s name ring bells from the church to the booth
    Been on game watching the streets like a sleuth
    Lyrically I manifest into a King from a peasant of youth
    My presence is true, I’m the definition of real
    Swinging my pen like Excalibur with my pad as the shield
    No stone can hold the steel that I wield
    Take no prisoners, I hunt to kill rappers with no mercy to yield
    To all those that oppose a fair warning…
    My squad lives relentless wit no mention or notice of when the storm is
    So if it’s down better up rise your guard
    My pen chin check faggots on or off wax who thinkin they hard
    Make a move and I charge then reak havoc till it’s clear ta ya
    My camp aint scared we’ll campain through ya area
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  5. -Wordplay-

    -Wordplay- New Member

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    the imperial lyrical miracle thats known for crushin mineralz
    killer flow sting like african killer bees, fuk a killer thats is cereal!
    no one has the agony to battle me and my killer anotomy
    to beat word dont word a verse, blue print a strategy
    i shoot thangs at those niggaz who think they killas who bang
    i carry duel thangs that sting frames so u taste the triumph of wu tang
    f** what you fools bang my lyrics get u addicted slowly
    like coke, weed, dope, speed and the others that prose greed
    i own this game and u know this aint nothin cuz this flow is sane
    dont make me inject my killer bee stings with a overdose of novacane!
    ya whole flow is lame so listen to what im spitten so deadly
    drop you bleedn heathens n the pacific and convert it to the red sea!
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  6. Ace the Prophet

    Ace the Prophet A Prophet to the Game

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    Protect ya heads as my suspense interjects
    Infects, intersects, and double crosses intellects
    As I expect to direct these chills into your neck
    Tappin’ spinal cords to ensure you feel a threat!
    Projected as the best like, “Who’s left to contest?”
    Cuz the hardest motherfuckers need a pill to keep erect
    So show respect, what the fuck’d you handicapped folks expect?
    There’s not a single gimpy ass flow of your’s I won’t deflect!
    Or lyrically dissect, it’s clear I don’t digress
    Bold enough to let you shoot a bullet through my chest
    And die next within The Prophecy
    That stands subconsciously on top of these philosophical hypocrisies!​
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  7. Cormier

    Cormier Member

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    Unstoppable, incomparable, spitting with no rival
    Shit is getting tribal; throats slit, there’s no revival
    This killer bee hive will bring a sting to the masses
    Rewind time to when the blind saw through rose-colored glasses
    Get your passes ready; set, go for the ride of your life
    Stung by a tongue, double edged like the sides of my knife
    Eyes on the prize of the fight that you’ve been ducking
    Ripped apart because your heart has no passion, it defends nothing
    Men bluffing, clutching for what they shouldn’t reach
    Colors getting duller, but still they couldn’t bleach
    Out my whole clout, I tout what you don’t know about
    Flowing mouth bestows a drought, it’s third-eyes I’m poking out
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  8. dsp2k5

    dsp2k5 Dime Sack Pimp

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    Dont know what to tell him, but you better have protection
    they rush in my direction when i get the mic and start wreckin'
    the truth is detected when i let it rip
    roll solo, thats a lesson kid, F the blood, F the crips
    go where i want but i stay playin' defense
    drop ya in the water tied to a weight off da deep end
    Whose the Master? Like the dude on The Last Dragon
    too chicken to come out his crib, then I'll drag him
    slap him wit his chic laughin'
    ruin their relationship, they'll never get past it
    face it, im the best there is
    give ya one chance to admit it till this weapon clicks
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  9. Ayo. Noble's a'beast kid, best believe't..
    My case succed'd, while yours b'n plead'd..
    Wu need'd top notch, so they reach'd da cealing..
    All that heat'ya feel'n, its'da opposite of'healing..
    Off ya feet kneeling, Praying fa'forgiveness..
    Now its'ya image and its'fuck'n horrendous..
    A verbal menace like dennis was on the boards..
    Punchline swords impale u'before u hit the awards..
    A mission to destroy all the weak speak below me..
    And there will be no 2nd chances, you aint Nancy Pelosi..
    End this wit'a quickness, so I'can get back t'business..
    Its a final decision, come back'round and'im'a get vicious..
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  10. Blitz_krieg

    Blitz_krieg SAY WHA.........

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    its the Verbal minnace smokin erbs drinkN Guinnes
    Looking for a opponet to back and fourth with like Tennise
    From start to finish your skills get diminished
    ill pertrude through your premise with out catchin a blemish
    But these "peeps" keep forgettin im not spitten a deep written
    but this unrehearsed verse still abuse these kittens like cheap mittens
    this is sleep shittin on hataz ..typin with one eye open
    no hype man.. just the spoken word leavin mics broken
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  11. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    so far corm and noble are the only one's even close to being on beat, lol...pains start was on then faded off,
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  12. UneekTestimony

    UneekTestimony New Member

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    I don't even think people write on beat, lol. They just try to mesh well with the verse while completely ignoring the beat part. I'm editing in a verse. Which in the end, completely misses the point of these youtube additions.
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  13. Bonnie Bathory

    Bonnie Bathory New Member

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    Damn yall, whats so hard about writing to the beat given? Yall on dialup or something? LOL

    Edit: Actually... I duno what Headless is reading but it seems to me like most people are on beat, lol

    [I will insert collab verse here later]
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  14. .:Pain:.

    .:Pain:. Futurely J. Keeper

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    Ya'll jokin'?

    I wish I had a mic so I can show exactly how ferocious my flow was on that verse.

    If you can't make that verse flow, then you have no flow, because that was one of the simplest flow patterns I use...
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  15. Master Peace

    Master Peace coolest nigga yo mama kno

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    Co-sign.... you muthafuckas got some nerve talkin shit about how off beat we are when it's clear none of you can hear how we spit it to the instrumental. You clowns are just talkin out cha asses guessin how we spit to the beat. You muafuckas do the cypher folk a favor and miss us wit that bullshit
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  16. T-LoC

    T-LoC The Truth

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    forreal... thats why i stopped coming on here.. motha fucka's think because they cant find the rhyme scheme that its not there...

    its funny that every verse on here.. i can spit over that beat.. yall rap at all? or just write lyrics?
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  17. Bonnie Bathory

    Bonnie Bathory New Member

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    wow... shit a brick about it
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  18. Master Peace

    Master Peace coolest nigga yo mama kno

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    I mean it ain't that deep Bonnie but the I could say the same bullshit about the same people who claim we don't write on beat. Its double sided is all I'm sayin
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  19. .:Pain:.

    .:Pain:. Futurely J. Keeper

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    lol I'd put my John Hancock on that fuckin' statement. Sometimes I just don't know about ya'll...
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  20. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    pain, you started on beat. then fell off in parts.


    and master peace wasnt even close, sorry. but that dude is buggin
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